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Pitch
Today we presented our pitch-
Overall, I believe our pitch was successful, the audience was very positive about our
concept/idea, they gave us some very good feedback witch will take in and edit the way we
We’re going to do things, this included –
- Our actors may look a little too young to play the role of our characters - to fix this we are
going to tell our actors too grow out there facial and we will also add make up to make them
look more believable.
- As we are focusing on racism, the audiences suggested that we should be careful on how we
present it, as if we overdo it, some may think we are making a joke out of it and if we do it
too subtlety the audience may not notice it at all, so we will be very cautious on how we
approach the subject and how we present it.
-
We will dothese thingstoensure ourfilmisthe bestpossibleitcanbe,the pitch wasveryuseful as
we got a lot of informationandfeedback,I’mgladwe diditasits givenusa clearerideaof whatwe
needtofocuson.

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Pitch analysis

  • 1. Pitch Today we presented our pitch- Overall, I believe our pitch was successful, the audience was very positive about our concept/idea, they gave us some very good feedback witch will take in and edit the way we We’re going to do things, this included – - Our actors may look a little too young to play the role of our characters - to fix this we are going to tell our actors too grow out there facial and we will also add make up to make them look more believable. - As we are focusing on racism, the audiences suggested that we should be careful on how we present it, as if we overdo it, some may think we are making a joke out of it and if we do it too subtlety the audience may not notice it at all, so we will be very cautious on how we approach the subject and how we present it. - We will dothese thingstoensure ourfilmisthe bestpossibleitcanbe,the pitch wasveryuseful as we got a lot of informationandfeedback,I’mgladwe diditasits givenusa clearerideaof whatwe needtofocuson.