Theses
CONTEXTUALIZED
CONNECTED
THOUGHT-
PROVOKING
DEBATABLE
SPECIFIC
features of a strong
thesis
Analysis
WRITING ANALYSES
One good way to organize a paragraph of analysis (though it’s not the only one):
• State your main claim.
• Present the relevant evidence for that claim.
• Drawing upon the conceptual language you’re using, show how the evidence
supports your claim.
• Indicate what the argument you’ve made in this paragraph contributes to your
thesis overall.
Some bad ways to organize a paragraph of analysis:
• Summarizing rather analyzing.
• Neglecting to present the evidence, or at least not directly.
• Neglecting to use the conceptual terminology.
• Cramming multiple claims and/or pieces of evidence into a single paragraph.
FEATURES OF A STRONG ANALYTIC PARAGRAPH
• Main claim clearly stated? YES = 
• Evidence presented as directly as possible? YES = 
• Employs Hunt’s terms and concepts? YES = 
• Connects to thesis? YES = 
• More summary than analysis? YES = 
• Direct evidence missing? YES = 
• Conceptual terminology missing? YES = 
• Crams together multiple claims or pieces of evidence? YES = 

Theses and analyses

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    WRITING ANALYSES One goodway to organize a paragraph of analysis (though it’s not the only one): • State your main claim. • Present the relevant evidence for that claim. • Drawing upon the conceptual language you’re using, show how the evidence supports your claim. • Indicate what the argument you’ve made in this paragraph contributes to your thesis overall. Some bad ways to organize a paragraph of analysis: • Summarizing rather analyzing. • Neglecting to present the evidence, or at least not directly. • Neglecting to use the conceptual terminology. • Cramming multiple claims and/or pieces of evidence into a single paragraph.
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    FEATURES OF ASTRONG ANALYTIC PARAGRAPH • Main claim clearly stated? YES =  • Evidence presented as directly as possible? YES =  • Employs Hunt’s terms and concepts? YES =  • Connects to thesis? YES =  • More summary than analysis? YES =  • Direct evidence missing? YES =  • Conceptual terminology missing? YES =  • Crams together multiple claims or pieces of evidence? YES = 