Students engage in writing as a process that involves pre-writing, drafting, revising, and finalizing. During pre-writing, students generate ideas and develop initial plans by considering purpose, audience, point of view, and format. In drafting, students focus on content over mechanics as they compose rough versions. Through revising, students refine their writing by reorganizing ideas, adding or removing content, and providing feedback to peers. Finally, students produce polished drafts and decide whether to share or publish their work. The writing process is recursive, and teachers support students by modeling strategies, creating a collaborative environment, and maintaining resources to facilitate writing development.

1. purpose for writing, students are compelled to
Writing find a way to write appropriately and effectively.
Writing is a complex process that allows writers to
 Students talk as a part of their writing process.
explore thoughts and ideas, and to make them
visible and concrete. Writing and thinking are From pre-writing to final draft, talking about their
interwoven. Thinking is the foundation of writing and, writing is central to students learning about their
because thinking is central to learning, students who writing abilities and learning from the writing of
are able to make their thought processes concrete others.
through writing enhance learning capabilities.
 Students write frequently and regularly.
Writing encourages thinking and learning for the
following reasons: Regular and frequent practice is necessary to
becoming an effective writer.
1. Writing motivates Writing is a way of crossing
communication. the boundaries of time and (Adapted from Haley-James, 1982. Used with
culture, reaching those not permission of the National Council of Teachers of
present when the piece is English.)
written. Writing generates
discussion through peer
conferences or sharing The Writing Process
activities. “The process approach to writing focuses upon the
exploration and awareness of what writers actually
2. Writing focuses Writers must think to decide do and what choices they make when they write”
and extends what to say and how to say (Saskatchewan Education, 1989, p. 23). Teachers
thought. it (e.g., organize thoughts, and students who view writing as a process
make word choices, add or recognize the following:
delete ideas) and identify
audience, purpose, and  Writing is recursive in nature; the writer moves
point of view. Writing within the process as necessary, perhaps from
encourages the pre-writing to drafting, then back to pre-writing
development of more again, then forward to editing and back to drafting
complex thought as ideas before polishing a piece for sharing or
are analyzed and publication.
evaluated.
 Both the process and product of writing should be
3. Writing makes When thought is written assessed and evaluated, allowing students and
thought available down, ideas can be teachers to focus on and assess the learning that
for reflection. reconsidered, added to, takes place during writing, rather than trying to
and rearranged. ascertain what has been learned from the
finished product only.
Writing is most likely to encourage thinking and  Writing abilities are largely acquired by practice.
learning when: While instruction may be required about some
writing skills and knowledge, it must be
 Students view writing as a process. conducted within the context of students’ writing
and should not be broken into isolated sub-skills,
By recognizing that writing is a recursive process which are less likely to transfer to the students’
and that every writer uses the process in a writing. (It should also be kept in mind that many
different way, students experience less pressure writers attribute their skill to frequent and varied
to “get it right the first time” and are more willing reading.)
to experiment, revise, and edit.
 Encouraging students to express their ideas and
 Students decide what to write about and have meaning in the form of whole “text” is preferable
their own reasons for writing. to focusing upon single, isolated parts of
language.
By choosing topics from students’ own
experiences and interests, students get a sense  Creating meaning takes time and cannot be done
of ownership; this sense of ownership promotes on command.
commitment and continuing interest. When
students determine their own audience and
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2.  Although writing is a solitary activity for most After students have generated some ideas, students
writers, the social aspects of collaboration make must decide what they will say about their chosen
writing partners appropriate for Middle Level topic. Students develop an initial plan for the product
students. For some students, however, writing they will compose. As they do so, they consider the
will always be private and solitary, and teachers purpose, audience, point of view, and format
should be sensitive to this when planning group because these elements have implications for both
activities. the planning and the drafting of the written product.
Some purposes for pre-writing activities are as
During the writing process, students engage in pre- follows.
writing, planning, drafting, and post-writing activities.
The writing process is described in the paragraphs To develop an initial plan for drafting:
that follow.
Using such structures as outlines, story frames,
Pre-Writing (BEFORE): A Place to Start diagrams, charts, and concept webs, students
organize the information they have generated during
Pre-writing, the first phase of the writing process, pre-writing.
begins long before the writer puts thoughts into
writing. The experiences, observations, and To consider purpose:
interactions that students have prior to entering the
classroom have an impact upon what they write and Writers write to express ideas, feelings, and
how they write it. Within the classroom, pre-writing opinions, and students must ask themselves, “What
prompts and activities can be integrated into the is my purpose for writing this piece?” Some
writing process by teachers as scaffolds to help purposes for student writing are:
students generate ideas for writing and to practise
the thinking skills inherent in the activity.  to express personal feelings or viewpoints
 to imagine “What if ...?”
