This feedback provides guidance on improving a situational writing piece proposing either a school flea market or concert. Key points include: 1) Clearly state the proposed option and reasons for having the event, rather than asking others to choose. Elaborate on the purpose and criteria rather than just listing them. 2) When discussing the advantages of the chosen option, explain why criteria like mass participation or less preparation are important. 3) Acknowledge possible problems with the option and provide feasible solutions. 4) Compare the disadvantages of the non-chosen option rather than just saying it is not preferred. 5) Restate the proposed option and summarize its main advantages in the conclusion. Avoid beginning