The document provides advice and guidelines for writing effective fundraising communications using impactful language. It recommends using clear, concise language and active voice to establish rapport with recipients. Specific examples and stories are emphasized over general statistics to increase reader involvement. Power words like "relief" and "reward" can increase response rates when used appropriately. Overall, the document stresses optimizing information for the recipient to change perceptions without altering facts.
Donor Retention Through Improved Communications w/ Jay LoveBloomerang
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This session explores the Fundraising Effectiveness Project report commissioned by AFP and the Urban Institute. The dismal news in this report can and should be an eye opener for every nonprofit engaged in fundraising.
We will focus on the root causes of poor retention rates, and offer tips for improvement based on the principles of Dr. Adrian Sargeant and Tom Ahern: two world-renowned authorities on building donor loyalty. Sargeant and Ahernâs principles are based upon years of research conducted in the sector and can be used by any organization, whether you are a one-person shop or a large department. We will show examples of their principles in action. The results can be astounding when put into daily use!
Learning Outcomes:
Be familiar with current research on donor retention and how an increase or decrease can impact your bottom line
Understand how to calculate your donor retention rate
Learn new donor communications techniques in order to improve donor loyalty and retention
A guide to building a habit forming community based on fun, tangible progress, and respect. How to gently guide your community members down the path toward mutual cooperation
Advanced Storytelling: Why Talking About Money Helps You Raise MoreBloomerang
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Join Lori L. Jacobwith, master storyteller and fundraising culture change expert, to learn why talking about money is one of the best ways to raise even more.
Donor Retention Through Improved Communications w/ Jay LoveBloomerang
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https://bloomerang.co/resources/speaking/
This session explores the Fundraising Effectiveness Project report commissioned by AFP and the Urban Institute. The dismal news in this report can and should be an eye opener for every nonprofit engaged in fundraising.
We will focus on the root causes of poor retention rates, and offer tips for improvement based on the principles of Dr. Adrian Sargeant and Tom Ahern: two world-renowned authorities on building donor loyalty. Sargeant and Ahernâs principles are based upon years of research conducted in the sector and can be used by any organization, whether you are a one-person shop or a large department. We will show examples of their principles in action. The results can be astounding when put into daily use!
Learning Outcomes:
Be familiar with current research on donor retention and how an increase or decrease can impact your bottom line
Understand how to calculate your donor retention rate
Learn new donor communications techniques in order to improve donor loyalty and retention
A guide to building a habit forming community based on fun, tangible progress, and respect. How to gently guide your community members down the path toward mutual cooperation
Advanced Storytelling: Why Talking About Money Helps You Raise MoreBloomerang
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https://bloomerang.co/resources/webinars/
Join Lori L. Jacobwith, master storyteller and fundraising culture change expert, to learn why talking about money is one of the best ways to raise even more.
Get Out the Vote (GOTV) is a topic can easily fill hundreds of pages. Weâve boiled it down to the most important components:
- Proven GOTV scripts for success
- Latest GOTV developments
- What doesn't work
- What works
This webinar examines your role dealing with the media. Knowing how to respond to tough questions from reporters representing print, broadcast and online media can be a challenge. We will provide you with insight about how the media works, what they want and how to drive home your talking points when answering their questions. By understanding how reporters think and what they are looking for, you can better plan your strategy for responding to their questions while controlling your message.
Media Relations the RIGHT way -- the ONLY way.
Principles and practices from the media relations profession. Contact larry@larrylitwin.com with questions or comments.
Storytelling: Science and Strategy - Nonprofit Supply Co. Webinar - Feb 23, 2017Brady Josephson
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Storytelling has become a bit of a buzzword in the charity world and has come to mean many things. But there is great strength in stories - how they are created, how they compel, and how they get shared - that can help organizations in their marketing and fundraising. This session will look at some of the underlying science behind story and how they can best be used to drive membership, engagement, and donations.
Influence Strategies for Software ProfessionalsTechWell
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Youâve tried and tried to convince people of your position. Youâve laid out your logical arguments on impressive PowerPoint slidesâbut you are still not able to sway them. Cognitive scientists understand that the approach you are taking is rarely successful. Often you must speak to othersâ subconscious motivators rather than their rational, analytic side. Linda Rising shares influence strategies that you can use to more effectively convince others to see things your way. These strategies take advantage of a number of hardwired traits: likingâwe like people who are like us; reciprocityâwe repay in kind; social proofâwe follow the lead of others similar to us; consistencyâwe align ourselves with our previous commitments; authorityâwe defer to authority figures; and scarcityâwe want more of something when there is less to be had. Join Linda to learn how to build on these traits as a way of bringing others to your side. Use this valuable toolkit in addition to the logical left-brain techniques on which we depend.
