It’s all about properly arranging 
bricks to build a solid house to last 
for centuries. 
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There is nothing to writing. All 
you do is sit down at a 
typewriter and …bl…ee…d .. 
The scariest moment is always 
just before you…….s..t.art 
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Define paragraph; 
Plan a Paragraph; 
Write a Topic Sentence; 
Write Supporting Sentences; 
Organize Supporting Sentences; 
Write a Concluding Sentence; 
Practice. 
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a group of sentences; 
The blue whale is the largest whale and 
also the largest mammal that has ever 
lived. It weighs at least 90 tonnes and 
the biggest blue whale may weigh more 
than twice this amount. Although it is so 
huge, the blue whale is not a fierce 
hunter. It eats tiny shrimp-like creatures 
called krill. It may gobble up as many 
as four million of these in a day. 
The blue whale is the largest whale 
and also the largest mammal that 
has ever lived. Most of the 37 or so 
species of dolphin live in the sea, but 
there are five that live in rivers. Great 
white sharks are mostly about 7 
metres long, but some can grow up 
to 12 metres. 
develop a singe idea or topic. 
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 topic sentence (TS) – 
 states the main idea; 
 usually at the beginning of the paragraph 
 supporting sentences (SS) – 
 explain / develop the TS; 
 every sentence relates to the TS 
 a concluding sentences – 
 summarizes the SS; 
 states a conclusion about TS; 
 not needed in some paragraphs. 
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all of the supporting sentences relate to the 
main idea! 
COHERENCE 
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A dolphin is a small whale. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live in 
the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. They live in warm seas all 
over the world. Great white sharks are mostly about 7 metres long, but 
some can grow up to 12 metres. The biggest dolphin is usually known as 
the killer whale, or orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres long. Great white 
sharks are fierce hunters and attack large fish and other creatures such 
as sea lions. Dolphins have a streamlined shape and a beaked stout 
containing lots of sharp teeth. They are fast swimmers and they catch 
sea creatures such as fish and squid to eat. Behind these teeth are row 
ones, ready to replace teeth at the front that get damaged or broken. A 
form of ultrasound help dolphins find their prey. Their main weapons are 
their large, jagged-edged teeth, which they use to kill prey and to tear it 
apart. A dolphin gives off a series of high-frequency clicking sounds that 
bounce off anything in their path. The echoes tell the dolphin about the 
size and direction of the pray. 
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A dolphin is a small whale. Most of 
the 37 or so species of dolphin live 
in the sea, but there are five that live 
in rivers. The biggest dolphin is 
usually known as the killer whale, or 
orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres 
long. Dolphins have a streamlined 
shape and a beaked stout containing 
lots of sharp teeth. They are fast 
swimmers and they catch sea 
creatures such as fish and squid to 
eat. A form of ultrasound help 
dolphins find their prey. A dolphin 
gives off a series of high-frequency 
clicking sounds that bounce off 
anything in their path. The echoes 
tell the dolphin about the size and 
direction of the pray. 
Great white sharks are mostly 
about 7 metres long, but some 
can grow up to 12 metres. They 
live in warm seas all over the 
world. Great white sharks are 
fierce hunters and attack large 
fish and other creatures such as 
sea lions. Their main weapons 
are their large, jagged-edged 
teeth, which they use to kill prey 
and to tear it apart. Behind 
these teeth are row ones, ready 
to replace teeth at the front that 
get damaged or broken. 
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select and limit a topic – 
Travelling 
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Strategies: 
Select an example of the general topic: 
General topic: Nineteenth-century American 
Authors 
Limited topic: Allan Edgar Poe 
 Substitute a shorter period for a longer 
one: 
General topic: The History of English 
Limited topic: Words that came into English 
during the Space Age 
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 Divide your topic into parts and focus on one 
of the parts: 
General topic: The White House 
Limited topic: The Oval Office 
 Limit your topic to a specific condition, place, 
or purpose: 
General topic: Shopping 
Limited topic: Shopping on a tight budget 
(condition) 
General topic: Training a dog 
Limited topic: Training a dog on command 
(purpose) 
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 list and choose details – 
 clock tower; 
 Elizabeth tower (2 June 2012) diamond jubilee; 
 part of Charles Barry's design for a new palace, after the old Palace 
of Westminster was largely destroyed by fire on October 16,1834; 
 one of the world's most famous tourist attractions; 
 the interior of the tower is not open to overseas visitors; 
 leans slightly to the north-west (changes in ground conditions since 
construction). 
