The Reflective
          Essay
               Created by: Prof. I. Cortés
Center for Language Development Across the Disciplines
What is an Essay?

An ESSAY is a “short piece of writing on a particular
             subject” (Broukal 2010).

Such essay could be:
       Argumentative
       Analytical
       Expository
       Reflective
What is a
Reflective
 Essay?
What is a Reflective Essay?


“A reflective essay is
 an exploration of a
topic using personal
    thought and
    experience”
     (Farleigh).
Reflective Essay: As a Group

Objectives:
   Combine reflections in an organized manner
   following the essay format.
   Showcase the group’s:

   1. thoughts about the topic       As a group,
   2. experience/group interaction    you may
                                      combine
      throughout the activity
                                      1 and 2.
Reflective Essay: Language

                    Write the essay as a group!


                                             Individual opinions
    Pronouns                 Subjects          Name: Grimilda,
1st person plural           “the group”          Miguel Verde
  (we, us, our,             “the team”        3rd person singular
    ourselves)             “Pedro and I”           (he, she)


 Example: “We chose this topic because… However, Sandra
           explains that… She then realized…”
Organizing the Reflective Essay
Break it into Pieces!
Break it into Pieces!


                               Body
• General                                   • Summary of
  statements        • Three to five (3-5)     main points
• Thesis              paragraphs            • Concluding
  statement         • Three to five (3-5)     Statement
                      topic sentences
   Introduction                                 Conclusion
Break it into Pieces!

• Is the main idea of the    • Is the main idea of a
  essay.                       paragraph (body).
• Helps develop the topic    • Connects the supporting
  sentences.                   sentences and the transition.
• Goes hand in hand with     • Is connected to the Thesis
  concluding statement.        Statement.


Thesis
                              Topic Sentence
Statement
Oh no… Do I have
Yes! write a Thesis
 to Do not be scared;
 it is just a sentence.
      Statement?
Thesis Statement
…is a sentence which is the main idea of the essay.
Thesis Statement
              …is the main idea of the essay.



                    • Example: Upon researching on stem
Implied Thesis        cells, the group agreed that such
                      topic was very controversial and, as
“The main points
                      such, there were differences of
 are not stated.”
                      opinion among teammates.
Thesis Statement
                   …is the main idea of the essay.



   Stated             • Example: Upon writing about stem cell
   Thesis               research, there were differences of
                        opinion among group members because
  “The main             half the team thought it was beneficial
   points are
                        while the rest believed it was unethical.
clearly stated.”
Thesis Statement
                      Avoid these…

Too vague: Scientists should understand stem cells are bad.
Too broad: Scientists should understand everything about
stem cell research.
Too narrow: Scientists should understand stem cells research
is bad because such cells are extracted from fetuses.
                             -

Strong Thesis: As a group, we believe stem cell
research has both positive and negative aspects
when used in the development of medicine.
Thesis Statement

                          Topic sentence #1:
                           positive aspects

    Thesis
  Statement:              Topic sentence #2:     Concluding
“Stem cell research        negative aspects      Statement
    has both…”


                          Topic sentence #3:
                          positive or negative


                           BodyParagraphs
The Conceptual Map of a Reflective
             Essay
      a.k.a. Graphic Organizer
The Conceptual Map in Groups: Essay

                              Quote1:
                            According to
                                             Body 2        Quote 2:
Topic S = Topic            Blake (2004)…      Topic S     Smith (2008)
                                                           explains…
  Sentence

                           Body 1                            Body 3
                                           Introduction
                           Topic S                           Topic S
       As a group, we                  Thesis Statement
      believe stem cell
     research has both
   positive and negative
                                            Conclusion
   aspects when used in
          medicine.
The Conceptual Map: Body Paragraph

                   Quote 1
                                 Supp 1



                             Topic Sentence #1
Quote 2
          Supp 2          Two members of the       Supp 3
                        group believe stem cell
                         research is beneficial.


