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State the option you have chosen – do not ask your schoolmates to choose. PROPOSE your idea Lack of background information provided  PURPOSE – why are even having the flea market/ school concert in the first place? Elaborate, not lift. Recommend to you (x)  Recommend ____ to you or suggest that you OPT for this option No need to capitalize your events unless they are NAMES Discuss the event; not discuss ABOUT (x) the event “I have decided..” (x)  “I propose../ I re1commend..” Introduction
Need to use the criteria to decide which advantages should be highlighted! Elaborate on why you think the criteria is important E.g. mass participation  why? E.g. less preparation  why? Para 2/3 – advantages of choice
“I know some of you are concerned that..” Possible problem Proposed solution (be feasible) Paragraph 4 – problems of choice event
“I do not prefer the other one” (x)  the other event is not as good/beneficial/not preferred State advantages, then move on to disadvantages Paragraph 5 – the other event
Restate your option clearly Summarize main advantages of option Thanks Conclusion
Do not begin sentence with But And Also So So as to “and”  only related ideas Others

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Speech feedback

  • 2. State the option you have chosen – do not ask your schoolmates to choose. PROPOSE your idea Lack of background information provided  PURPOSE – why are even having the flea market/ school concert in the first place? Elaborate, not lift. Recommend to you (x)  Recommend ____ to you or suggest that you OPT for this option No need to capitalize your events unless they are NAMES Discuss the event; not discuss ABOUT (x) the event “I have decided..” (x)  “I propose../ I re1commend..” Introduction
  • 3. Need to use the criteria to decide which advantages should be highlighted! Elaborate on why you think the criteria is important E.g. mass participation  why? E.g. less preparation  why? Para 2/3 – advantages of choice
  • 4. “I know some of you are concerned that..” Possible problem Proposed solution (be feasible) Paragraph 4 – problems of choice event
  • 5. “I do not prefer the other one” (x)  the other event is not as good/beneficial/not preferred State advantages, then move on to disadvantages Paragraph 5 – the other event
  • 6. Restate your option clearly Summarize main advantages of option Thanks Conclusion
  • 7. Do not begin sentence with But And Also So So as to “and”  only related ideas Others