To initiate thinking and generate possible writing  to entertain and/or amuse
topics, it is important for students to explore ideas for  to describe
writing topics using a variety of pre-writing strategies  to inform or explain
such as the following:  to persuade or convince
 to request
 brainstorming  to inquire or question
 constructing thought webs and graphic  to clarify thinking.
organizers, using software or other tools
 interviewing a person knowledgeable about the To consider audience:
topic
 observing nature and other daily events Writers consider for whom they are writing, and
 engaging in peer or teacher-student discussions students must ask themselves, “Who is my intended
and conferences audience?” Some possible audiences are:
 listening to music
 drawing on dreams and other images  familiar, known audiences such as friends, peers,
 reading about and researching the topic family, and teachers
 free writing or timed free writing about the topic  extended, known audiences such as community,
 viewing pictures, movies, documentaries, and student body, and local media
other forms of visual text  extended, unknown audiences such as wider
 listing and categorizing information range of mass media and other publications.
 responding to a variety of texts
 role playing and using other drama techniques To consider point of view:
 asking the 5Ws – who, what, where, when, and
why. Writers must determine which point of view their
ideas or information will express, so students need
Pre-writing prompts or activities planned by the to ask themselves, “Who is telling this
teacher can serve as writing scaffolds for story/describing the events?” Some points of view
inexperienced writers who have difficulty accessing for student consideration are:
their own feelings, ideas, experiences, and
knowledge. Students who have a place to start are  physical point of view (i.e., where is the narrator in
more motivated to continue developing their ideas relation to the action?)
and own writing voices.  objective and subjective point of view (i.e., what
emotional involvement does the narrator have in
relation to the situation?)
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3.  personal point of view (i.e., who is the narrator of  Revisions can be made to words, sentences,
the story?). The narrator may take a first person, paragraphs, or the whole piece (e.g., the writer
third person, or an all-knowing omniscient point of may decide that the ideas would have more
view. impact as poetry instead of prose).
 Rereading and reflecting upon their own work
To decide what information will be gathered and how helps students to clarify meaning.
it will most effectively be gathered:  Writing conferences with the teacher and peers
about ideas and meaning can assist revision.
 Students who decide that they need to conduct
interviews or go on field trips to gather To revise the draft for mechanical and conventional
information should construct a list of questions, concerns that detract from and obscure meaning:
while students who require library research need
to decide the types of resources and references  Students edit for accuracy and intent as well as
to consult. for obvious convention issues including usage,
sentence structure, and word choice.
To consider format:
To focus purpose, audience, and point of view and
 Students use audience and purpose to determine to confirm appropriateness of format:
format and genre. They have the opportunity to
write in a variety of narrative, descriptive,  These variables, which were considered during
expository, persuasive, script, and poetic formats. the planning stage, are confirmed and used to
shape the draft.
Drafting (DURING): A Time to Explore
To confer with peers and the teacher:
At this point in the process, the emphasis is on
content and meaning rather than on mechanics and  Writing conferences are useful because they
conventions. This is the time for writers to get down provide an immediate audience for trying out
their ideas and thoughts, composing rough drafts ideas.
based upon pre-writing and planning activities and  A set of questions or a checklist can be used to
considerations. As writers compose, they begin to assist writers and conference partners as they
determine what to include and exclude, and make strive to help the writers make meaning clear.
initial decisions about how these ideas will be Some suggestions for scaffolds at the drafting
organized. The following points describe the main stage include the following:
purposes of drafting activities. o Post the major stages of the writing process
(pre-writing, planning, drafting, post-writing) and
To produce a first, rough draft: brief information about each so that students
can determine where they are at any time in the
 Students record their ideas rapidly in order to process.
capture the essence of what students have to say. o Help students develop criteria or tips for writing
 Students make little or no attempt to revise or edit. a particular genre or format (e.g., poem, short
 Students explore a point of view and initial tone. story, script, letter), then post these on a
 Students focus on talking to the reader. bulletin board for reference as students write.
o Set up a section of the classroom as a writing
To write subsequent drafts: reference area and make available language
resources such as dictionaries, thesauri, and
 Redrafting is often accomplished by crossing out, language study texts. Encourage students to
adding, and rearranging ideas. use these as needed individually or with peers
 Word processing programs enable students to and the teacher.
add, delete, and rearrange portions of text
efficiently. Post-drafting and Revising (AFTER):
 By reflecting upon their own writing and through Preparing to Go Public
conferences with peers and the teacher, students
receive constructive feedback and support that When students have an authentic audience and
help to shape their writing. purpose, they want to rework their written drafts,
polishing them for presentation or publication. Going
To revise the draft for content and clarity of public means taking a huge risk; the student’s self-
meaning: esteem is on the line, so the decision about how and
with whom to share the writing must include the
 Students reorganize and sequence relevant ideas student writer. Teachers may encourage students to
and add or delete details as students strive to share certain pieces or determine the number of
make their meaning clear.
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4. pieces that students are required to share or publish may be useful to address individual student needs
within a set time period. Some purposes for post- and abilities. Students should be involved in making
drafting activities are listed below. choices about which of the students’ written pieces
become part of personal portfolios.
To prepare a final, polished draft:
The Language Cues and
Students proofread for accuracy and correctness as
well as appearance. Students write in legible Conventions in Written
handwriting or use a word processing program to Composition
prepare a polished written work.
