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Lucy Pratt 13u 10/12/18
Unit 11 Evaluation
Overall the Clientlikedthe conceptandthe wayIexecutedthe ideasIhadinmy treatment.My
realisticsettingand themesintriguedthe clientandsparkedconversationsintogenderandsexual
equality,due tomyuse of the word‘they’insteadof usinggenderspecificpronouns. The voice overs
to showanxietyanddepressionalsosparkedthe conversationaboutmentalhealth,especiallyin
teens.The clientlovedthe factthatmyscript wasthought-provokingandwasveryrelevanttonow.
The main correctionsformyscript fromthe clientwere the wordingandoverall structure of the
script.Thisis therefore aweaknesswhenIcame to writingthe script.The clientdislikedthe wording
of some sectionsof myscript,forexample ‘boredthensuddenlyremembering’.Ithenchanged
these sectionsusingsuggestionsfromthe client,forexample,Itookoutthe word ‘bored’andused
language inthe stage directionsbefore thistosuggestboredom, suchasdescriptionsof body
language andfacial expressions. Opposingthis,the clientlovedthe detail withinthe descriptionin
the stage directions,throughoutthe scriptalongwiththe use of a voice overtoenhance the themes
of anxietyanddepression.
I feel thatI have met the expectationsof the client,thisisdue tothe fact that theyexpectedme to
produce an industrystandardscriptfora 10 minute filmtouchingoncorrectand relevantissueswith
teenagers.ThisiswhatI toldthe clientduringthe pitchandI feel Ihave metthisdue to the fact the
client,duringthe 1:1 meetings,saidthatthe filmisextremelythought-provokinginseveraldifferent
ways. I metthe expectationsandneedsof the brief asonthe ‘Shortof the Week’websitethey
specifythattheylookforfilmsthatmake people think‘aboutsomethinginanew way’,‘stirus
emotionally’andshowgreat‘craftsmanship’.These are all relevanttomyfilm.Myfilmsparks
conversationsaboutpersonal andemotional issues,suchasidentityandmental health,itshowsthe
path an everydayteenagergoesdownwheneffectedbymental healthmakingothersseethe
struggle theycango through,and the use of a naturalisticsettingandthenthe stylisticuse of a voice
overof the character’sthoughtsput togethertwodifferentstylesof filmmaking.Thirdly,Ifeel Ihave
metthe needsof my chosentargetaudience asmyclientmentionedhow itletsthe audience see
howthe character feelsandhowshe dealswitheverydaylife.Mypeers,whoreadthe script,agree
that thisisveryaccurate in termsof the differentcharacters,Samisopposite toStudent1,2 and 3
whichisrealistic,andthe thoughtsSamis havingasmy peerscan relate well tothis.Thisthenmeans
that my targetaudience of strugglersandfamilyandfriendsof thesestrugglerscaneitherrelate to
or learnhowmore about the anxietyanddepressiontheirfamily/friendisdealingwith.
I produceda fullyformattedscriptwhichthe client,duringthe third
1:1 meetingsuggestedimprovementstocomplete.Thiscoupled
withthe shootingscriptI createdwill assistme whenfilmingand
puttingtogethermyfilm.Myscriptis notreferencing/Iamnot
intendingtouse anythingthatisnotmy own.Thisis due to the fact
that I don’twantto have any copyrightclaimsonmy film.An
example of myavoidance of thiswouldbe myuse of ‘new film’
insteadof naminga specificfilm. Myintendedfootage,mystudio
and filmlogosare all myown sothese wouldnotbe subjectof
copyright. Thisisalsothe case whenitcomesto SlanderandLibel andRoyaltiesasI will notuse
anything,suchas music,unlessitiscopyrightandroyaltyfree.Ethically,due tothe use of the word
‘they’insteadof specificgenderpronouns, Iamnot discriminating againstanygender,race or
sexuality.The onlyviolence Icouldhave putinmyfilmwouldbe verbal abuse andif the filmwas
longer/more intense Iwouldalsoconsiderself-harminordertoincrease awarenessof the people
that do getto that pointandwho needthe helpbefore theydoso.Childrenbelow 10wouldnot
understandthe themeswithinthe filmsothisethical issue wouldbe avoidedbytargetingteensand
youngadultsif I was goingtomarket thisfilm.
Lucy Pratt 13u 10/12/18
Unit 11 Evaluation
In Conclusion,Iamverypleasedwiththe waymyinitial ideasturnedout.Thisisdue tothe fact the
clientcouldclearlysee myintentionsandmyeducational ideasof thisfilmassoonastheyhad read
the script,the clientfeltthatitwasa great way of makingpeople aware of these issues.Thiswasmy
intentionfromthe startwhichisthe biggestreasonwhyIfeel thiswasa success. To improve thisI
fell thatI shouldhave hadformal interviewswiththe peopleIwastakinginspirationfrominorderto
getmore insight,howeverIdo feel myfilmisstill veryaccurate.ThroughoutthisunitIhave learnt
more about the scriptwritingprocessandhow longit actuallytakestoget the initial ideadownon
paperand thenfinalised.Thisisanaspectof film Ididnot know a lotabout sothishas reallyhelped
me learnmore about thisside of film.

