This is a piece of dissertation in Grade B+ level. I wrote this very general topic based on the elementary perspectives of literati painting, Chinese aesthetic spirits, Sinology, self-expressive painting, union between Heaven and Man, and coexistence between calligraphy and painting. I legitimately learn how to write a formal piece of Chinese art history research by quoting a large sum of convincing book references once I have made clear with lots of complicated concepts and knowledge that I haven't learnt during my Bachelor era. Now, I have adjusted the contents for my dissertation before the uploading based on the corrections from Dr. Lee Chi Kong:
關於你的論文,幾㸃意見謹奉參考。
首先,文中有個最大謬誤,是多處將南宗與浙派混為一談。浙派崇尚南宋馬、夏,是董其昌所厭棄的風格。此外,論文第一段舉藍瑛為例亦不太妥當,因為被畫史譽為浙派殿軍的藍瑛,比董其昌小三十歲,屬後輩,董其昌成名時藍瑛尚未成氣候。畫風固不入董眼,但亦不足為其掛齒。
其次為錯別字,「黃公望」多處誤作「黃宮望」。其他如:
翰林圖畫院(頁1)
皆從董、巨得來(頁1,注1)
折釵股(頁1,注3)
乾淡(頁5,兩處)
致虛守靜(頁6)
淡彩赭石(頁6)
滃鬱恍惚(頁7)
幼獅文化(頁10,注26)
米萬鍾(頁10,注32)
以余所見(頁13,注37)
This is a piece of dissertation in Grade B+ level. I wrote this very general topic based on the elementary perspectives of literati painting, Chinese aesthetic spirits, Sinology, self-expressive painting, union between Heaven and Man, and coexistence between calligraphy and painting. I legitimately learn how to write a formal piece of Chinese art history research by quoting a large sum of convincing book references once I have made clear with lots of complicated concepts and knowledge that I haven't learnt during my Bachelor era. Now, I have adjusted the contents for my dissertation before the uploading based on the corrections from Dr. Lee Chi Kong:
關於你的論文,幾㸃意見謹奉參考。
首先,文中有個最大謬誤,是多處將南宗與浙派混為一談。浙派崇尚南宋馬、夏,是董其昌所厭棄的風格。此外,論文第一段舉藍瑛為例亦不太妥當,因為被畫史譽為浙派殿軍的藍瑛,比董其昌小三十歲,屬後輩,董其昌成名時藍瑛尚未成氣候。畫風固不入董眼,但亦不足為其掛齒。
其次為錯別字,「黃公望」多處誤作「黃宮望」。其他如:
翰林圖畫院(頁1)
皆從董、巨得來(頁1,注1)
折釵股(頁1,注3)
乾淡(頁5,兩處)
致虛守靜(頁6)
淡彩赭石(頁6)
滃鬱恍惚(頁7)
幼獅文化(頁10,注26)
米萬鍾(頁10,注32)
以余所見(頁13,注37)
Xin Ning, Dietrich Tschanz, Ching-I Tu eds., “Chinese Classics and Traditional Thought: Origin, Development, and Dialogue”(《中國古代經典與傳統思想:起源、流變與對話》) . Confucius Institute at Rutgers University, 2012, pp. 225-323.