Effective writers consider and attend to the language
Some suggestions for post-writing scaffolds include cues and conventions before, during, and after
the following: composing. Writers need to keep each of the
language cueing systems in mind:
 Discuss or develop with students criteria for
polished pieces. Post these criteria or provide  The pragmatic cues and conventions as writers
them as handouts for students to refer to as consider the audience and purpose, and the level
needed. of language that would be appropriate in the
 Provide opportunities for students to use communication.
computer word processing programs to create  The textual cues and conventions as writers
final drafts. choose a type of text to write and organize their
 Have students share their final compositions with ideas into an appropriate format within that text.
classmates or with others in the community such In addition, writers need to ensure that their ideas
as younger children or elderly people. are connected using the appropriate transitional
 Post or publish students’ work in the classroom words.
and provide opportunities, when appropriate, for  The syntactical cues and conventions as writers
students to submit to publishers outside the craft sentences of varying patterns, lengths, and
classroom. complexity to achieve particular purposes.
 The semantic and lexical cues and conventions
To decide if and how the written work will be shared as writers choose their words carefully and
or published: consider their denotation and connotation, and
the effect they will have on the audience.
Sharing provides students with an immediate  The graphophonic aspects of words as writers
audience. Some examples include the author’s spell words correctly.
chair, which provides opportunity for students to  The other cues and conventions that ensure
share their writing aloud with the whole class; compositions are effective including handwriting
sharing in small groups or with a partner; and using legibility, spacing, layout, and other visual cues
bulletin board space assigned to a specific genre or and conventions.
to a class of students. At times, students should be
provided with opportunities to decide if students wish
to share their written work, and whether they will
Supporting the Writing Strand
share in pairs, in small groups, with the whole class,
It is important to create an atmosphere that allows
or with a relevant community audience that has a
and encourages students to feel safe taking risks in
particular interest in the work.
order to develop a community of writers who support
each other and share with each other (the teacher is
 Students may choose to publish their writing in
also a part of this community). Let students help set
such formats as:
guidelines and rules to make the environment safe
o class booklets
(e.g., no put-downs).
o school or local newspapers
o yearbook
Desks can be arranged in clusters or tables can be
o writing contests
used to accommodate four to six students. On a
o magazines (e.g., On the Horizon)
specified shelf, resources can be provided that
o e-zines.
assist students as they write (e.g., dictionaries,
language study texts, writing models, and samples
To decide if the written work will be placed in the
of student writing). Areas of the classroom can be
student’s assessment and evaluation portfolio:
designated for specific activities (e.g., peer
Teachers can negotiate with students to generate conferences, writing and publishing tasks).
guidelines about the number and variety of pieces
that students are required to place in their portfolios The teacher plays an interactive role and builds
for assessment and evaluation purposes. Contracts scaffolds as needed. The teacher models the
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5. various writing formats and conventions of the _ Did you use the best signal words or are there
writing process, and provides the needed help as better ones?
each student is writing. _ Does the paragraph have a good closing
sentence to let you know the paragraph is
Middle Level English language arts teachers can ended?
support the writing strand by:
A Sample Cinquain Writing Frame
1. making writing a natural and integral part of each
unit Line 1: one word (noun) giving the poem’s subject
2. modelling and discussing effective writing Line 2: two words (adjectives) describing the subject
behaviours and strategies Line 3: three words (verbs) describing actions
3. planning lessons that ensure students achieve associated with the subject
the outcomes for the writing strand Line 4: four words expressing feelings or thoughts
4. supporting and guiding students as they develop about the subject
writing skills and strategies. Line 5: one word (noun) giving a synonym for the
subject.
Each of these four points is described more fully in
the paragraphs that follow. Finally, help students communicate their ideas in a
variety of forms in each unit of study. A sample of
1. Make writing a natural and integral part of possible writing forms that might be explored is
each unit. found on page 13.
Students need to use and explore a wide variety of 2. Model and discuss effective writing
forms and to understand how they are structured. behaviours and strategies.
Recipes, for example, are different from poems or
letters; stories are different than scripts. Middle Level As a member of the community of writers, the
students need to write across functions and forms. teacher also writes and shares his/her writing with
In order to do so, students need models and the students. The teacher should not just talk about
modelling. Students benefit from exploring a variety the writing process but model (demonstrate) it using
of models before using a particular form. Students the chalkboard, chart paper, overhead projector,
can, for example, read a poem and then write their white board, or other tool. Talking, problem solving,
own poems using the form and a similar idea or and working through the steps and processes that a
theme that was expressed in the model poem. writer might use to write for a particular purpose in a
particular form for a particular audience help
Writing Frames students understand the strategies that effective
writers use. As the students watch, listen, question,
Writing frames help students understand the form and suggest, the teacher can explain the various
requirements. decisions that are being made and how to attend to
the conventions of writing (e.g., starting a paragraph,
A Sample Expository (Explanatory) Paragraph starting a sentence, choosing the right word).
Writing Frame
1. Decide on a topic, purpose, and audience. Note:
2. List the main steps or points that you feel you Guiding students to express themselves in
need to explain in an order that is logical. written texts is a major challenge at all levels and
3. Start your paragraph with a topic sentence or in all areas of study. The phases of the writing
introductory sentence. Sometimes a sentence or process need to be taught and practised. This
two may be used to catch the reader’s attention does not happen in one lesson or in one grade
before you write your actual topic sentence. level. It is developmental and continuous. It
4. Select the signal words that will help you indicate requires knowledgeable teachers to help
order (e.g., first, next, finally). students grow in an environment that requires
5. Expand your steps or points into sentences, risk taking and support.
adding whatever explanations are necessary.