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Unit 11 evaluation

  • 1. Lucy Pratt 13u 10/12/18 Unit 11 Evaluation Overall the Clientlikedthe conceptandthe wayIexecutedthe ideasIhadinmy treatment.My realisticsettingand themesintriguedthe clientandsparkedconversationsintogenderandsexual equality,due tomyuse of the word‘they’insteadof usinggenderspecificpronouns. The voice overs to showanxietyanddepressionalsosparkedthe conversationaboutmentalhealth,especiallyin teens.The clientlovedthe factthatmyscript wasthought-provokingandwasveryrelevanttonow. The main correctionsformyscript fromthe clientwere the wordingandoverall structure of the script.Thisis therefore aweaknesswhenIcame to writingthe script.The clientdislikedthe wording of some sectionsof myscript,forexample ‘boredthensuddenlyremembering’.Ithenchanged these sectionsusingsuggestionsfromthe client,forexample,Itookoutthe word ‘bored’andused language inthe stage directionsbefore thistosuggestboredom, suchasdescriptionsof body language andfacial expressions. Opposingthis,the clientlovedthe detail withinthe descriptionin the stage directions,throughoutthe scriptalongwiththe use of a voice overtoenhance the themes of anxietyanddepression. I feel thatI have met the expectationsof the client,thisisdue tothe fact that theyexpectedme to produce an industrystandardscriptfora 10 minute filmtouchingoncorrectand relevantissueswith teenagers.ThisiswhatI toldthe clientduringthe pitchandI feel Ihave metthisdue to the fact the client,duringthe 1:1 meetings,saidthatthe filmisextremelythought-provokinginseveraldifferent ways. I metthe expectationsandneedsof the brief asonthe ‘Shortof the Week’websitethey specifythattheylookforfilmsthatmake people think‘aboutsomethinginanew way’,‘stirus emotionally’andshowgreat‘craftsmanship’.These are all relevanttomyfilm.Myfilmsparks conversationsaboutpersonal andemotional issues,suchasidentityandmental health,itshowsthe path an everydayteenagergoesdownwheneffectedbymental healthmakingothersseethe struggle theycango through,and the use of a naturalisticsettingandthenthe stylisticuse of a voice overof the character’sthoughtsput togethertwodifferentstylesof filmmaking.Thirdly,Ifeel Ihave metthe needsof my chosentargetaudience asmyclientmentionedhow itletsthe audience see howthe character feelsandhowshe dealswitheverydaylife.Mypeers,whoreadthe script,agree that thisisveryaccurate in termsof the differentcharacters,Samisopposite toStudent1,2 and 3 whichisrealistic,andthe thoughtsSamis havingasmy peerscan relate well tothis.Thisthenmeans that my targetaudience of strugglersandfamilyandfriendsof thesestrugglerscaneitherrelate to or learnhowmore about the anxietyanddepressiontheirfamily/friendisdealingwith. I produceda fullyformattedscriptwhichthe client,duringthe third 1:1 meetingsuggestedimprovementstocomplete.Thiscoupled withthe shootingscriptI createdwill assistme whenfilmingand puttingtogethermyfilm.Myscriptis notreferencing/Iamnot intendingtouse anythingthatisnotmy own.Thisis due to the fact that I don’twantto have any copyrightclaimsonmy film.An example of myavoidance of thiswouldbe myuse of ‘new film’ insteadof naminga specificfilm. Myintendedfootage,mystudio and filmlogosare all myown sothese wouldnotbe subjectof copyright. Thisisalsothe case whenitcomesto SlanderandLibel andRoyaltiesasI will notuse anything,suchas music,unlessitiscopyrightandroyaltyfree.Ethically,due tothe use of the word ‘they’insteadof specificgenderpronouns, Iamnot discriminating againstanygender,race or sexuality.The onlyviolence Icouldhave putinmyfilmwouldbe verbal abuse andif the filmwas longer/more intense Iwouldalsoconsiderself-harminordertoincrease awarenessof the people that do getto that pointandwho needthe helpbefore theydoso.Childrenbelow 10wouldnot understandthe themeswithinthe filmsothisethical issue wouldbe avoidedbytargetingteensand youngadultsif I was goingtomarket thisfilm.
  • 2. Lucy Pratt 13u 10/12/18 Unit 11 Evaluation In Conclusion,Iamverypleasedwiththe waymyinitial ideasturnedout.Thisisdue tothe fact the clientcouldclearlysee myintentionsandmyeducational ideasof thisfilmassoonastheyhad read the script,the clientfeltthatitwasa great way of makingpeople aware of these issues.Thiswasmy intentionfromthe startwhichisthe biggestreasonwhyIfeel thiswasa success. To improve thisI fell thatI shouldhave hadformal interviewswiththe peopleIwastakinginspirationfrominorderto getmore insight,howeverIdo feel myfilmisstill veryaccurate.ThroughoutthisunitIhave learnt more about the scriptwritingprocessandhow longit actuallytakestoget the initial ideadownon paperand thenfinalised.Thisisanaspectof film Ididnot know a lotabout sothishas reallyhelped me learnmore about thisside of film.