A Guide To Creating Curiosity Gaps In Social MediaGermano Silveira
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One of the most powerful techniques for boosting clicks on your content and growing your readership is by utilizing the Curiosity Gap.
The Curiosity Gap is a technique where you supply readers with just enough info about your content to hook their interest, while withholding key information. It creates a strong desire within readers to click on your link and obtain the missing info by reading your content.
In this guide, I discuss:
- The theories and strategies involved in creating Curiosity Gaps from your content
- How to avoid creating cheap click-bait
- Provide 10 templates/techniques for creating Curiosity Gaps
- And Provide 20 examples of effective Curiosity Gaps
Learn more about this powerful technique!
Presentation at the 2009 Fall JEA/NSPA National High School Journalism Convention, Washington, D.C. -- reasons why in-depth journalism isn't dead, and elements of how to do it
Get Out the Vote (GOTV) is a topic can easily fill hundreds of pages. Weâve boiled it down to the most important components:
- Proven GOTV scripts for success
- Latest GOTV developments
- What doesn't work
- What works
This webinar examines your role dealing with the media. Knowing how to respond to tough questions from reporters representing print, broadcast and online media can be a challenge. We will provide you with insight about how the media works, what they want and how to drive home your talking points when answering their questions. By understanding how reporters think and what they are looking for, you can better plan your strategy for responding to their questions while controlling your message.
Media Relations the RIGHT way -- the ONLY way.
Principles and practices from the media relations profession. Contact larry@larrylitwin.com with questions or comments.
Storytelling: Science and Strategy - Nonprofit Supply Co. Webinar - Feb 23, 2017Brady Josephson
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Storytelling has become a bit of a buzzword in the charity world and has come to mean many things. But there is great strength in stories - how they are created, how they compel, and how they get shared - that can help organizations in their marketing and fundraising. This session will look at some of the underlying science behind story and how they can best be used to drive membership, engagement, and donations.
Influence Strategies for Software ProfessionalsTechWell
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Youâve tried and tried to convince people of your position. Youâve laid out your logical arguments on impressive PowerPoint slidesâbut you are still not able to sway them. Cognitive scientists understand that the approach you are taking is rarely successful. Often you must speak to othersâ subconscious motivators rather than their rational, analytic side. Linda Rising shares influence strategies that you can use to more effectively convince others to see things your way. These strategies take advantage of a number of hardwired traits: likingâwe like people who are like us; reciprocityâwe repay in kind; social proofâwe follow the lead of others similar to us; consistencyâwe align ourselves with our previous commitments; authorityâwe defer to authority figures; and scarcityâwe want more of something when there is less to be had. Join Linda to learn how to build on these traits as a way of bringing others to your side. Use this valuable toolkit in addition to the logical left-brain techniques on which we depend.
A Guide To Creating Curiosity Gaps In Social MediaGermano Silveira
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One of the most powerful techniques for boosting clicks on your content and growing your readership is by utilizing the Curiosity Gap.
The Curiosity Gap is a technique where you supply readers with just enough info about your content to hook their interest, while withholding key information. It creates a strong desire within readers to click on your link and obtain the missing info by reading your content.
In this guide, I discuss:
- The theories and strategies involved in creating Curiosity Gaps from your content
- How to avoid creating cheap click-bait
- Provide 10 templates/techniques for creating Curiosity Gaps
- And Provide 20 examples of effective Curiosity Gaps
Learn more about this powerful technique!
Presentation at the 2009 Fall JEA/NSPA National High School Journalism Convention, Washington, D.C. -- reasons why in-depth journalism isn't dead, and elements of how to do it
Communication Hacks: Strategies for fostering collaboration and dealing with ...All Things Open
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Communication Hacks: Strategies for fostering collaboration and dealing with conflict in open source
Presented by Nuritzi Sanchez, GitLab, Inc.
Presented at Open Source 101 2021
Abstract: During this talk, you'll learn about topics like cross-cultural collaboration, giving and receiving feedback, and active listening -- all things that are vital to the health of our open source communities.