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Must state precisely the idea that unifies 
the other sentences in the paragraph; 
Should be neither too general nor too 
narrow. 
Before writing TS, you should look over the 
list and selected details 
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 Big Ben clock tower; 
 Elizabeth tower (2 June 2012) diamond jubilee; 
 part of Charles Barry's design for a new palace, after the 
old Palace of Westminster was largely destroyed by fire on 
October 16,1834; 
 one of the world's most famous tourist attractions; 
 the interior of the tower is not open to overseas visitors; 
 leans slightly to the north-west (changes in ground 
conditions since construction). 
A. Big Ben is a clock. 
B. Big Ben is England’s famous clock that attracts many 
tourists 
C. Elizabeth Tower, also known as the Clock Tower, has 
become one of London’s most famous tourist 
attractions. 
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provide a detailed picture of the idea 
revealed in TS; 
choose supporting ideas according to your 
purpose: 
 describe (a person, event, etc) = facts; 
 explain = examples; 
 facts+events. 
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A fact is information that is known with certainty or that can 
be checked for accuracy, such as dates, events, 
measurements, and physical characteristics. 
A man named David rice Atchison was President of the United States 
for one day and didn’t know it. According to a nineteenth-century law, 
if neither the President nor the Vice President was in office, the 
president pro tempore of the Senate became chief executive. On 
March 4, 1849, President James Knox Polk’s term had lapsed, and 
the newly elected Zachary Taylor could not yet be sworn in (it was a 
Sunday). So for one day Atchison was President. It was not until 
several months later that Atchison learned of this, as the law was then 
an obscure one. Is has since been changed. 
David Louis, Fascinating Facts 
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An example is a member or a trait that is typical of a whole 
group. 
A dolphin is a small whale. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live 
in the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. The biggest dolphin is 
usually known as the killer whale, or orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres 
long. Dolphins have a streamlined shape and a beaked stout containing 
lots of sharp teeth. They are fast swimmers and they catch sea 
creatures such as fish and squid to eat. A form of ultrasound help 
dolphins find their prey. A dolphin gives off a series of high-frequency 
clicking sounds that bounce off anything in their path. The echoes tell 
the dolphin about the size and direction of the pray. 
Viorica Condrat
The supporting ideas in a well-organized paragraph form a train 
of thought in which one idea closely follows another. 
Chronological order; 
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Spatial order; 
Order of importance.
 A way of organizing events or steps in the time order in which 
they take place; 
Useful for telling a story or explaining how to do something. 
The expression “Your name is mud” came about as a result of the trial 
of Dr. Samuel Alexander Mudd for his alleged involvement in the 
assassination of President Abraham Lincoln. President Lincoln was 
shot by the actor John Wilkes Booth on the night of April 14, 1865, as 
the President watched a play at Ford’s Theatre. While escaping from 
the theatre, Booth broke his leg. Afterward, he showed up at the home 
of Dr. Mudd, asking for assistance. Dr. Mudd reportedly set Booth’s 
leg, and Booth continued on his way. Later, Dr. Mudd was charged 
with being a conspirator in the assassination. Although he pleaded 
innocent, he was convicted and sentenced to life imprisonment in the 
military prison known as Shark Island. In time, his name became a 
badge of dishonor. 
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 transitional words and phrases 
after before in the end 
after a while earlier meanwhile 
as soon as first next 
at first finally then 
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 organization of supporting details according to their place 
in space; 
transitional words and phrases. 
across beside inside 
around between on 
behind down toward 
beneath in front of under 
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 organization of supporting details according to their 
importance; 
Start with the most important idea and proceed to the 
least important idea (or vice versa); 
transitional words and phrases. 
better yet first more important 
best of all in the first place worse yet 
finally least important worst 
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You can end your paragraph with the final sentence in a series of supporting 
sentences. At other times, however, you may write a concluding sentence. A 
concluding sentence restates what you have said in the topic sentence or offers 
a final comment on the topic. 
One of the greatest literary families of nineteenth-century England, the 
brothers Currer, Ellis, and Acton Bell, were actually sisters, not brothers, 
and their family name was Bronte, not Bell. The middle of the nineteenth 
century did not offer favorable opportunities for female writers. Thus, when 
Charlotte, Emily, and Anne Bronte decided to submit their novels for 
publication, they did so using male names. Charlotte Bronte, the oldest 
sister and the creator of Jane Eyre, called herself Currer Bell, Emily 
Bronte, the middle sister and author of Wuthering Heights, used the name 
Ellis Bell. Anne Bronte, the youngest sister and author of Agnes Grey, 
became Acton Bell. So it was that the Bronte sisters, three of the most 
talented novelists of the time, became the Bell brothers, three of the best-known 
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novelists of the time.
