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Target Mark Comment Write with appropriate structure and organisation. 1  2  3  4   5  I think I did well but I kind of messed up in the opening. Use quality openings 1  2  3  4   5  A t the beginning I started writing arguments in the opening. Use paragraphs effectively 1  2  3  4  5   Write with detail 1  2  3  4   5  I don’t think I had stuff to put detail on to. Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively 1  2  3  4  5
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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