After reading many self-help books, watching various TED Talks, and listening to a ton of podcasts, I've condensed my learnings to help you improve your communications skills, deal with conflict, and collaborate better than ever, not only in FOSS, but also everywhere else.
hinking, Fast and Slow is a best-selling[1] book published during 2011 by Nobel Memorial Prize in Economic Sciences laureate Daniel Kahneman. It was the 2012 winner of the National Academies Communication Award for best creative work that helps the public understanding of topics of behavioral science, engineering and medicine.[2]
The book summarizes research that Kahneman performed during decades, often in collaboration with Amos Tversky.[3][4] It covers all three phases of his career: his early work concerning cognitive biases, his work on prospect theory, and his later work on happiness.
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Message Development: The Secrets of Creating a Sticky MessageKathy McShea
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This popular presentation reviews the fundamentals to developing a message that sticks. We advocate use of the message box and provide plenty of real-world examples so you can see how it works.
Discover the secrets of copywriting success from the master. From novice to pro in easy stages
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Whether you need to write copy for your website, your blog, a cover letter or CV; these techniqu WORD for any medium.
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In this course, you will learn how to write copy that connects and converts. In other words youâre going to learn to craft copywriting that actually sounds like you, that comes from your heart and makes people excited to buy what you sell.
What makes this course different?
* I work professionally as a copywriter and marketing consultant- this course will be way more comprehensive than any amount of Googling (believe me, Iâve done it all)
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My teaching style is straight forward, clear, concise and to-the-point. I use practical real-life advice that you can apply straight away. I canât wait to get started with you on your journey to copywriting success.
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Fear of abandonmentâ means a whole different thing in eCommerce.
Because the loss is tangible. And felt right in your pocket.
But that also means there are real things you could fix.
One of the final stages of shopping abandonment occurs is the checkout page.
Which means it impacts your bottom line directly.
So hereâs a rundown of:
â Reasons shoppers abandon the checkout process
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Do it right, and youâll feel the change in your revenue.
This is a part of our CRO School series - to help you fix the revenue leaks in your eCommerce store.
Sign up for CRO School and get these insights right in your inbox
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[Google March 2024 Update] How To Thrive: Content, Link Building & SEOSearch Engine Journal
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March 2024 disrupted the SEO industry. Websites were deindexed, and manual penalties were deliveredâall to produce more helpful, more trustworthy search results.
How did your website fare?
Watch us as we delve into the seismic shifts brought about by Google's March 2024 updates and explore strategies to not just survive, but thrive in this dynamic digital landscape.
Youâll learn:
- How to create content that is valuable to users (not just search engines) using E-E-A-T.
- How to build links that can boost rankings and withstand algorithm updates.
- Best practices for content creation and link building so you can thrive during algorithm updates.
With Vince Ramos, we'll examine the implications of the latest algorithm changes on content creation, link building, and SEO practices, and offer actionable insights from businesses like yours that have remained steadfast amidst the volatility.
Using real-life case studies, weâll also show you the effectiveness of manual link building techniques and person-first content strategies.
Whether you're a seasoned SEO professional, a budding content creator, or anyone in between, this webinar will help you weather the changes in Google's algorithms and capitalize on them for sustained success.
Check out this webinar and unlock the secrets to thriving in the new Google era.
It's another new era of digital and marketers are faced with making big bets on their digital strategy. If you are looking at modernizing your tech stack to support your digital evolution, there are a few can't miss (often overlooked) areas that should be part of every conversation. We'll cover setting your vision, avoiding siloes, adding a democratized approach to data strategy, localization, creating critical governance requirements and more. Attendees will walk away with actions they can take into initiatives they are running today and consider for the future.
How to Use AI to Write a High-Quality Article that Ranksminatamang0021
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In the world of content creation, many AI bloggers have drifted away from their original vision, resulting in low-quality articles that search engines overlook. Don't let that happen to you! Join us to discover how to leverage AI tools effectively to craft high-quality content that not only captures your audience's attention but also ranks well on search engines.
Disclaimer: Some of the prompts mentioned here are the examples of Matt Diggity. Please use it as reference and make your own custom prompts.
In today's digital world, customers are just a click away. "Grow Your Business Online: Introduction to Digital Marketing" dives into the exciting world of digital marketing, equipping you with the tools and strategies to reach new audiences, expand your reach, and ultimately grow your business.