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Paragraph Writing

  • 1.
    It’s all aboutproperly arranging bricks to build a solid house to last for centuries. Viorica Condrat
  • 2.
    There is nothingto writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and …bl…ee…d .. The scariest moment is always just before you…….s..t.art Viorica Condrat
  • 3.
    Define paragraph; Plana Paragraph; Write a Topic Sentence; Write Supporting Sentences; Organize Supporting Sentences; Write a Concluding Sentence; Practice. Viorica Condrat
  • 4.
    a group ofsentences; The blue whale is the largest whale and also the largest mammal that has ever lived. It weighs at least 90 tonnes and the biggest blue whale may weigh more than twice this amount. Although it is so huge, the blue whale is not a fierce hunter. It eats tiny shrimp-like creatures called krill. It may gobble up as many as four million of these in a day. The blue whale is the largest whale and also the largest mammal that has ever lived. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live in the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. Great white sharks are mostly about 7 metres long, but some can grow up to 12 metres. develop a singe idea or topic. Viorica Condrat
  • 5.
     topic sentence(TS) –  states the main idea;  usually at the beginning of the paragraph  supporting sentences (SS) –  explain / develop the TS;  every sentence relates to the TS  a concluding sentences –  summarizes the SS;  states a conclusion about TS;  not needed in some paragraphs. Viorica Condrat
  • 6.
    all of thesupporting sentences relate to the main idea! COHERENCE Viorica Condrat
  • 7.
  • 8.
    A dolphin isa small whale. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live in the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. They live in warm seas all over the world. Great white sharks are mostly about 7 metres long, but some can grow up to 12 metres. The biggest dolphin is usually known as the killer whale, or orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres long. Great white sharks are fierce hunters and attack large fish and other creatures such as sea lions. Dolphins have a streamlined shape and a beaked stout containing lots of sharp teeth. They are fast swimmers and they catch sea creatures such as fish and squid to eat. Behind these teeth are row ones, ready to replace teeth at the front that get damaged or broken. A form of ultrasound help dolphins find their prey. Their main weapons are their large, jagged-edged teeth, which they use to kill prey and to tear it apart. A dolphin gives off a series of high-frequency clicking sounds that bounce off anything in their path. The echoes tell the dolphin about the size and direction of the pray. Viorica Condrat
  • 9.
    A dolphin isa small whale. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live in the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. The biggest dolphin is usually known as the killer whale, or orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres long. Dolphins have a streamlined shape and a beaked stout containing lots of sharp teeth. They are fast swimmers and they catch sea creatures such as fish and squid to eat. A form of ultrasound help dolphins find their prey. A dolphin gives off a series of high-frequency clicking sounds that bounce off anything in their path. The echoes tell the dolphin about the size and direction of the pray. Great white sharks are mostly about 7 metres long, but some can grow up to 12 metres. They live in warm seas all over the world. Great white sharks are fierce hunters and attack large fish and other creatures such as sea lions. Their main weapons are their large, jagged-edged teeth, which they use to kill prey and to tear it apart. Behind these teeth are row ones, ready to replace teeth at the front that get damaged or broken. Viorica Condrat
  • 10.
    select and limita topic – Travelling Viorica Condrat
  • 11.
    Strategies: Select anexample of the general topic: General topic: Nineteenth-century American Authors Limited topic: Allan Edgar Poe  Substitute a shorter period for a longer one: General topic: The History of English Limited topic: Words that came into English during the Space Age Viorica Condrat
  • 12.
     Divide yourtopic into parts and focus on one of the parts: General topic: The White House Limited topic: The Oval Office  Limit your topic to a specific condition, place, or purpose: General topic: Shopping Limited topic: Shopping on a tight budget (condition) General topic: Training a dog Limited topic: Training a dog on command (purpose) Viorica Condrat
  • 13.
     list andchoose details –  clock tower;  Elizabeth tower (2 June 2012) diamond jubilee;  part of Charles Barry's design for a new palace, after the old Palace of Westminster was largely destroyed by fire on October 16,1834;  one of the world's most famous tourist attractions;  the interior of the tower is not open to overseas visitors;  leans slightly to the north-west (changes in ground conditions since construction). Viorica Condrat
  • 14.
    Must state preciselythe idea that unifies the other sentences in the paragraph; Should be neither too general nor too narrow. Before writing TS, you should look over the list and selected details Viorica Condrat
  • 15.
