- Most respondents indicated the group did not clearly communicate their idea and needed to improve their delivery. - They were pleased that they addressed the class well, though the film idea itself received poor ratings. - The group's highest strength was making eye contact, but they need to speak more clearly and confidently, especially when answering questions. - Moving forward, the group will focus on communicating properly, delivering the pitch stronger, giving better knowledge, and improving body language.

1. JRJ Productions Practice Film Pitch Feedback
As you can see the 2 arrows pointing at the
responses that the people gave us four our pitch
presentation which relates to the question
which is our group did not clearly communicate.
3 people said we did speak clearly and 6 said we
did not.
We now know what to improve on when we do
our real pitch presentation me and my group
would work on the mistakes of the last pitch and
make progress.

2. According to the people in our class our pitch
presentation was poor at least we got honest
feedback because that can give us an extra edge
because then we can improve on the pitch delivery
so we look and sound better on in the real pitch
presentation.

3. As you can see on this page is that to most of the
people in our class were not very excited about
our film idea that’s because we did not deliver the
idea well it sounded like a mess that is because
we did not practice for this presentation but no
we are sure on what we are going to do and
act/say how it supposed to be really acted and
said. I think this time we are more confident and
ready to share.

4. According the people in our class they
thought that we addressed very well. As you
cans see the results are there in orange on the
middle of the page, five people answered yes
and four people answered no
This was the question that everyone agreed
on and we are quite happy with this because
when we were stood in front of everyone we
all felt and looked quite nervous so we
thought we wasn’t addressing the story well
to the class but as it turns out we did formally
address the class.
Where this arrow is pointing to is the
responses that we got off the class and when
we seen this on the board we felt kind of
pleased and shocked at the same time
because as I said before we addressed the
story well.

5. In my opinion I thought our short film idea was
okay but according to the class it was very poor
as you can see on the screen the results in
orange five people ticked on number one
which is very poor two of them though it was
half bad.
Basically no we know how the responses of our
short film is and we are going to change it and
make better improvements for the real pich

6. Based on this tally our highest
strength was clear eye contact so
according to the class they thought
we were setting out eye contact to
every one very well.

7. The only way we are going to improve on
our pitch is by speaking more clearly and
confidently and also the biggest reason is
to answer questions more confident.
In the conclusion the things my group are going to work on is to:-
Communicate properly
Deliver the pitch stronger
Give better knowledge in the presentation
Better body language