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The What, Why & How of 3D and AR in Digital CommercePushON Ltd
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Vladimir Mulhem has over 20 years of experience in commercialising cutting edge creative technology across construction, marketing and retail.
Previously the founder and Tech and Innovation Director of Creative Content Works working with the likes of Next, John Lewis and JD Sport, he now helps retailers, brands and agencies solve challenges of applying the emerging technologies 3D, AR, VR and Gen AI to real-world problems.
In this webinar, Vladimir will be covering the following topics:
Applications of 3D and AR in Digital Commerce,
Benefits of 3D and AR,
Tools to create, manage and publish 3D and AR in Digital Commerce.
Trust Element Assessment: How Your Online Presence Affects Outbound Lead Gene...Martal Group
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Learn how your business's online presence affects outbound lead generation and what you can do to improve it with a complimentary 13-Point Trust Element Assessment.
QuickBooks Sync Manager Repair Tool- What You Need to Knowmarkmargaret23
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Occurrence of technical errors on QuickBooks is common but it can be resolved with the use of QuickBooks Sync Manager Tool . With the help of this too, users can sync the QuickBooks Desktop company file with the Intuit online server. It is compatible with versions QuickBooks Pro, Premier, or Enterprise. In case a user faces sync-related errors then they simply need this repair tool.
Elevate your trade show game with our comprehensive guide on creating an interactive booth that captures attention and drives engagement! In this presentation, Blue Atlas Marketing shares practical tips and creative strategies to transform your trade show presence. Learn how to use digital displays, interactive demos, and engaging activities to attract visitors and make lasting impressions. Whether you're a trade show veteran or a newcomer, these insights will help you stand out from the crowd and maximize your event success. Dive into our slides to discover how to turn your booth into a dynamic and interactive experience!
Most small businesses struggle to see marketing results. In this session, we will eliminate any confusion about what to do next, solving your marketing problems so your business can thrive. Youâll learn how to create a foundational marketing OS (operating system) based on neuroscience and backed by real-world results. Youâll be taught how to develop deep customer connections, and how to have your CRM dynamically segment and sell at any stage in the customerâs journey. By the end of the session, youâll remove confusion and chaos and replace it with clarity and confidence for long-term marketing success.
Key Takeaways:
⢠Uncover the power of a foundational marketing system that dynamically communicates with prospects and customers on autopilot.
⢠Harness neuroscience and Tribal Alignment to transform your communication strategies, turning potential clients into fans and those fans into loyal customers.
⢠Discover the art of automated segmentation, pinpointing your most lucrative customers and identifying the optimal moments for successful conversions.
⢠Streamline your business with a content production plan that eliminates guesswork, wasted time, and money.
Mastering Local SEO for Service Businesses in the AI Era is tailored specifically for local service providers like plumbers, dentists, and others seeking to dominate their local search landscape. This session delves into leveraging AI advancements to enhance your online visibility and search rankings through the Content Factory model, designed for creating high-impact, SEO-driven content. Discover the Dollar-a-Day advertising strategy, a cost-effective approach to boost your local SEO efforts and attract more customers with minimal investment. Gain practical insights on optimizing your online presence to meet the specific needs of local service seekers, ensuring your business not only appears but stands out in local searches. This concise, action-oriented workshop is your roadmap to navigating the complexities of digital marketing in the AI age, driving more leads, conversions, and ultimately, success for your local service business.
Key Takeaways:
Embrace AI for Local SEO: Learn to harness the power of AI technologies to optimize your website and content for local search. Understand the pivotal role AI plays in analyzing search trends and consumer behavior, enabling you to tailor your SEO strategies to meet the specific demands of your target local audience. Leverage the Content Factory Model: Discover the step-by-step process of creating SEO-optimized content at scale. This approach ensures a steady stream of high-quality content that engages local customers and boosts your search rankings. Get an action guide on implementing this model, complete with templates and scheduling strategies to maintain a consistent online presence. Maximize ROI with Dollar-a-Day Advertising: Dive into the cost-effective Dollar-a-Day advertising strategy that amplifies your visibility in local searches without breaking the bank. Learn how to strategically allocate your budget across platforms to target potential local customers effectively. The session includes an action guide on setting up, monitoring, and optimizing your ad campaigns to ensure maximum impact with minimal investment.
