The teacher provided feedback on a student's draft magazine cover, suggesting making the artist names larger to stand out, adding more details to empty space at the bottom, and including a balloon/circle feature to attract attention. Facebook comments on the magazine confirmed the student achieved the right style and many liked the pictures, providing positive feedback.

2.  After showing my teacher the first draft of my front cover he suggested I make the name
of the artists larger so that they stand out.
 He also suggested I use the space at the bottom of the page to add more detail.
 He said a ‘balloon/circle’ feature would be effective and attract the audiences attention.
 Before After

3.  Facebook comments have helped me by confirming I have
achieved the right style and image for my magazine as they have
all been positive. The pictures of the magazine on Facebook has
also recieved many likes as well as comments. Here are a few: