AFL for Stellar WS and Practice
             Paper
   Our intensive preparation for SA2
Editing
• Note that there are actually 3 basic ways to
  write a dialogue.
• 1) Speaker in front.
• Eg. David said, “Let’s go to the bookshop after
  lunch.”
• 2)Speaker at the back.
• Eg. “Let’s go to the bookshop after lunch,” said
  David.
Editing
3) Speaker in the middle. (2 versions)
• “Let’s go to the bookshop,” said David,
  “after lunch.”
• “Let’s go to the bookshop after lunch,”
  said David. “Let’s try to avoid the crowd
  during peak hours.”
Editing (Spot the mistakes here)
• “I will be going to school to receive
  my PSLE results” said Claire.
• “I will be going to school to receive
  my PSLE results,” said Claire.
Editing (Spot the mistakes here)
• “I wonder how would I fare for my
  examinations,” Claire asked her Mum.
• “I wonder how would I fare for my
  examinations?” Claire asked her Mum.
• (Be sensitive to the nature of the
  dialogue is it a question or exclamation
  or statement?)
Editing (Spot the mistakes here)
• “Let go of me,” Claire shouted!
• “Let go of me!” Claire shouted.

• (Be sensitive to the nature of the
  dialogue is it a question or exclamation
  or statement?)
Editing (Spot the mistakes here)
• “I wonder how would I fare for my
  examinations,” Claire asked her
  Mum. “do you think I will do well?”
• “I wonder how would I fare for my
  examinations,” Claire asked her
  Mum. “Do you think I will do well?”
(This signals a short pause in her dialogue)
Editing (Spot the mistakes here)
• “I wonder how would I fare,” Claire
  asked her Mum. “for my
  examinations?”
• “I wonder how would I fare,” Claire
  asked her Mum, “for my
  examinations?”
(This signals that her dialogue is completed in
one breath.)
Editing (Which makes more sense
                  here?)
1. “I like you,” Tom teased, “not!”
2. “I like you,” Tom teased. “Not!”
(The pause is necessary here)
Other common questions for editing
(Which sentence is punctuated correctly?)
1. The dog is injured. It’s tail is
   bleeding profusely.
2. The dog is injured. Its tail is
   bleeding profusely.
(Note: it’s = it is / it was)
This is unlike the usual way for us to show
possession when we use the apostrophe. Eg.
Tom’s dog is injured.
Tenses and their uses
     An introduction
Do you know your past tenses and their
           respective uses?
1. Simple past tense-
eg. He ambled to the park yesterday.
2. Past continuous tense-
Eg. While he was cooking, the door
bell rang.
3. Past perfect tense
Do you know your past tenses and their
           respective uses?
Simple past tense-
eg. He ambled to the park yesterday.
Uses include:
To point out that the event happened
in the past.
Often used with a suitable time tag.
Do you know your past tenses and their
           respective uses?
Past continuous tense-
Eg. While he was cooking, the door bell rang.
Eg. While the people were sleeping, they felt
the ground shaking.
Uses:
1) When the focus is on the duration of the
event.
2) A longer event was interrupted with
another event.
Do you know your past tenses and their
            respective uses?
Past perfect tense
Eg. After he had taken a good rest, he felt better.
Uses:
It tells of a past event that had happened before
another past event.


Structure: Had + participle
Do you know your present tenses and their
              respective uses?
Simple present tense-
eg. He ambles in the park daily.
Uses include:
1) Factual statement.
Eg. Whales are mammals.
2) Current truths
Eg. Nick is the chairperson of class 4-7.
3) Habitual events (routines)
Eg. Pupils in class 4-7 do their OMOP almost daily.
Woon Ning submits the attendance every day.
Other common grammar structures to note:
1) Had + participle.
Had eat or had ate or had eaten?
2) Modals + infinitive (base word)
Could ate or could eat or could eaten?
3) To + infinitive * gerunds
To eaten or to ate or to eat
4) Sensory verbs + infinitive
Do we say …. She made me ate the cake
yesterday.
Or…. She made me eat the cake yesterday.
Do we say …. I saw Tim ate the cake yesterday.
Or…. I saw Tim eat the cake yesterday.

