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CRITERIA FOR ASSESSMENT OF LEARNING TASK 3
Action Research Report 50% – DUE April 13, 2016 KATHLEEN MCMURRAY
EDER 692.06 COLLABORATORY: LANGUAGE AND DIVERSITY (JAN 2016)
DR. ROSWITA DRESSLER, UNIVERSITY OF CALGARY
Comments
Organization & Structure This research report is well-structured. This investigation[…]
walks the reader through the problem all the ways to the
conclusion with a clear sense that you have thoroughly
investigated the problem and come up with an action plan
that is evidence-based and applicable.
Introduction The three paragraph introduction style appeared to work
well to enable you to grab the reader’s attention and set up
the study.
Literature Review The literature review is thorough and logically organized such
that the readers understands how motivation and growth
mindset are understood with regards to TPD. Bravo on
providing the copyright information regarding figures.
Concluding sentences at the end of paragraphs are used to
remind the reader of the purpose of including the studies
and propel the argumentation forward.
Methodology The methodology for this study is grounded firming in action
research. The information regarding lit review and context
could be omitted if space were a concern.
Findings This section provides a summary of the research findings,
appropriately supported by quotes from the participants.
Discussion/Conclusion Literature is used to discuss the findings. The action plan is
clear and concrete. Limitations are addressed and
recommendations for future research are provided.
References APA 6th
edition style is used in the references. No errors were
found.
Writing This paper is written in a careful scholarly manner.
Kathy, Your final product is something you can be very proud
of. You waded through the “messy middle” of research and
came out the other side with a paper that is strongly argued
and of immediate use for your own professional practice. I
would love to use this paper as an option A exemplar. If you
are in agreement, please email me and I will anonymize your
paper for future use.

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kmcmurray feedback on action research project

  • 1. CRITERIA FOR ASSESSMENT OF LEARNING TASK 3 Action Research Report 50% – DUE April 13, 2016 KATHLEEN MCMURRAY EDER 692.06 COLLABORATORY: LANGUAGE AND DIVERSITY (JAN 2016) DR. ROSWITA DRESSLER, UNIVERSITY OF CALGARY Comments Organization & Structure This research report is well-structured. This investigation[…] walks the reader through the problem all the ways to the conclusion with a clear sense that you have thoroughly investigated the problem and come up with an action plan that is evidence-based and applicable. Introduction The three paragraph introduction style appeared to work well to enable you to grab the reader’s attention and set up the study. Literature Review The literature review is thorough and logically organized such that the readers understands how motivation and growth mindset are understood with regards to TPD. Bravo on providing the copyright information regarding figures. Concluding sentences at the end of paragraphs are used to remind the reader of the purpose of including the studies and propel the argumentation forward. Methodology The methodology for this study is grounded firming in action research. The information regarding lit review and context could be omitted if space were a concern. Findings This section provides a summary of the research findings, appropriately supported by quotes from the participants. Discussion/Conclusion Literature is used to discuss the findings. The action plan is clear and concrete. Limitations are addressed and recommendations for future research are provided. References APA 6th edition style is used in the references. No errors were found. Writing This paper is written in a careful scholarly manner. Kathy, Your final product is something you can be very proud of. You waded through the “messy middle” of research and came out the other side with a paper that is strongly argued and of immediate use for your own professional practice. I would love to use this paper as an option A exemplar. If you are in agreement, please email me and I will anonymize your paper for future use.