6. Write a good closing sentence to end your
paragraph. Strategies Students Can Use Before Drafting
Explanatory Paragraph Checklist What before drafting activities and strategies
stimulate the students’ interests, prior knowledge
_ Is the topic sentence clearly worded? and experiences, and help students consider where
_ Are the steps or points in the correct order? to get ideas and information?
_ Are the steps or points clear and easy to follow?
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6. Students need strategies to: In the after phase, teachers consider:
 consider a possible message  Will students have adequate time to revise their
 consider the purpose and audience(s) work?
 consider specific ideas and information that might  What specific activities or guidelines help
be included students in their revisions?
 consider possible form  How will students be motivated to genuinely
 collect and focus the ideas and information rethink and reshape their work (not just recopy)?
 plan and organize for drafting.  How will students receive feedback?
 What mini-lessons are needed in this phase?
In the before phase, teachers consider:
Students need time, guidance, and coaching in each
 What is the task? Is it reasonable, feasible, and phase of the writing process. When students write,
realistic? they must “fit what they know to the needs of
 What prior thinking and experiences should the another person” and to the constraints of their
students have had? purpose and form (Flower & Hayes, 1981). They
 What is the time frame for the task? What must attend not only to “what” to say but also “how”
resources, if any, are needed? to say it. As a result, students must:
 What criteria will students be given (or generate
with you) for evaluation?  employ a wide range of strategies as students
 What mini-lessons are needed in this phase? represent, speak, and write
 use different process elements to communicate
Strategies to Use During Drafting with different audiences for a variety of purposes
 apply their knowledge of language structures and
What strategies enable students to get their ideas conventions to create print and non-print texts
and information into a draft format that can be  adjust their use of visual, spoken, and written
reviewed, expanded, and enhanced? Students need language (including the language registers and
to have strategies to: conventions) to communicate effectively with
their intended audience(s) for different purposes.
 create drafts and experiment with possible
product(s) Key Questions When Writing
 use language and its conventions to construct
Middle Level students can learn to ask key
meaning
questions such as the following before, during, and
 self-monitor, self-correct, and use a variety of fix-
after writing.
up strategies
 confer with others. Some Questions for Students to Consider Before
Writing.
In the during phase, teachers consider:
Do I:
 What amount of time (either in or out of class) do
the students need?  consider why I am going to write (purpose,
 Do the students have an opportunity to generate audience, point of view, occasion)
more than one draft?  think about what message I want to communicate
 What provisions are made for students to give  know what form (e.g., poem, narrative) I am
and receive feedback on their drafts? going to use and how I am going to organize my
 What mini-lessons are needed in this phase? ideas in that form?
Strategies to Use After Drafting Some Questions for Students to Consider During
Drafting.
What strategies help students review and revise
Do I:
their message and share it with an audience?
Students need strategies to:
 select and develop ideas from my pre-writing into
a first draft
 revise for meaning, organization, sentence
structure and flow, word choice, usage,  focus my purpose, audience, point of view, and
mechanics, and appearance confirm appropriateness of format
 polish and share the final product with the  write subsequent drafts for clarity of meaning
intended audience(s) (e.g., add, delete, rearrange, or expand ideas)?
 assess and evaluate success.
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7. Some Questions for Students to Consider After F (Format): Which format should I use while
Drafting. communicating?
Do I: T (Topic): What is the topic? Is it sufficiently
focused?
 write a final, polished draft in legible handwriting
or use a word processing program
S (Strong Verb) (purpose): What am I trying to do in
 edit for content and organization
this piece (e.g., convince, request, prove, complain,
 proofread for usage, spelling, capitalization, and
persuade, pretend, entertain)?
punctuation
 decide if and how the work will be shared and/or For example, “as a Grade 8 student, write a letter
published? convincing one member of your community that he
or she needs to produce less waste.”
Writing and Plagiarism
As students become more independent, they can
Middle Level students need help understanding determine and create their own RAFTS (Adler &
that copying someone else’s work word for word Vendeventer, 1989). The following chart illustrates a
or “borrowing” someone else’s ideas or language few of the possibilities.
is plagiarism. Students need to learn how to
borrow ideas honestly and how to acknowledge Topic: What am I writing about?
each and every source. To help Middle Level Possible Possible Possible Possible
students avoid plagiarism, teachers can: Roles Audiences Purposes Formats
 design writing assignments with clear and
Self Self Narrate Journal
specific expectations and models
Parent Editor Support Letter
 support students in using their own words and
Teacher Immigrant Inform Script
finding their own “voice” in writing
Character Architect Deny Report
 provide adequate instruction on how to Coach Author Brag Poem
incorporate others’ ideas into own writing by
modelling how to quote directly, paraphrase
When Middle Level students approach writing tasks,
acceptably, and cite sources using an in-text
students need to draw upon a “tool kit” of cognitive
method of citation
strategies that can be used in the planning, drafting,
 teach students how to provide a list of revising, and presenting phases. Teachers in every
references grade and area of study need to help students use
 give students enough time to do an assignment these strategies. Students need to learn how to use
and to attend to each phase of the writing a process and need to be coached through the
process. phases of the writing tasks.
