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Weak Thesis
Strong Thesis
Prof. Maury Brown
Germanna Community
College
A thesis (aka Claim) is the
single summary of your
argument
•   Announces your stance
•   Announces how you will argue it
I claim this! I
                                                           stake this
                                                            position!




                                 Claim                           OPINION
FACT
                              (Argument)
                                (Thesis)
A Claim cannot be a fact; it cannot be mere opinion. It resides between the two.
It USES the facts to SUPPORT an opinion.
A Claim cannot be a question  it must state something. It is where the author
puts forth his/her argument , boldly, with confidence this is MINE. And then
you prove it.
Magic Thesis Sentence
A    strong thesis generally has three parts:
 A.  Topic
 B. Stance
 C. Reasons/Significance/Solution
 For example:
 All pets except those used for breeding (A)
 should be spayed or neutered by 6 months of
 age (B) in order to control the pet population
 (C).
Toward a more perfect thesis
 Broad  Topic: Sugar consumption.
 Specific Topic: Reducing sugar
  consumption in elementary school
  children.
 Stance: More attention should be paid to
  the food and beverage choices available
  to elementary school children.
 Fact/Support: Experts estimate that half of
  elementary school children consume nine
  times the recommended daily allowance
  of sugar.
Put them all together to make
a three-part thesis or claim
 Since   half of all American elementary
  school children consume nine times the
  recommended daily allowance of
  sugar, schools should be required to serve
  or sell only healthy alternatives in their
  cafeterias or drink machines in order to
  reduce sugar consumption by students.
 (e.g. water, unflavored milk, 100% juice
  options with no added sweeteners)
Weak Thesis -> Strong Thesis
 Take   a stand!
    Weak: “There are some negative and
     positive aspects to the Banana Herb Tea
     Supplement.”
    Strong: Banana Herb Tea Supplement
     promotes rapid weight loss that results in the
     loss of muscle and lean body mass, posing
     a potential danger to consumers.
Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis
 Justify   discussion!
     Weak: “My family is an extended family.”
     Strong: “While most Americans would view
      marriage among relatives to be a threat to
      the nuclear family structure, many Iranian
      families, like my own, believe that these
      arranged marriages help reinforce kinship
      ties in an extended family.”
Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis
 Expresses   only one main idea!
     Weak: Companies need to exploit the
      marketing potential of the Internet, and
      Web pages can provide both advertising
      and customer support.
     Strong: The Internet is filled with tremendous
      marketing potential which companies
      should exploit through Web pages that
      offer both advertising and customer
      support.
Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis
 Is   specific!
      Weak: World hunger has many causes and
       effects.
      Strong: Hunger persists in Glandelinia
       because jobs are scare and farming in the
       infertile soil is rarely profitable.
You can switch the order of
the three parts:
   All pets except those used for breeding (A) should
    be spayed or neutered by 6 months of age (B) in
    order to control the pet population (C). OR
   To control the pet population (C), all pets
    except those used for breeding (A) should be
    spayed or neutered by 6 months of age(B).
    OR
   Spaying or neutering(B) of all pets 6 months of
    age or younger that are not used for breeding
    (A) should be mandatory(B) in order to
    control the pet population (C).
Practice!
 Move   from topic to question to thesis
  statement.
 Improve the thesis by making more
  specific, relevant, arguable, and strong.
 Seek reasons for your opinions.
 Seek evidence to support your reasons
  and prove your thesis.

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Weak thesis strong thesis

  • 1. Weak Thesis Strong Thesis Prof. Maury Brown Germanna Community College
  • 2. A thesis (aka Claim) is the single summary of your argument • Announces your stance • Announces how you will argue it
  • 3. I claim this! I stake this position! Claim OPINION FACT (Argument) (Thesis) A Claim cannot be a fact; it cannot be mere opinion. It resides between the two. It USES the facts to SUPPORT an opinion. A Claim cannot be a question  it must state something. It is where the author puts forth his/her argument , boldly, with confidence this is MINE. And then you prove it.
  • 4. Magic Thesis Sentence A strong thesis generally has three parts: A. Topic B. Stance C. Reasons/Significance/Solution For example: All pets except those used for breeding (A) should be spayed or neutered by 6 months of age (B) in order to control the pet population (C).
  • 5. Toward a more perfect thesis  Broad Topic: Sugar consumption.  Specific Topic: Reducing sugar consumption in elementary school children.  Stance: More attention should be paid to the food and beverage choices available to elementary school children.  Fact/Support: Experts estimate that half of elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar.
  • 6. Put them all together to make a three-part thesis or claim  Since half of all American elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar, schools should be required to serve or sell only healthy alternatives in their cafeterias or drink machines in order to reduce sugar consumption by students.  (e.g. water, unflavored milk, 100% juice options with no added sweeteners)
  • 7. Weak Thesis -> Strong Thesis  Take a stand!  Weak: “There are some negative and positive aspects to the Banana Herb Tea Supplement.”  Strong: Banana Herb Tea Supplement promotes rapid weight loss that results in the loss of muscle and lean body mass, posing a potential danger to consumers.
  • 8. Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis  Justify discussion!  Weak: “My family is an extended family.”  Strong: “While most Americans would view marriage among relatives to be a threat to the nuclear family structure, many Iranian families, like my own, believe that these arranged marriages help reinforce kinship ties in an extended family.”
  • 9. Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis  Expresses only one main idea!  Weak: Companies need to exploit the marketing potential of the Internet, and Web pages can provide both advertising and customer support.  Strong: The Internet is filled with tremendous marketing potential which companies should exploit through Web pages that offer both advertising and customer support.
  • 10. Weak Thesis  Strong Thesis  Is specific!  Weak: World hunger has many causes and effects.  Strong: Hunger persists in Glandelinia because jobs are scare and farming in the infertile soil is rarely profitable.
  • 11. You can switch the order of the three parts:  All pets except those used for breeding (A) should be spayed or neutered by 6 months of age (B) in order to control the pet population (C). OR  To control the pet population (C), all pets except those used for breeding (A) should be spayed or neutered by 6 months of age(B). OR  Spaying or neutering(B) of all pets 6 months of age or younger that are not used for breeding (A) should be mandatory(B) in order to control the pet population (C).
  • 12. Practice!  Move from topic to question to thesis statement.  Improve the thesis by making more specific, relevant, arguable, and strong.  Seek reasons for your opinions.  Seek evidence to support your reasons and prove your thesis.