Our practice pitch received positive feedback in several areas: - 100% of voters said our idea was clearly communicated - No one rated our professionalism and enthusiasm below a 3 - 11 out of 12 people felt directly addressed However, there is still room for improvement. Our idea could be made more exciting as no one gave it the highest rating. Using more open body language would also enhance our presentation based on the feedback. Overall the practice pitch helped identify both our strengths and areas to focus on for future pitches.

1. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback
This shows that our idea
was clearly
communicated because
100% said yes.
This shows that we were
strong at being
professional and
enthusiastic because no
one voted below 3 and it
was mainly 4 and a few
voted 5. Overall we did
well but there is still
some room for
improvement.
This shows that
some people were
quite excited about
our idea because it
was mainly 3 and
4. However we
could make our
idea much more
exciting because
no one gave us a 5
which shows there
is obviously room
for improvement.

2. JAAL Productions Practice Pitch Feedback
This shows near enough
everyone felt they were
directly addressed
because 11 out 12 people
answered ‘Yes’.
This shows that our idea
is quite average because
votes varied between
2,3,4 and 5 but most
votes were for 3. It shows
that our idea is good but
could use some work.
This shows our biggest strength
was clear and concise verbal
delivery because 100% voted for
that. It also shows our eye
contact was very strong because
10/12 voted for that. It also
shows that confident body
language and confident answers
to questions were good but
could use some work because
they got 50% each. It also shows
our originality of the idea and
good quality visual
accompaniments need some
work because they each got few
votes.
This shows that the biggest
improvement needed is
using more open and relaxed
body language because it got
90% of votes. It also shows
that we could improve in
other areas but it’s not big
improvements required
because the other options all
got between 3-6 votes.