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Will Walters, Laura Young, Rhys
Cockerline, Curtis Round
“MISSING”
POSSIBLE OPENING: First of all there will be a news report, explaining how there is a girl that
has gone missing. The news report will cut to a black screen.
2: A kitchen scene will fade in, there will be low key lighting/ the it will cut in to the click of a kettle
turning on. There will be different styles of shots varying from close ups, to extreme close ups, to
establishing shots. These will show the setting and also show the emotions.
3: Dad will storm out, close up to Mum sighing. She will do the washing up, see the child playing
in the garden.
4: The mother will experience numerous ‘flashbacks’ of the child in different scenarios, such as in
the garden, at the school gates.
ENDING 1:
Mum is watching TV, cooker timer goes, she goes into the kitchen and shouts the child, goes into
the kitchen, plates up, news report in the background, photo of the child comes up.
ENDING 2:
Mum tucks the child in, says good night, goes to bedroom, camera passes by photos of the child
and news paper cuttings saying the child was missing years ago.
STORYLINE
1. Uninvited: Our short film has a similar concept to the film The
Uninvited. In the uninvited a girl imagines that she is spending
time with her sister, when really her sister is dead.
2. Sixth sense: We see mortals visually seeing immortals which is a
concept that may run in our short film
3. The Others: We see yet again the dead being witnessed by
humans.
4. The Lovely Bones: Girl gets murdered and then re-appears as a
ghost, although she is not seen regularly, she can see the
mortals, has contact with them and in one occasion she is seen.
CONCEPT
1. Julie (Mother) Witness,
2. Steve (Father)
3. Isabelle (Child)
4. Robert Jones (news reader)
CHARACTERS
Locations: Kitchen, Garden, News report office, school, living room
Costume/Props: Mother’s attire- Casual clothing, Housewife
Father- Smart, business type clothing, man about the town
Child- Colourful, feminine clothing with possible fancy dress
Significant object- The child’s teddy bear.
MISE EN SCENE
Age- 15 – 30 due to the serious nature of the film
Those with a specific interest in abduction cases.
Mixed gender audience as it doesn’t conform to any specific
stereotypes for either males or females.
AUDIENCE PROFILE
Relationship: Between the mother, husband and child
Theme: Dramatic fall-out, Woman holds onto past and therefore
creates a false existence of the child. Repressed memory of dramatic
event triggers this behavior.
Time: The news report at the end of the film reveals element of time
by showing the audience that the girl has not been present the whole
time and that the mother had been imagining it
THEMES, TIME & RELATIONSHIP

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Our Short Film Pitch

  • 1. Will Walters, Laura Young, Rhys Cockerline, Curtis Round “MISSING”
  • 2. POSSIBLE OPENING: First of all there will be a news report, explaining how there is a girl that has gone missing. The news report will cut to a black screen. 2: A kitchen scene will fade in, there will be low key lighting/ the it will cut in to the click of a kettle turning on. There will be different styles of shots varying from close ups, to extreme close ups, to establishing shots. These will show the setting and also show the emotions. 3: Dad will storm out, close up to Mum sighing. She will do the washing up, see the child playing in the garden. 4: The mother will experience numerous ‘flashbacks’ of the child in different scenarios, such as in the garden, at the school gates. ENDING 1: Mum is watching TV, cooker timer goes, she goes into the kitchen and shouts the child, goes into the kitchen, plates up, news report in the background, photo of the child comes up. ENDING 2: Mum tucks the child in, says good night, goes to bedroom, camera passes by photos of the child and news paper cuttings saying the child was missing years ago. STORYLINE
  • 3. 1. Uninvited: Our short film has a similar concept to the film The Uninvited. In the uninvited a girl imagines that she is spending time with her sister, when really her sister is dead. 2. Sixth sense: We see mortals visually seeing immortals which is a concept that may run in our short film 3. The Others: We see yet again the dead being witnessed by humans. 4. The Lovely Bones: Girl gets murdered and then re-appears as a ghost, although she is not seen regularly, she can see the mortals, has contact with them and in one occasion she is seen. CONCEPT
  • 4. 1. Julie (Mother) Witness, 2. Steve (Father) 3. Isabelle (Child) 4. Robert Jones (news reader) CHARACTERS
  • 5. Locations: Kitchen, Garden, News report office, school, living room Costume/Props: Mother’s attire- Casual clothing, Housewife Father- Smart, business type clothing, man about the town Child- Colourful, feminine clothing with possible fancy dress Significant object- The child’s teddy bear. MISE EN SCENE
  • 6. Age- 15 – 30 due to the serious nature of the film Those with a specific interest in abduction cases. Mixed gender audience as it doesn’t conform to any specific stereotypes for either males or females. AUDIENCE PROFILE
  • 7. Relationship: Between the mother, husband and child Theme: Dramatic fall-out, Woman holds onto past and therefore creates a false existence of the child. Repressed memory of dramatic event triggers this behavior. Time: The news report at the end of the film reveals element of time by showing the audience that the girl has not been present the whole time and that the mother had been imagining it THEMES, TIME & RELATIONSHIP