    Supp =
SupportingSenten                 Transition
      ces
The Conceptual Map: Body Paragraph

The supporting sentences
develop the topic sentence. They
give the reader:
    •Reasons
    •Examples
    •Details

    All supporting
   sentences must
   be related to the
     topic of the
     paragraph.
Conclusion
Conclusion: Final Paragraph


Concluding statement:

1. Sums up the main points

2. Restates the main idea in
      a different way

     —Broukal 2010
Conclusion: Final Paragraph

             • As a group, we believe stem cell research
  Thesis
               has both positive and negative aspects
Statement      when used in the development of medicine.



             • Even if we disagree whether stem cell
Concluding     research is negative or positive, we cannot
Statement      deny that it has been important in the
               development of medicine.
Examples
Sample Introduction: Math
   According to Sullivan (2001), pre-calculus provides the
background for the mathematical concepts, problems and
techniques that mathematicians confront (25). Although true, this
definition makes it sound as if the only importance of pre-calculus
is to lay a foundation for mathematics. On the other hand, Blake
(2005) explains that “math and medicine have had a long affair”
(2). Upon researching and presenting on the importance of
mathematics in medicine, half of the group agrees that pre-
calculus is essential in medical research while the rest believes
that it is only useful to mathematicians.
Activity
As a group, work on a graphic organizer in which

                    you include:

1. One (1) clear thesis statement (complete sentence)

2. Three (3) topic sentences, one for each of the three

                  body paragraphs

3. One (1) concluding statement (complete sentence)
References
Broukal, Milada. Weaving it Together: Connecting Reading and Writing, Third
   Edition. Boston: Heinle, 2010.

Folse, Keith, Vestri, Elena and David Clabeaux. From Great Paragraphs to
   Great Essays. Boston: Heinle, 2001.

Folse, Keith, Vestri, Elena and April Muchmore-Vokoun. Great Paragraphs.
   Boston: Heinle, 2004.

http//: owl.english.purdue.edu

“Reflection.” Oxford English Dictionary. NY: Oxford UP, 2002.

Strausser, Jeffrey. Painless Writing. NY: Barron’s, 2001.

Strumpf, Michael. The Grammar Bible. NY: Owl Books, 2004.

Strunk, William and E.B. White. The Elements of Style. NY: Longman, 2000.
Questions? Comments?
     Barat Norte 223 (BN 223)
     787-728-1515 ext. 2294
      E-mail:lad@sagrado.edu
 Web: http://www.sagrado.edu/lad

