This document provides feedback on an action research report submitted by Kathleen McMurray. The feedback provider praises the organization, structure, introduction, literature review, methodology, findings, discussion/conclusion, and references sections of the report. They note that the report is well structured and walks the reader through the problem and solution. The literature review is thorough and the methodology is grounded in action research. Findings are supported by quotes and literature is used to discuss findings. The action plan and limitations are addressed clearly. The feedback concludes by congratulating Kathleen on producing a strong, scholarly paper that could be used as an exemplar for future students.