3. Plan lessons that ensure students achieve the With good modelling and coaching, most students
outcomes for the writing strand. can create their own compositions using some key
knowledge, skills, and strategies associated with
Asking students to simply “tell” something or “write” composing. During the process, students can learn
a paragraph or poem usually does not result in to use the language conventions for identified
effective, meaningful communication. Teachers must purposes.
create clear, focused, and inviting assignments that
give students a clear reason for communicating to a Mini-lessons
particular audience.
Most writing lessons involve mini-lessons, sustained
Teachers need to give students meaningful and writing time, peer and teacher conferences, and
adequate prompts. Whenever possible, these sharing. The decision about what to teach in a mini-
lesson depends upon the students’ needs and
prompts should help the students know the answers
interests.
to the following questions (RAFTS):
Planning
R (Role): Who am I? What is my role?
Different types of communication require different
A (Audience): To whom am I communicating? pre-writing strategies. Teachers have to provide
Should I use a formal or informal stance? adequate modelling and allow sufficient time for
students to generate ideas, focus them, and develop
a plan. In this phase, teachers have to consider
carefully the assignment and where the students are
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8. going to get their ideas (e.g., experiences, interview, and identify specific revision focuses that truly result
discussion, reading, brainstorming). Murray (1982) in more than superficial fix-ups is critical in this
believes that 70% or more of time should be spent in phase.
the planning phase.
In the revising phase, teachers:
In the pre-writing phase, teachers:
 teach students how to revise for meaning,
 help students consider a possible message organization, sentence structure and flow, word
(mini-lessons include creating maps, choice, usage, mechanics, and appearance
storyboarding, clustering/webbing) (possible mini-lessons include making
 help students consider their purpose and substantive rather than minor changes, the
audience(s) (e.g., exchanging information, revision triangle, layered revision, using the pass
persuasion) system, check and question marks, author reads
 help students consider specific ideas that might aloud to listener, reader reads author’s paper
be included (mini-lessons include focusing key aloud to author, proofreading backwards)
ideas and supporting details)  teach students how to polish and share/present
 help students consider possible forms the final product with/to the intended audience
 help students plan and organize for drafting (possible mini-lessons include concept of
(possible mini-lessons include planning and author’s chair, all about the author page, reading
organizing). composition aloud, displaying, submitting for
publication, a “read-around” party).
Drafting
Graves (1994, 2004) notes that teachers need to
Writing is a generating process and students listen to, observe, and note what students are doing
approach their first drafts in different ways. Some with the language. He also notes that teachers need
students formulate a clear plan or outline while to know when to step in, when to teach, and when to
others simply dive in and begin to create. The key expect more of their students. Teachers need to be
during this phase is to ensure students capture their proactive in teaching students how to revise and
ideas as quickly and efficiently as possible, using how to spell, as well as teaching other valuable
drafting strategies that work best. conventions and important tools that writers use to
revise and polish their texts. “There is a time and
In the drafting phase, teachers: place for brevity and coding” but students also need
to know how to write in a more standard fashion.
 teach students how to create drafts and
experiment with possible forms (possible mini- Middle Level teachers can help students keep the
lessons include creating several leads; focused focus on revising for ideas first by making content
“quickwrites,” keeping focus on content; adding, the repetitive most important aspect of revision.
deleting, rearranging ideas and details).
 teach students how to use language and its A Sample Revision Frame and Checklist
conventions to construct students’ message
(mini-lessons include levels of usage; using the Step 1: Attend to Content
appropriate language including tone, style, and __ Am I saying what I want and/or need to say?
language for intended audience(s) and purpose; __ Are my ideas sufficiently explained or described?
writing beginnings and endings; writing effective __ Are there some gaps in my thinking/writing?
and varied sentences; using strong verbs).
Step 2: Attend to Organization
 teach students how to self-monitor, self-correct,
__ Are my ideas in the best order?
and use a variety of fix-up strategies (possible
__ Does each paragraph begin effectively (e.g., start
mini-lessons include double spacing, pausing
with a humourous anecdote, a personal
and rereading, crossing out, inserting, starting
experience, or point of the paragraph)?
over, pausing and reflecting).
 teach students how to confer with others and
Step 3: Attend to Usage, Sentence Structure, Word
revise work with writing partners (possible mini-
Choice, and Mechanics
lessons include conferencing, giving constructive
feedback, making changes based on feedback).
Usage
__ Is standard language used?
Revising and Presenting
Sentences
Revision occurs during the drafting stage and
__ Are all the sentences clear?
whenever the student is ready to polish and get
__ Are there any sentence fragments or run-ons?
something ready for sharing. Helping students use
__ Does each verb agree with its subject?
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9. __ Are verb tenses consistent and correct? extended student-teacher conferences and for peer
__ Have double negatives been avoided? conferences.
__ Have frequently confused words (such as affect
and effect) been used correctly? Checklists
Spelling Checklists may be helpful to students as they reflect
__ Are all words, including names, spelled correctly? upon their own writing and as they confer with peers
and the teacher. Conference checklists serve as
Punctuation and Capitalization scaffolds as students practise talking about writing.
