Success with Writing
  Online Workshop
 Part 3: Paragraphs

Created by: Jane Mangano
Moving on... Perfect paragraphs
• In the task box, write a few sentences
  answering this question: What is a paragraph?
• This should take you about three minutes.
Perfect Paragraph
• “A paragraph is a group of related sentences
  that discuss one (and usually only one) main
  idea. A paragraph can be as short as one
  sentence or as long as ten sentences. The
  number of sentences is unimportant;
  however, the paragraph should be long
  enough to develop the main idea clearly.”
  (Oshima & Hogue, 2006, p 2)
Perfect Paragraph
•   A paragraph has three parts.
•   Topic sentence
•   Supporting sentences
•   Concluding sentence – be careful here.
    Sometimes the final supporting sentence
    provides a sense of closure for the paragraph.
Go back to your sentence
• ‘A successful student is organised, intelligent
  and motivated.’
• Use that sentence as your topic sentence.
Writing a paragraph
• Take the three attributes (organised,
  intelligent and motivated) and write one
  sentence on each of them.
• Put it all together and you will have written a
  paragraph!
• Spend some time proofreading and editing,
  until you have the ‘perfect paragraph’.
• This should take about 15 minutes.
Checklist
Do all of your support sentences support the
 topic sentence with evidence and/or
 examples?
Are all of your sentences correctly structured?
Is the meaning clear?
Have you included information that is not
 relevant?
Did your paragraph look like this?
• A successful student is organised, intelligent and
  motivated. The student who is organised
  usually follows a time management plan that
  helps the student complete work on time. Being
  intelligent helps the student understand the
  complex content of each unit of study. A sense
  of motivation assists the student to follow the
  time management plan, and make the most of
  the intelligence with which he or she has been
  gifted.
Your Turn
• Choose one of the topic sentences from the
  next slide.
• Brainstorm until you have three points that
  directly support the topic sentence.
• Write one sentence on each point.
• Write a concluding sentence.
• This will take about 20 minutes.
• Write this in the task box.
Possible Topic Sentences
Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness.
                       OR
Signing up for tutorials and lectures can be a
frustrating experience for university students.

N.B. Remember, you only have to pick one
topic sentence, and then write one paragraph.
Checklist
Do all of your support sentences support the
 topic sentence with evidence and/or
 examples?
Are all of your sentences correctly structured?
Is the meaning clear?
Have you included information that is not
 relevant?
Congratulations!
• You have completed the first part of the
  Success with Writing online workshop
• I would suggest you take a break of about 15
  minutes before continuing.
End of Part 3

Please ensure you have completed
each of the tasks in section 3
online.

Writing 3 paragraphs

  • 1.
    Success with Writing Online Workshop Part 3: Paragraphs Created by: Jane Mangano
  • 2.
    Moving on... Perfectparagraphs • In the task box, write a few sentences answering this question: What is a paragraph? • This should take you about three minutes.
  • 3.
    Perfect Paragraph • “Aparagraph is a group of related sentences that discuss one (and usually only one) main idea. A paragraph can be as short as one sentence or as long as ten sentences. The number of sentences is unimportant; however, the paragraph should be long enough to develop the main idea clearly.” (Oshima & Hogue, 2006, p 2)
  • 4.
    Perfect Paragraph • A paragraph has three parts. • Topic sentence • Supporting sentences • Concluding sentence – be careful here. Sometimes the final supporting sentence provides a sense of closure for the paragraph.
  • 5.
    Go back toyour sentence • ‘A successful student is organised, intelligent and motivated.’ • Use that sentence as your topic sentence.
  • 6.
    Writing a paragraph •Take the three attributes (organised, intelligent and motivated) and write one sentence on each of them. • Put it all together and you will have written a paragraph! • Spend some time proofreading and editing, until you have the ‘perfect paragraph’. • This should take about 15 minutes.
  • 7.
    Checklist Do all ofyour support sentences support the topic sentence with evidence and/or examples? Are all of your sentences correctly structured? Is the meaning clear? Have you included information that is not relevant?
  • 8.
    Did your paragraphlook like this? • A successful student is organised, intelligent and motivated. The student who is organised usually follows a time management plan that helps the student complete work on time. Being intelligent helps the student understand the complex content of each unit of study. A sense of motivation assists the student to follow the time management plan, and make the most of the intelligence with which he or she has been gifted.
  • 9.
    Your Turn • Chooseone of the topic sentences from the next slide. • Brainstorm until you have three points that directly support the topic sentence. • Write one sentence on each point. • Write a concluding sentence. • This will take about 20 minutes. • Write this in the task box.
  • 10.
    Possible Topic Sentences Drivingon freeways requires skill and alertness. OR Signing up for tutorials and lectures can be a frustrating experience for university students. N.B. Remember, you only have to pick one topic sentence, and then write one paragraph.
  • 11.
    Checklist Do all ofyour support sentences support the topic sentence with evidence and/or examples? Are all of your sentences correctly structured? Is the meaning clear? Have you included information that is not relevant?
  • 12.
    Congratulations! • You havecompleted the first part of the Success with Writing online workshop • I would suggest you take a break of about 15 minutes before continuing.
  • 13.
    End of Part3 Please ensure you have completed each of the tasks in section 3 online.