Everyone knows the power of stories, but when asked to come up with them, we struggle. Either we second guess ourselves as to the story's relevance, or we just come up blank and can't think of any. Unlocking Everyday Narratives: The Power of Storytelling in Marketing will teach you how to recognize stories in the moment and to recall forgotten moments that your audience needs to hear.
Key Takeaways:
Understand Why Personal Stories Connect Better
How To Remember Forgotten Stories
How To Use Customer Experiences As Stories For Your Brand
Videos are more engaging, more memorable, and more popular than any other type of content out there. Thatâs why itâs estimated that 82% of consumer traffic will come from videos by 2025.
And with videos evolving from landscape to portrait and experts promoting shorter clips, one thing remains constant â our brains LOVE videos.
So is there science behind what makes people absolutely irresistible on camera?
The answer: definitely yes.
In this jam-packed session with Stephanie Garcia, youâll get your hands on a steal-worthy guide that uncovers the art and science to being irresistible on camera. From body language to words that convert, sheâll show you how to captivate on command so that viewers are excited and ready to take action.
The Secret to Engaging Modern Consumers: Journey Mapping and Personalization
In today's digital landscape, understanding the customer's journey and delivering personalized experiences are paramount. This masterclass delves into the art of consumer journey mapping, a powerful technique that visualizes the entire customer experience across touchpoints. Attendees will learn how to create detailed journey maps, identify pain points, and uncover opportunities for optimization. The presentation also explores personalization strategies that leverage data and technology to tailor content, products, and experiences to individual customers. From real-time personalization to predictive analytics, attendees will gain insights into cutting-edge approaches that drive engagement and loyalty.
Key Takeaways:
Current consumer landscape; Steps to mapping an effective consumer journey; Understanding the value of personalization; Integrating mapping and personalization for success; Brands that are getting It right!; Best Practices; Future Trends
In the digital age, businesses are inundated with tools promising to streamline operations, enhance creativity, and boost productivity. Yet, the true key to digital transformation lies not in the accumulation of tools but in strategically integrating the right AI solutions to revolutionize workflows. Join Jordache, an experienced entrepreneur, tech strategist and AI consultant, as he explores essential AI tools across three critical categoriesâIdeation, Creation, and Operationsâthat can reshape the way your business creates, operates, and scales.This talk will guide you through the practicalities of selecting and effectively using AI tools that go beyond the basics of todayâs popular tools like ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini, Midjourney, or Dall-E. For each category of tools, Jordache will address three crucial questions: What is each tool? Why is each one valuable to you as a business leader? How can you start using it in your workflow? This approach will not only clarify the role of these tools but also highlight their strategic value, making it perfect for business leaders ready to make informed decisions about integrating AI into their workflows.
Key Takeaways:
>> Strategic Selection and Integration: Understand how to select AI tools that align with your business goals and how to conceptually integrate them into your workflows to enhance efficiency and innovation.
>> Understanding AI Tool Categories: Gain a deeper understanding of how AI tools can be leveraged in the areas of ideation, creation, and operationâtransforming each aspect of your business.
>> Practical Starting Points: Learn how you can start using these tools in your business with practical tips on initial steps and integration ideas.
>> Future-Proofing Your Business: Discover how staying informed about and utilizing the latest AI tools and strategies can keep your business competitive in a rapidly evolving digital landscape.
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1. âFundraising?
Use these words,
not thoseâ
October 8, 2014
Host: NonProfit Times
Conducted by: Herschell Gordon Lewis
Interlocutor: Paul Clolery
2.
3. Fund raising folklore:
Ours is a dignified world,
existing peacefully outside
the roiling seas of
commerce.
Fund raising reality:
Ours is a business whose
very nature makes it at
least as competitive as
commerce ⌠and very
probably more so.
4. If youâre a professional
writer who wants to
increase effectiveness
and impact, donât look
for big differences. Look
for hidden sources of
power drainage or
apparently minor touches
such asâŚ
5. The professional
copywriter knows how
3
differs from
three
(Little touches such as this
separate the professional
from the dilettante)
6. One element should drive
every professional
communication you create,
from this moment forward:
THE
CLARITY
COMMANDMENT
7. The Clarity
Commandment:
When you choose words and
phrases for
force-communication,
clarity is paramount.