__ Are commas used correctly? As well, conference checklists inform the teacher
__ Does every sentence end with the correct about the nature of peer interaction during writing
punctuation mark? conferences.
Handwriting Middle Level students also benefit from writing task
__ Are the letters legible? guidelines. For example,
__ Are there appropriate spaces between letters,
words, sentences, and paragraphs? A Sample Student Writing Task Checklist
The mechanics of written language are important Task: Writing a Fable
but need to be kept in context and taught in an Writer:
integrated and meaningful way. Prompt: You are a children’s writer. Write a fable
using animals as characters to teach an important
Within the framework of a balanced language arts moral to an Elementary Level student.
program, Middle Level students need explicit
instruction to learn to spell (Graham & Harris, 1994). Have students note the “Date Completed” for each
Poor spelling can influence perceptions about a of the following tasks.
student’s competence as a writer and interfere with
the execution of other composing processes Pre-Writing
(Graham, 1990; Scardamalia, Bereiter, & Goleman,
1982). Having to switch attention during composing __ Read five fables and took notes in my reading log
to mechanics, such as considering how to spell a __ Drew a story cluster of one fable
particular word, can cause a student to forget __ Identified the characteristics of fables
something s/he had planned to say but had not yet __ Brainstormed possible morals for a fable
written down. Difficulties mastering spelling skills can __ Planned a fable using a story cluster map
lead children to avoid writing and to develop a mind
set that they cannot write (Graham, 1999). Drafting
Handwriting is a basic communication skill that __ Marked paper as ROUGH DRAFT and wrote on
allows students to communicate with ease and every other line using story cluster map
fluency. “Learning a consistent system of printing and __ Allowed a cooling-off period
cursive writing is as essential as it ever was, __ Read first draft and noted possible changes and
especially for young writers …” (Allen, 2003, p. 6). revision to story
The lack of an automatic command of handwriting __ Wrote a second draft using suggestions
can inhibit students’ abilities to write. Students who __ Participated in a writing group and compared my
master the mechanics of handwriting are happier to fable with list of characteristics of fables
write, more expressive, and do a better job in content __ Made at least one revision
(Olsen, 2003). According to Hoskisson and Tompkins
(1987, p. 444), “Handwriting is best taught in separate Revising
periods of direct instruction (isolation) and teacher
supervised practice. As soon as skills are taught, they __ Had a conference with teacher
are applied in real-life writing activities within the __ Shared draft with a peer using the P (Praise) Q
classroom (integration).” (Question) P (Polish) as a guide
__ Edited fable using feedback and any additional
4. Support and guide students as they develop ideas
writing skills and strategies. __ Proofread with a partner and corrected any
spelling or other errors
During most of sustained writing time, the teacher __ Wrote the final copy in my best handwriting
should be circulating throughout the classroom, __ Added a title and an illustration
conducting brief informal conferences, and providing
instructional scaffolds for each student as needed.
As well, the teacher’s role is to build in time for
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10. Sharing
As you write ...
__ Shared fable with two other people
(Person 1: __________ Person 2: __________) Ask yourself some of these questions (or have a
__ Posted fable on classroom bulletin board conference partner ask them after reading the
writing-in-progress):
Writing Workshop
 How do I feel about what I have written so far?
Setting aside a block of time for writing by  What is good that I can enhance?
establishing a writing workshop can accommodate  Is there anything about it that concerns me,
the messy nature of writing and give the support that does not fit, or seems wrong?
many Middle Level students require. Assigning a set  What surprises me? Where is it leading?
time period, perhaps one day a week, for students to  What is my purpose?
write in class and giving support to individuals and  What is the one most important thing that I am
small groups of students during that time can make trying to convey?
a difference. In the writing workshop approach, most
 How can I build this idea? Are there places that
of the time (e.g., 30 minutes) is reserved for writing
I wander away from my key idea?
or writing-related activities such as pre-writing,
 Who is my audience?
drafting, researching, conferring, or preparing for
publication. Time can also be reserved for mini-  What might my readers think as they read
lessons (5-10 minutes), a class survey or status through this piece?
check to keep track of the students’ work and  What questions will they ask?
progress (2-3 minutes), and sharing sessions (5  What will be their response to the different
minutes). The teacher’s role is to serve as a writing parts? To the whole?
mentor and to act as a roving facilitator by helping  What might I do next? Would it help to try
each student make the most out of each writing another draft? Talk to a peer? Talk to the
project. teacher? Check a resource book? Reread it
aloud/silently? Read a published example of this
The students’ success or failure in a workshop genre? Try the idea in a new genre? Keep on
depends on their abilities to manage time effectively writing?
and to write. In the course of the writing workshop,
students should be working through the phases of
the writing process and may be: Conferences
 pre-writing by talking with one another about A writing conference is a conversation about writing
writing ideas and possibilities – the author’s ideas, structures, successes, and
 choosing a topic and focus that fit the assignment difficulties. Conferences, in pairs or small groups,
or interest students may or may not include the teacher. Writing
 exploring a topic and making plans conferences can take place at any time during the
 working alone on drafting and redrafting writing process. They may last only a few seconds
as writers check on a certain writing concept or
 working in small editorial groups
concern, or conferences may be extended
 conferencing with the teacher about specific
conversations several minutes in length. To
writing problems
encourage effective writing conferences, Middle
 helping one another with problems
Level teachers should establish an environment in
 revising and preparing for publication which students feel it is safe to take risks and where
 reading and sharing finished writing with small classroom procedures for conferencing are agreed
groups or the whole class. upon by teacher and students.
