Narrative Writing

Daniel Flower
Mini-discussion
Why do we tell stories?
What makes a story great?

http://3oneseven.com/29/singin-in-the-rain/
Stories are important
cognitive events, for they

encapsulate

information, knowledge,
context, and emotion.
--Don Norman, Things That Make Us Smart

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Stories Use Concrete

Language

JD Hancock
Concrete language grabs
attention by appealing to the
five senses.
Stronger imagery creates
deeper impressions on a
reader.
Need Details? Use the RENNS Model

Yau Hoong Tang
TheRENNS Model
Reasons
Examples
Names
Numbers
Senses

Why did something happen? Why did someone do
something?
How did it happen? How did someone do something?

Who was involved? Where did it happen?

When did it happen? How many were involved?
hearing
(auditory)

sight
(visual)

smell
(olfactory)

touch
(tactile)

taste
(gustatory)
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Random Characters
Sight

light and dark, shades and hues,
visible shape and appearance
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Thomas Hawk

The restaurant was shaped like a big bottle, though squatter than a
real bottle, and on its cap was a revolving figure of a grinning
boy holding a hamburger aloft.
--Joyce Carol Oates, “Where are you Going, Where have you Been?”
Smell
Often used metaphorically
Andrew Morrell Photography
...I remembered clearest of all...how the bedroom smelled of
the lumber it was made of and of the wet woods whose scent
entered through the screen. --E.B. White, “Once More to the Lake”
James Jordan
Taste

Gustatory, detecting flavor--related to smell
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...the walking boots that taste
of Atlantic and Pacific salt...
--Robert Frost, “A Record Stride”

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Sound
volume
word choice
tone

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...there came to my ears a low,
dull, quick sound, such as a
watch makes when enveloped
in cotton.... It was the beating
of the old man's heart.

--Edgar Allan Poe, “The Tell Tale Heart”

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Touch

Tactile experience and
emotion (tension, reactions)
Shemer
You grasp the bark by a rugged pleat,
And look up small from the forest's feet.
--Robert Frost, “On Going Unnoticed”

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The Moment of Reflection

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Robert McKee’s

Commandments
of storytelling

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Thou shalt not take the climax
out of the protagonist’s hands

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Thou Shalt Not Make Life Easy For The Protagonist
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Respect Thine
Audience

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Have a god like knowledge of your universe
Use Complexity Rather
Than Complication

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Thou Shalt Take Your Characters To The End Of The Line
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Thou Shalt Not Write On The Nose Dialogue
B Rosen
Thou Shalt Dramatize Thine Exposition

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Thou shalt

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Stories have the amazing dual power to

simulate and to inspire.
--Chip & Dan Heath, Made to Stick

Narrative Writing