Recap on learning points

  • 1.
    AFL for StellarWS and Practice Paper Our intensive preparation for SA2
  • 2.
    Editing • Note thatthere are actually 3 basic ways to write a dialogue. • 1) Speaker in front. • Eg. David said, “Let’s go to the bookshop after lunch.” • 2)Speaker at the back. • Eg. “Let’s go to the bookshop after lunch,” said David.
  • 3.
    Editing 3) Speaker inthe middle. (2 versions) • “Let’s go to the bookshop,” said David, “after lunch.” • “Let’s go to the bookshop after lunch,” said David. “Let’s try to avoid the crowd during peak hours.”
  • 4.
    Editing (Spot themistakes here) • “I will be going to school to receive my PSLE results” said Claire. • “I will be going to school to receive my PSLE results,” said Claire.
  • 5.
    Editing (Spot themistakes here) • “I wonder how would I fare for my examinations,” Claire asked her Mum. • “I wonder how would I fare for my examinations?” Claire asked her Mum. • (Be sensitive to the nature of the dialogue is it a question or exclamation or statement?)
  • 6.
    Editing (Spot themistakes here) • “Let go of me,” Claire shouted! • “Let go of me!” Claire shouted. • (Be sensitive to the nature of the dialogue is it a question or exclamation or statement?)
  • 7.
    Editing (Spot themistakes here) • “I wonder how would I fare for my examinations,” Claire asked her Mum. “do you think I will do well?” • “I wonder how would I fare for my examinations,” Claire asked her Mum. “Do you think I will do well?” (This signals a short pause in her dialogue)
  • 8.
    Editing (Spot themistakes here) • “I wonder how would I fare,” Claire asked her Mum. “for my examinations?” • “I wonder how would I fare,” Claire asked her Mum, “for my examinations?” (This signals that her dialogue is completed in one breath.)
  • 9.
    Editing (Which makesmore sense here?) 1. “I like you,” Tom teased, “not!” 2. “I like you,” Tom teased. “Not!” (The pause is necessary here)
  • 10.
    Other common questionsfor editing (Which sentence is punctuated correctly?) 1. The dog is injured. It’s tail is bleeding profusely. 2. The dog is injured. Its tail is bleeding profusely. (Note: it’s = it is / it was) This is unlike the usual way for us to show possession when we use the apostrophe. Eg. Tom’s dog is injured.
  • 11.
    Tenses and theiruses An introduction
  • 12.
    Do you knowyour past tenses and their respective uses? 1. Simple past tense- eg. He ambled to the park yesterday. 2. Past continuous tense- Eg. While he was cooking, the door bell rang. 3. Past perfect tense
  • 13.
    Do you knowyour past tenses and their respective uses? Simple past tense- eg. He ambled to the park yesterday. Uses include: To point out that the event happened in the past. Often used with a suitable time tag.
  • 14.
    Do you knowyour past tenses and their respective uses? Past continuous tense- Eg. While he was cooking, the door bell rang. Eg. While the people were sleeping, they felt the ground shaking. Uses: 1) When the focus is on the duration of the event. 2) A longer event was interrupted with another event.
  • 15.
    Do you knowyour past tenses and their respective uses? Past perfect tense Eg. After he had taken a good rest, he felt better. Uses: It tells of a past event that had happened before another past event. Structure: Had + participle
  • 16.
    Do you knowyour present tenses and their respective uses? Simple present tense- eg. He ambles in the park daily. Uses include: 1) Factual statement. Eg. Whales are mammals. 2) Current truths Eg. Nick is the chairperson of class 4-7. 3) Habitual events (routines) Eg. Pupils in class 4-7 do their OMOP almost daily. Woon Ning submits the attendance every day.
  • 17.
    Other common grammarstructures to note: 1) Had + participle. Had eat or had ate or had eaten? 2) Modals + infinitive (base word) Could ate or could eat or could eaten? 3) To + infinitive * gerunds To eaten or to ate or to eat 4) Sensory verbs + infinitive Do we say …. She made me ate the cake yesterday. Or…. She made me eat the cake yesterday. Do we say …. I saw Tim ate the cake yesterday. Or…. I saw Tim eat the cake yesterday.