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  • 1.
    The Reflective Essay Created by: Prof. I. Cortés Center for Language Development Across the Disciplines
  • 3.
    What is anEssay? An ESSAY is a “short piece of writing on a particular subject” (Broukal 2010). Such essay could be:  Argumentative  Analytical  Expository  Reflective
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    What is aReflective Essay? “A reflective essay is an exploration of a topic using personal thought and experience” (Farleigh).
  • 6.
    Reflective Essay: Asa Group Objectives: Combine reflections in an organized manner following the essay format. Showcase the group’s: 1. thoughts about the topic As a group, 2. experience/group interaction you may combine throughout the activity 1 and 2.
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    Reflective Essay: Language Write the essay as a group! Individual opinions Pronouns Subjects Name: Grimilda, 1st person plural “the group” Miguel Verde (we, us, our, “the team” 3rd person singular ourselves) “Pedro and I” (he, she) Example: “We chose this topic because… However, Sandra explains that… She then realized…”
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    Break it intoPieces! Body • General • Summary of statements • Three to five (3-5) main points • Thesis paragraphs • Concluding statement • Three to five (3-5) Statement topic sentences Introduction Conclusion
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    Break it intoPieces! • Is the main idea of the • Is the main idea of a essay. paragraph (body). • Helps develop the topic • Connects the supporting sentences. sentences and the transition. • Goes hand in hand with • Is connected to the Thesis concluding statement. Statement. Thesis Topic Sentence Statement
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    Oh no… DoI have Yes! write a Thesis to Do not be scared; it is just a sentence. Statement?
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    Thesis Statement …is asentence which is the main idea of the essay.
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    Thesis Statement …is the main idea of the essay. • Example: Upon researching on stem Implied Thesis cells, the group agreed that such topic was very controversial and, as “The main points such, there were differences of are not stated.” opinion among teammates.
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    Thesis Statement …is the main idea of the essay. Stated • Example: Upon writing about stem cell Thesis research, there were differences of opinion among group members because “The main half the team thought it was beneficial points are while the rest believed it was unethical. clearly stated.”
  • 16.
    Thesis Statement Avoid these… Too vague: Scientists should understand stem cells are bad. Too broad: Scientists should understand everything about stem cell research. Too narrow: Scientists should understand stem cells research is bad because such cells are extracted from fetuses. - Strong Thesis: As a group, we believe stem cell research has both positive and negative aspects when used in the development of medicine.
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    Thesis Statement Topic sentence #1: positive aspects Thesis Statement: Topic sentence #2: Concluding “Stem cell research negative aspects Statement has both…” Topic sentence #3: positive or negative BodyParagraphs
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    The Conceptual Mapof a Reflective Essay a.k.a. Graphic Organizer
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    The Conceptual Mapin Groups: Essay Quote1: According to Body 2 Quote 2: Topic S = Topic Blake (2004)… Topic S Smith (2008) explains… Sentence Body 1 Body 3 Introduction Topic S Topic S As a group, we Thesis Statement believe stem cell research has both positive and negative Conclusion aspects when used in medicine.
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    The Conceptual Map:Body Paragraph Quote 1 Supp 1 Topic Sentence #1 Quote 2 Supp 2 Two members of the Supp 3 group believe stem cell research is beneficial. Supp = SupportingSenten Transition ces
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    The Conceptual Map:Body Paragraph The supporting sentences develop the topic sentence. They give the reader: •Reasons •Examples •Details All supporting sentences must be related to the topic of the paragraph.
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    Conclusion: Final Paragraph Concludingstatement: 1. Sums up the main points 2. Restates the main idea in a different way —Broukal 2010
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    Conclusion: Final Paragraph • As a group, we believe stem cell research Thesis has both positive and negative aspects Statement when used in the development of medicine. • Even if we disagree whether stem cell Concluding research is negative or positive, we cannot Statement deny that it has been important in the development of medicine.
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    Sample Introduction: Math According to Sullivan (2001), pre-calculus provides the background for the mathematical concepts, problems and techniques that mathematicians confront (25). Although true, this definition makes it sound as if the only importance of pre-calculus is to lay a foundation for mathematics. On the other hand, Blake (2005) explains that “math and medicine have had a long affair” (2). Upon researching and presenting on the importance of mathematics in medicine, half of the group agrees that pre- calculus is essential in medical research while the rest believes that it is only useful to mathematicians.
  • 27.
    Activity As a group,work on a graphic organizer in which you include: 1. One (1) clear thesis statement (complete sentence) 2. Three (3) topic sentences, one for each of the three body paragraphs 3. One (1) concluding statement (complete sentence)
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    References Broukal, Milada. Weavingit Together: Connecting Reading and Writing, Third Edition. Boston: Heinle, 2010. Folse, Keith, Vestri, Elena and David Clabeaux. From Great Paragraphs to Great Essays. Boston: Heinle, 2001. Folse, Keith, Vestri, Elena and April Muchmore-Vokoun. Great Paragraphs. Boston: Heinle, 2004. http//: owl.english.purdue.edu “Reflection.” Oxford English Dictionary. NY: Oxford UP, 2002. Strausser, Jeffrey. Painless Writing. NY: Barron’s, 2001. Strumpf, Michael. The Grammar Bible. NY: Owl Books, 2004. Strunk, William and E.B. White. The Elements of Style. NY: Longman, 2000.
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    Questions? Comments? Barat Norte 223 (BN 223) 787-728-1515 ext. 2294 E-mail:lad@sagrado.edu Web: http://www.sagrado.edu/lad

Editor's Notes

  • #21 Could be done individualy or as a group.
  • #25 I think it’s important to point out that a concluding sentence (and concluding paragraph) should not introduce any new information.