1. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback – Alyx Entwistle
This question shows that
we did well in clearly
communicating our pitch
as 100% of the people
answered ‘yes’.
This question shows that
we also did well at
coming across as
professional and
enthusiastic as half of the
class said it was a 4/5,
with the other two
quarters chose 3/5 or
even 5/5.
This question shows that
that the film idea was
fairly exciting. 1 person
from the 11 give it a 2/5,
while the other ten were
split evenly between 3/5
and 4/5.

2. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback – Alyx Entwistle
From the feedback of this
question, it is clear that
the class were directly
addressed when we
delivered the pitch as 11
out of the 12 said ‘yes’.
The results from this
question were scattered.
As you can see, 4 out of
the 5 options were
chosen. Based on the
feedback though, the
majority thought that, in
terms of how good our
film sounded, it is a 3/5
From this questions we
learnt that our main
strengths were ‘clear and
consise verbal delivery’
and ‘clear eye contact’.
We are happy with this
result as this probably
what we feared the most
from the pitch.
From this questions we
can see that the thing that
most needed to improve
on was to ‘use more open
and relaxed body
language’. We also
noticed that more people
thought that we needed to
‘devise a more original
idea’ than the people who
thought the ‘originality of
our idea’ was good.