Writing workshops can focus on both writing for an Purposes of writing conferences include:
assignment and writing for personal reasons.
 to encourage writers to reflect, examine, and
Self-reflection helps students to improve their own evaluate their own writing – to “re-see” it
writing as well as to formulate specific questions that
 to assist writers in improving the quality of work
can provide a focus for the peer or teacher writing
 to engage students in talking in order to learn
conference. A list of questions such as the following
from themselves and others.
may assist students as they reflect upon their own
written work. These questions may be provided by
It is important that students recognize that
the teacher or developed with students.
conferencing about others’ writing does not mean
that they are expected to fix it. Only the writer has
the right and responsibility to make revisions and
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11. clarify meaning. Questions are often the most helpful
feedback, as they lead writers to reflect upon their Steps for a Peer Writing Conference
meaning and craft.
1. The writer decides how the written work will be
Teacher-Student Conferences shared. Will it be:
 read silently by the conference partner(s)?
While students are writing, the teacher can circulate  read aloud by the writer?
throughout the classroom, conducting informal  read aloud by the conference partner(s)?
conferences. During such conferences, the teacher  a combination of the above?
spends only a few minutes with each student, asking
questions or building needed scaffolds so that 2. The writer identifies what aspects of the written
students can continue writing. At other times, the work are the focus of the conference (e.g., the
teacher can hold longer, extended conferences. beginning paragraph, figurative language).
Effective questions can help the writer and lead to
improved written work. Questions can help writers to 3. The conference partner states at least:
reflect upon their work:  one thing he/she considers that the writer
has done well
 What is the part that you like best?  one thing he/she especially likes
 Does it say what you want it to say?  one suggestion that addresses the focus of
 What do you mean by …? the conference as identified by the writer. (It
 Where/when does your story take place? is useful to have students complete a written
 Are you satisfied with the beginning/ending? Why conference sheet to guide their responses,
or why not? especially when the process is new to them.)
 Does this sentence/word/phrase make sense to
you? 4. The writer retains the right to the written work
 What reaction do you want your reader to have? and is responsible for making the final decision
 How do you see your ideas being rearranged or about any changes.
changed? Why?
Peer Conferences
Guidelines for Successful Peer Conferencing
Peer conferences can be an important part of the
writing process as well as a useful teaching strategy. 1. Help others identify or clarify problems, but
During a peer conference, students are both remember only the writers can solve those
teachers and learners who: problems.
 write more because they have an immediate 2. Observe and share feelings, avoiding
audience judgement as much as possible.
 are more involved in and responsible for learning 3. Be brief and clear, dealing with immediate
because they are making choices and decisions concerns and the effect they have on you here
about own work and now.
 are able to retain ownership of written work 4. Listen closely to the writer’s concerns and
because they determine if and when to make use consider these concerns when reading or
of suggestions from others. listening to the written work.
5. Regarding the written piece itself, the
Teachers can assist students by providing conference partner(s) consider(s):
expectations for peer conferencing sessions. It can a. the beginning:
be useful to involve students in setting some of the Is it interesting? Does it grab your
expectations. The following examples may be attention?
discussed with students and posted for reference, or b. the middle:
may be adapted for student handouts. Does it leave out important details?
c. the ending:
Is it satisfying?
d. the language:
Is it clear and easy to understand? Is it
appropriate to the writer’s purpose,
audience, and format?
e. the focus or key idea:
Does the piece have a clear focus? Do all
elements of the piece relate to the focus?
To each other?
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12.  emphasize that all students have noteworthy
Tips for a Successful Proofreading Conference ideas and experiences about which to write
 demonstrate that writing involves decision making
Paragraphs: Is there a new paragraph for each new and that peers are valuable resources during the
idea or for each new speaker? Does one paragraph process
lead logically into the next paragraph?  help students recognize that writers should be
able to give reasons for the choices made
Sentences: Do they end with full-stop punctuation? regarding what and how writers communicate.
Is there subject-verb agreement? Are they varied in
length and complexity?
Standard Usage: Read the piece aloud to yourself or
a peer. Does the language sound correct? Check a
language handbook or talk to another person if you
are uncertain.
Spelling: When proofreading a piece, if a word looks
misspelled, try to spell the word in different ways:
sound it out, check the dictionary, or ask a peer.
Then record the word on your Personal Spelling List
for future reference.
Punctuation: Read the piece aloud to decide if the
punctuation creates pauses and stops that sound
right. Check another piece of literature or a language
handbook/resource to determine appropriate
punctuation.
