Tips to take your writing from stagnant to stunning! Slides from a two-part presentation by author/speaker Linda Fulkerson. Part One: Breaking Bad Habits. Part Two: Rev Up Your Writing. To learn more about Linda Fulkerson or to request her to speak at your group, visit her website: http://lindafulkerson.com.
Polished Paper provides our clients with on-demand professional English language editing and proofreading services designed to meet all of your needs. Whether your goals are academic, professional, or creative, you can rest assured that Polished Paper will be with you as your partner in success, today, tomorrow, and beyond.
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This presentation provides detailed tips and techniques on crafting action sequences that put the reader right in the midst of the tumult. Complete with example excerpts.
This was delivered at the Sleuthfest mystery convention in Boca Raton on March 1, 2018.
A live audio version of this workshop, along with the live audio for three more of the presentations I have posted on this site, are available for purchase from VW Tapes: Conference & Seminar Recording. If the link below doesn't work, please go to the VW Tapes webpage and type my name in the Search box.
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Polished Paper provides our clients with on-demand professional English language editing and proofreading services designed to meet all of your needs. Whether your goals are academic, professional, or creative, you can rest assured that Polished Paper will be with you as your partner in success, today, tomorrow, and beyond.
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Writing Action Scenes: You'll be Lucky to SurviveVincent O'Neil
This presentation provides detailed tips and techniques on crafting action sequences that put the reader right in the midst of the tumult. Complete with example excerpts.
This was delivered at the Sleuthfest mystery convention in Boca Raton on March 1, 2018.
A live audio version of this workshop, along with the live audio for three more of the presentations I have posted on this site, are available for purchase from VW Tapes: Conference & Seminar Recording. If the link below doesn't work, please go to the VW Tapes webpage and type my name in the Search box.
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Presented at the 2019 Boskone science fiction convention in Boston, this workshop offers tips and examples for punching up the dialogue sequences in your writing.
Writing For Humans: 10 Tips to Defeat Robot Overlords of CopyBloomerang
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https://bloomerang.co/resources/webinars/
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Instead of using the canned slides, I created my own presentation based on my 16 years of experience as a Toastmaster where I've given over 250 evaluations, and heard at least 2,000.
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f you offer a service on the web, odds are that someone will abuse it. Be it an API, a SaaS, a PaaS, or even a static website, someone somewhere will try to figure out a way to use it to their own needs. In this talk we'll compare measures that are effective against static attackers and how to battle a dynamic attacker who adapts to your counter-measures.
About the Speaker
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Diogo Sousa, Engineering Manager @ Canonical
An opinionated individual with an interest in cryptography and its intersection with secure software development.
0x01 - Newton's Third Law: Static vs. Dynamic Abusers
Perk up your prose
1. Perk Up Your Prose:
Tips to Take Your Writing from
Stagnant to Stunning
2. No Bad Writing!
• Example from one of
my WIPs: “She
screamed at the top of
her lungs.”
• It’s cliche.
• It’s telling.
• It’s unemotional (a.k.a. BORING!).
• It’s wordy.
• It’s not even physically possible.
• Besides -- what did her lungs do to
3. • Polish the PUGS
• Resist the Urge to
Explain
• Trim the Fat
• Weed Out Wordiness
• Prune Prepositions
• Avoid Backing In
• Cut Clichés
• Patch POV Glitches
• Show, Don’t Tell
• Ditch the Danglers
• Ready, Set, Action!
• Eliminate the Great
Backstory Dump
Part I -- Breaking Bad
Habits (The Dirty Dozen)
9. Avoid Backing In
• Begin sentences
with subjects and
verbs -- and then
branch right (old
journalism rule).
• John Steinbeck
was a master at
this technique.
10. Cut Clichés
• Clichés are:
• Almost always
“telling.”
• Boring because
they’re
predictable.
• Lazy writing.
11. Patch POV Glitches
• Whose story is it,
anyway?
• Limit one POV
per scene (and to
one POV for
short stories &
essays).
• Who would think
that?
12. Show, Don’t Tell
• Use dialogue
• Use sensory
language
• Be descriptive
• Be specific
14. Ready, Set, Action!
• The problem with
passiveness . . .
• It’s telling.
• It’s boring.
• It’s not specific.
• It’s often lazy
writing.
15. Eliminate the
Great Backstory Dump
• Place backstory
as late in the
story as possible.
• Make the reader
wonder.
• Introduce
backstory bit by
bit.
16. • Ground the Reader
• Do You Hear What I
Hear (see, feel, etc.)?
• Emotional Impact
• Literary Devices
• Think Like a
Cinematographer
• Set the Scene
• Storytelling vs.
Reporting
• Listen to Your Critics
• Funny Thing,
Research
• Dynamic Dialogue
• Create Cliffhangers
• Brainstorming Tips
Part II -- Rev Up Your
Writing
18. Do You Hear What I Hear
(See, Feel, Taste, Smell)?
• Does each scene
include sensory
details?
• Be specific and if
possible, attach
the sense to an
emotional
experience.
19. Emotional Impact
• You’re not paid to
be nice!
• Are You
Motivated?
• Go for the Goal!
• Stacking the
Dominoes . . .
24. Listen to Your Critics
• No one enjoys
criticism --
especially of a
creative work.
• Use all critiques
as a positive
learning
experience and
you will grow as
25. Funny Thing, Research
• Search for the
Truth -- because
someone will
know if you
don’t.
• Don’t Scream, “I
did my research!”
26. Dynamic Dialogue
• Tag, Don’t Tell
• Talk Like a Man
(or woman, or
child . . .)
• Adding “Oomph”
• Basic format
27. Internal Cliffhangers
• Leave the reader
in suspense by
ending with a
dramatic element
before breaks in
action.
• Dare the reader to
stop reading.
28. Brainstorming Tips
• Listen to music.
• People watch.
• Character correspondence.
• Pick a partner.
• Get in tune with nature.
• Read poetry.
• Conduct a word study.