Seun learned valuable lessons from audience feedback on their music video and other works. The feedback helped them improve the quality and narrative clarity. For the music video, negative feedback noted some shaky camera shots and an unnatural interaction that could be reshot. Seun would also include more actors if given another chance. Feedback on the digipak said the artist wasn't clear and there were too many males, which Seun addressed. The website feedback said the promotion content needed more detail and genre clarity, which Seun also worked to improve.

1. 3. WHAT HAVE YOU
LEARNED FROM YOUR
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK?
SEUN OYEPITAN

2. Introduction to Audience Feedback
 This page will concentrate on group the criticisms of our peers and how it
helped me amid the production of my coursework and how it would
influence my choices if I somehow managed to do this once more. Each
segment is numbered and I will go from my music video to my. As a
matter of first importance I trust that it is essential to clarify why a group of
my peers and their input is a standout amongst the most key factors of a
outstanding media item. As we explored our gatherings of people and got
data off them it was anything but difficult to then change our plans,
thoughts and what went into my media items. The gathering of people is
key when finding what gets great admiration and what doesn’t functions
admirably so having numerous talks and requesting criticism from my
group of onlookers and educators was amazingly useful.

3. Feedback to earlier music drafts
 On my prior drafts we requested that our group which was a mixture of
our peers, family members and teachers watch our music video and give
us our due criticism. Their initial reactions were one of excitement at the
prospect of our new video although there were some its we could
improve. Nevertheless, they said that the possibility of outstanding
performance and narrative was evident and could obviously be seen inside
our video.

4. Positive feedback on final cut.
 Our main base for positive feedback was about the that it had a very clear
narrative and it was constructed extremely efficiently. Furthermore, they
said that as out narrative was clear they could really connect with the video
especially if they were supporters of that said genre.
 Some also liked the way we connected the music video lyrics and narrative
as they said there was a clear connection between it both and they said
that since there was a good connection they understood the message we
tried to show in the video exceptionally.

5. Negative Feedback
 One bit of negative criticism we got was that in many of our scenes we
could have been better with a stale camera as we had some shots that
were a bit shaky especially when zooming in on our artist. Also one
performance botch we made was that when our male protagonist was
meeting up with our female protagonist she was waiting for him to put his
arm around her so it looked highly scripted.
 I feel that these negative remarks did help us sufficiently and it also aided
us as we combatted and settled on the off chance that we had additional
time so we could reshoot certain scenes and it also gave us a clear plan of
what we could do.

6. How I would improve my video given
the chance to do it again.
 I would ensure that every one of the shots are a similar quality and of
good quality with the goal that it doesn't look shaky and give it a more
expert feel. I would likewise ensure the lighting is reasonable and enables
the group of onlookers to see all the individuals inside the scene. I would
also aim to implement the use of our second female actress and include
the young males ore in the video and not just putting them in the video
for placing sakes.

7. Digipak Feedback
 On a prior draft of my Digipak I was informed that it had clear connections
to my music video and overall identity of my artist. In any case, I was
additionally let it know had numerous issues, for example, as for our initial
idea for our digipak we had too many males on the cover and the
audience did not know who the main artist was.
 I trust I have redressed these issues by including the utilization of the
portray channel the vast majority of the pages while additionally keeping
the utilization of greyscale it just minimizing the peoples in the video.. I
have additionally changed and to some degree disentangled and we
edited the font to identify with out artist and his background in the
modern day graffiti font. Alongside this I have incorporated the utilization
of close up shots and a long shot of our artist.

8. Website Feedback
 On a prior draft of my website I was informed that the symbolism and
connection to the collection digipak was great and demonstrated a
capable utilization of wix.com and overall technological knowledge.. Be
that as it may, individuals found the promotion content hazardous as it
was difficult to as it wasn’t too detailed and many people failed to
understand what genre it fell into so they couldn't appreciate the specific
way we conformed to our genre.
 I trust I have corrected these issues by exchanging the places of the
content, including more detail, changing the textual style and including
various images while making it clear what genre it fell into so that the
content emerges and is readable.