Capitalization: Check for capital letters at the
beginnings of sentences and for proper nouns.
Be honest and fair when conferencing! Remember,
it is your job to help your partner become a better
writer.
Opportunities to Share Writing
Most writing is meant to be heard or read by an
audience. Writers are their own first audience, but
they also require the genuine response of others.
Teachers may wish to establish regular sharing
times (e.g., the end of each class period). This
encourages students to try out new ideas for writing
or sharing.
The Authors’ Circle (Graves & Hansen, 1983) is a
strategy that provides opportunities for students to
read their compositions to a small group of peers or,
if appropriate, to the entire class. Listeners react to
the writing, ask questions, and offer constructive
comments and responses. Authors’ Circles provide
opportunities to:
 demonstrate that writing is more than a
transaction between the student and teacher by
extending students’ sense of audience
 extend the skills of collaborative learning and peer
conferencing and editing
 experience different styles of writing
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13. Possible Writing Forms: A Sample Planning Chart
Possible Writing Unit 1 Unit 2 Unit 3 Unit 4 Unit 5 Unit 6
Experiences (Formats) (optional)
Accident Report
Advertisement
Advice column
Apology
Article
Autobiography
Ballad
Biography
Campaign speech
Chapter of a novel
Character analysis
Character sketch
Descriptive paragraph
Dialogue
Diary/journal
Directions
Ending
Essay
Eulogy
Expository paragraph
Fable or fairy tale
Fact sheet
Family history
Game rules
Greeting card
Horoscope
Instructions
Interview
Joke
Legend
Letter of complaint/inquiry
Narrative paragraph
News article
Parable
Personal experience story
Persuasive paragraph
Petition
Poem
Rap
Recipe
Reminiscence
Report/research paper
Review
Script/short play
Short story
Song
Sports column
Summary
Tall tale
Want ad
Wish list
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14. Sample Lesson Planning Guide for Writing
Outcome(s): (What will students learn and be able to do as a result of this activity?)
Assessment and Evaluation: (What do students already know and do as writers? What do students not know or
do as writers? What evidence will demonstrate that students have achieved the outcome?)
Prompt: (What is the task? Is it clearly stated? Does the prompt draw on students’ prior knowledge and
experiences or pique students’ interest in the topic?)
Pre-writing and Planning: (What pre-writing activities will help the students generate ideas for writing? What
activities will help students to focus on the task and formulate a writing plan?)
Drafting: (What strategies can help students prepare their first draft? Do students have the opportunity and time
to generate more than one draft?)
Revising: (What specific activities or guidelines will help students in their revisions? How will students be
motivated to rethink and reshape their papers and not just recopy them?)
Sharing: (What provisions are made for students to give and receive feedback on their drafts and revisions? How
can students share their final products with others?)
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15. Sample Teacher Checklist to Support Writing
1. Do I model and share writing strategies?
__ develop students’ explicit knowledge of the writing process and its recursive nature
__ introduce a variety of pre-writing, drafting, and revision strategies
2. Do I use mini-lessons to help students review or acquire writing skills or strategies or learn a specific language
concept?
__ analyze what individuals and groups of students need to know and build on what they already know
__ provide short but focused direct instruction about a language concept, convention, format, or issue
3. Do I provide opportunities for students to write for a variety of purposes and audiences?
__ encourage students to express themselves
__ provide opportunities for students to describe, narrate, inform, and persuade
__ provide opportunities for students to reflect, clarify, and explore ideas
__ provide opportunities for students to entertain
4. Do I provide students with, and help them to use, a variety of tools to assist students during their writing?
__ provide language handbooks
__ provide dictionaries and thesauri
__ use literature as models
__ include peer learning activities
__ design activities for students to use word processing software and the Internet
5. Do I encourage and instruct students about how to use writing as a means of thinking, responding, and
learning?
__ encourage students to collect writing ideas in journals (e.g., key phrases from Thanksgiving dinner, a
quick sketch of geese flying in formation)
__ provide time for students to write about what they are thinking (e.g., write down one question you have
about this topic)
__ allow students to review, think, and write about a topic again (e.g., write about how your ideas regarding
this topic have changed throughout the unit and why)
__ model and encourage use of a variety of strategies including jotting notes, creating idea webs,
researching, and designing outlines or overviews
__ provide opportunities for students to experiment with words and writing formats
6. Do I encourage students to use writing folders?
__ encourage students to use folders to sift, sort, and store pre-writing notes
__ encourage students to collect drafts for revision in writing folders
__ support students in collecting exemplary and polished work
7. Do I help students balance their attention to writing content, process, and product?
__ encourage students to generate ideas and say what students want to say
__ encourage students to use pre-writing, planning, drafting, conferencing, revising, editing, proofreading,
sharing, and publishing strategies
__ encourage students to develop drafts into polished, finished compositions
8. Do I involve students in assessing writing practices and behaviours?
__ identify students’ strengths and needs before, during, and after writing
__ consider peer, teacher, and self-assessments (e.g., peer and teacher conferences)
__ use checklists, rubrics, and anecdotal notes
__ use both holistic and analytical scoring
__ involve students in developing assessment criteria and determining evaluation weighting
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