WRITING SKILL:
ORGANIZING AND DEVELOPING AN
ESSAY
SarahWarfield
VCU ELP
Spring 2016
ANALYSIS ESSAY
An analysis essay examines a topic
by breaking it down into smaller
parts.
PARTS OF AN ESSAY
Every essay contains
an introduction
one or more body paragraphs
a conclusion
INTRODUCTION
The reader should be interested
INTRODUCTION
a “hook”
background information
general statements
a thesis statement
topic and controlling idea
Tells the reader the purpose of the essay
HOOK
catches the reader’s attention
THESIS STATEMENT
topic and controlling idea
controlling idea: a specific idea of
an opinion about the topic
THESIS STATEMENT
A role model inspires people to do
their best.
TOPIC = role model
CONTROLLING IDEA = inspires
people to do their best
THESIS STATEMENT
The “data model” is a powerful tool
for management feedback and
strategic planning.
TOPIC:The “data model”
CONTROLLING IDEA: a power
powerful tool for management
feedback and strategic planning
THESIS STATEMENT
People in the past spent a great
deal of effort protecting themselves
from witches.
TOPIC: People in the past
CONTROLLING IDEA: spent a great
deal of effort protecting themselves
from witches
THESIS STATEMENT
There are many reasons why
pollution in ABCTown is the worst
in the world.
TOPIC: pollution in ABCTown is the
worst in the world
CONTROLLING IDEA: many ideas
THESIS STATEMENT
To be an effective CEO requires
certain characteristics.
TOPIC: to be an effective CEO
CONTROLLING IDEA: requires
certain characteristics
BODY PARAGRAPHS
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
TransitionWords
BODY PARAGRAPHS
Topic sentence
Introduce the topic and the
controlling idea
BODY PARAGRAPHS
Supporting sentences
All relate to or develop the topic
Create unity
Organize the sentences for
coherence
BODY PARAGRAPHS
Supporting sentences
BODY PARAGRAPHS
TransitionWords
first
in addition
for example
show the relationship between
supporting ideas
CONCLUSION
Ends the essay
Restate the thesis in different words
and/or summarize the main points
Remind the reader why they are reading
the essay
Help the leader look beyond the essay or
think about other ideas

Organizing and developing an essay