     Big Benclock tower;  Elizabeth tower (2 June 2012) diamond jubilee;  part of Charles Barry's design for a new palace, after the old Palace of Westminster was largely destroyed by fire on October 16,1834;  one of the world's most famous tourist attractions;  the interior of the tower is not open to overseas visitors;  leans slightly to the north-west (changes in ground conditions since construction). A. Big Ben is a clock. B. Big Ben is England’s famous clock that attracts many tourists C. Elizabeth Tower, also known as the Clock Tower, has become one of London’s most famous tourist attractions. Viorica Condrat
  • 16.
    provide a detailedpicture of the idea revealed in TS; choose supporting ideas according to your purpose:  describe (a person, event, etc) = facts;  explain = examples;  facts+events. Viorica Condrat
  • 17.
    A fact isinformation that is known with certainty or that can be checked for accuracy, such as dates, events, measurements, and physical characteristics. A man named David rice Atchison was President of the United States for one day and didn’t know it. According to a nineteenth-century law, if neither the President nor the Vice President was in office, the president pro tempore of the Senate became chief executive. On March 4, 1849, President James Knox Polk’s term had lapsed, and the newly elected Zachary Taylor could not yet be sworn in (it was a Sunday). So for one day Atchison was President. It was not until several months later that Atchison learned of this, as the law was then an obscure one. Is has since been changed. David Louis, Fascinating Facts Viorica Condrat
  • 18.
    An example isa member or a trait that is typical of a whole group. A dolphin is a small whale. Most of the 37 or so species of dolphin live in the sea, but there are five that live in rivers. The biggest dolphin is usually known as the killer whale, or orca, and grows up to 9.4 metres long. Dolphins have a streamlined shape and a beaked stout containing lots of sharp teeth. They are fast swimmers and they catch sea creatures such as fish and squid to eat. A form of ultrasound help dolphins find their prey. A dolphin gives off a series of high-frequency clicking sounds that bounce off anything in their path. The echoes tell the dolphin about the size and direction of the pray. Viorica Condrat
  • 19.
    The supporting ideasin a well-organized paragraph form a train of thought in which one idea closely follows another. Chronological order; Viorica Condrat Spatial order; Order of importance.
  • 20.
     A wayof organizing events or steps in the time order in which they take place; Useful for telling a story or explaining how to do something. The expression “Your name is mud” came about as a result of the trial of Dr. Samuel Alexander Mudd for his alleged involvement in the assassination of President Abraham Lincoln. President Lincoln was shot by the actor John Wilkes Booth on the night of April 14, 1865, as the President watched a play at Ford’s Theatre. While escaping from the theatre, Booth broke his leg. Afterward, he showed up at the home of Dr. Mudd, asking for assistance. Dr. Mudd reportedly set Booth’s leg, and Booth continued on his way. Later, Dr. Mudd was charged with being a conspirator in the assassination. Although he pleaded innocent, he was convicted and sentenced to life imprisonment in the military prison known as Shark Island. In time, his name became a badge of dishonor. Viorica Condrat
  • 21.
     transitional wordsand phrases after before in the end after a while earlier meanwhile as soon as first next at first finally then Viorica Condrat
  • 22.
     organization ofsupporting details according to their place in space; transitional words and phrases. across beside inside around between on behind down toward beneath in front of under Viorica Condrat
  • 23.
     organization ofsupporting details according to their importance; Start with the most important idea and proceed to the least important idea (or vice versa); transitional words and phrases. better yet first more important best of all in the first place worse yet finally least important worst Viorica Condrat
  • 24.
    You can endyour paragraph with the final sentence in a series of supporting sentences. At other times, however, you may write a concluding sentence. A concluding sentence restates what you have said in the topic sentence or offers a final comment on the topic. One of the greatest literary families of nineteenth-century England, the brothers Currer, Ellis, and Acton Bell, were actually sisters, not brothers, and their family name was Bronte, not Bell. The middle of the nineteenth century did not offer favorable opportunities for female writers. Thus, when Charlotte, Emily, and Anne Bronte decided to submit their novels for publication, they did so using male names. Charlotte Bronte, the oldest sister and the creator of Jane Eyre, called herself Currer Bell, Emily Bronte, the middle sister and author of Wuthering Heights, used the name Ellis Bell. Anne Bronte, the youngest sister and author of Agnes Grey, became Acton Bell. So it was that the Bronte sisters, three of the most talented novelists of the time, became the Bell brothers, three of the best-known Viorica Condrat novelists of the time.
  • 25.