Donât let any other component
of the communications mix
interfere with it.
8. Sorry, you wonât hear them
during this diatribe:
⢠Paradigm
⢠Proactive
⢠Win-win
⢠Game plan
⢠24/7
⢠Fast track
⢠Customer-centric
⢠At the end of the
day
⢠Core competency
⢠Think outside the
box
⢠Knowledge-based
⢠On the same page
9. Avoid these words in
force-communication
messages:
⢠quality
⢠service
⢠value
⢠needs (as
noun)
⢠âRemember,â
⢠Whatâs more
⢠Your partner
inâŚ
â˘When it
comes toâŚ
10. What is a more emotional
word or phrase than:
⢠commence
⢠purchase
⢠utilize
⢠fortunate
⢠omit
⢠requested
⢠receive
⢠I write
⢠we would like to
concerning
⢠large
⢠we shall
⢠you incur no
⢠error
risk
⢠perhaps
⢠circular
⢠however
⢠donate
⢠humorous
11. What is the difference
between:
⢠autumn and fall
⢠at last and
finally
⢠sexy and sensual
⢠nude and naked
⢠made and
manufactured
⢠manufactured by
and built by
⢠right now and at
once
⢠reply and respond
⢠insincere and not
sincere
⢠eager and anxious
⢠audience and
viewers
⢠died and passed
away
12. Word use:
Replace⌠withâŚ
must have to
among one of
utilize use
perhaps maybe
buy acquire
purchase own
spend allocate
receive get
14. Are you establishing a
relationship as you ask for
funds? Passive voice adds
distance for no beneficial
reason:
âA reply from you would
be appreciated.â
âWe really do want your
reaction.â
15. What is
rightâŚ
and what is
wrongâŚ
with this
approach to
envelope
treatment?
16. Right:
Provocative
copy and
colors match
the season.
Wrong:
When a
prospect
doesnât
respond, a
different
approach is in
order.
17. If youâre a professional
writer who wants to
increase effectiveness
and impact, you know
that synonyms arenât
identical. For example,
you know the difference
between âCan youâŚâ and
âWill youâŚâ:
18. Which has the most impact?
âş Can you help us?
âş Will you help us?
âş Will you help these kids?
âş Help me.
âş Help me, PLEASE.
Or is it none of the above?
The answer will make sense
to you in about 30 minutes.
19. Would you ask people toâŚ
â˘give
â˘donate
â˘contribute
â˘bestow
â˘bequeath
20. YOU are in command of the
reaction to your words:
âAttention, seniors: We
are conducting a clinical
trial forâŚâ
âAttention, seniors: A
research organization is
conducting a clinical trial
forâŚâ
21. YOU are in command of the
reaction to your words:
âIn the event of your
death...â
âIf you should die....â
22. YOU are in command of the
reaction to your words:
âYouâre headed for trouble.â
âAre you headed for
trouble?â
(Some rules for use of
questions coming up.)
23. YOU are in command of the
reaction to your words:
Undocumented immigrant
Illegal alien
24. Which of these should
produce better results?
⢠Every 60 seconds, 23
children die from
malnutrition and
preventable diseases.
â˘This is Eric. His sister
starved to death two days
ago. Eric is next.
25. Would you use the word
Eschew
?
When you could write
Turn your back on
?
26. WARNING:
The typical recipient of your
message, whether mail or
online or print or broadcast,
doesnât share your knowledge
of the âin-talkâ that may be
common inside your office.
Write within the recipientâs
experiential background, not
yours.
27. A quick look at
some of the
weapons in our
arsenal:
28. The carrier envelope has
just one purpose
(other than preventing
the contents from falling
out into the street):
to get itself opened.
29. Two questions:
1. Which of these is more likely to be opened?
2. What would the comparative attitude be at
the moment of opening?
30. Two questions:
1. Will the typical recipient look at this
envelope copy with suspicion?
2. Does the âMultiplyâ line help or hurt?
37. In a letter longer than
one page,
donât
end a paragraph at the
bottom of any page
except the last.
(Why?)
38. Donât
sneak up
on the reader.
Fire
your biggest gun
first.
(Imperative for e-mail.)
39. Tired of âDear Friendâ?
Try one of these:
⢠Good morning!
⢠Hi.
⢠Dear Colleague,
⢠Dear Tennis Nut,
⢠Dear Fellow Tennis Nut,
⢠This will be a good day, [NAME]!
⢠If youâre like I am, [NAME]âŚ
(When should you use
only the first name?)
43. An absolute rule of
online fundraising:
Make response
no-brainer
easy.
44. In general,
local
not-for-profit organizations
do considerably better with
e-mail solicitations than
national
not-for-profit organizations.
Why?
45. Two reasons:
1. The message can be âfromâ a
known individual.
2. You have far less guesswork
in predetermining the best
demographic, both proved and
unproved.
46. Did you knowâŚ
â˘Adding the recipientâs name to
the âSubjectâ line usually
increases response.
â˘Whether a produced message or
straight text pulls best depends
on individual and specific
circumstances.
â˘There is no point in sending
âteaserâ e-mail.
47. Astute fund raisers report
success when e-mailing
existing donors with
âEmergency!â messages.
E-mailing cold lists with
the wrong words can be
frustrating, unprofitable,
and the cause of hate-mail.
48. Can (and should) you use e-mail
either to tell a potential donor
a direct mail appeal is comingâŚ
and/orâŚ
to remind a potential donor
after sending a direct mail
appeal?
49. Can (and should) you use e-mail
either to tell a potential donor
a direct mail appeal is comingâŚ
and/orâŚ
to remind a potential donor
after sending a direct mail
appeal?
YES to both.
50. This online
message
grabs
attention
by putting
emphasis
on a non-donation
factor
51. A quick look at
print as possible
fundraising
media:
52. In print media,
you have
one to three seconds
to grab and hold
the readerâs
attention.
Donât waste that time.
53. What is the difference in impact
between âWhile you read thisâ and
âEven as you read thisâ? âproviding
reliefâ and âgiving reliefâ?
Every word either contributes to
impact or marches in place.
54. Awareness
is a major
key to
initiating
the
response
factor.
BUTâŚ
56. You have time today to
analyze fundraising
messages youâre working
on now and waiting for
your fingertips to
produce improvementâŚ
and a lifetime for your
fingertips to use what
youâre picking up today.
57. Pick up and use this --
Information optimizing:
Directing or changing the
readerâs or viewerâs or
listenerâs perception
without changing the
facts.
61. Note the difference:
You wonât stand by and
let it happen.
Will you stand by and
let it happen?
(Note, too: The choice is
NOT automatic.)
62. A fund raising example:
â Why I am sending you
this message:
â Why am I sending you
this message?
The psychological impact
of the headings is in no way
parallel, even though the
words are identical.
64. Requests for donations
should be described in
terms of the potential
donorâs capabilityâŚ
NOT
the organizationâs
financial goals.
65. An absolute truism of
force-communication:
Specifics
outpull
generalizations.
66. Please do agree:
21st century fund raising
demands more than the
classic true but worn
âWe need helpâ
approach.
And examples are more
involving than statistics.
67. The superiority of
examples over statistics:
Statistics = cold-blooded,
no involvement.
Examples = warm-blooded,
involvement.
68. First pass:
If treated early, 75% of those
children who have this deadly
disease can be saved.
Second pass:
Innocent children die from this
disease. With early treatment, three
out of four will live.
Third pass:
This deadly disease is killing
innocent children. With early
treatment we can save three precious
lives, of four we're now losing.
69. Fourth pass:
We lost Jimmy today. His
parents knew his precious days
were numbered. But Mary,
Karen, and Billy all will live. We
were able to start their
treatment early enough to save
them.
Which text is most likely to
generate response? Why?
71. Quick list of âno-noâ words:
⢠unfortunately
⢠many of you
⢠enroll
⢠annual
⢠hopefully
⢠survey
⢠needy
⢠giver
⢠support
⢠expense
⢠budget
⢠serve
72. Power words (depending on
circumstances):
⢠outrageous
⢠hope
⢠opinion
⢠advisor
⢠free
⢠dare
⢠win
⢠demand
⢠forget
⢠unwanted
⢠never
⢠dead
73. A few words that can bring
serendipitous response:
⢠relief
⢠reward
⢠support
⢠culture
⢠benefit/
⢠pain
beneficial
⢠pleasure
⢠celebrate
⢠expand/
⢠hero
expansion
74. Letâs use two of those
serendipitous words for
this get-together:
â˘Itâs a pleasure
to wrap this up.
â˘Itâs a relief
to wrap this up.