A kind girl helps an old blind man. The girl, Aini, noticed that the blind man, Pak Ali, who usually played violin to collect money was missing. Concerned, she went to his house and found him unwell on the floor. She called a taxi and sent him to the hospital. There, the old man expressed his gratitude to the kind girl for helping him in his time of need.

1. Form 3

2. The details below show how a
blind old man was helped by a
kind girl.
Write out a story.
Use the pictures and notes
given to write the story.

3. Picture 1
man – old and blind - played violin
– collected money

4. Picture 2
missing- girl concerned

5. Picture 3
went – his house

6. Picture 4
found – old man- unwell

7. Picture 5
taxi – sent - hospital

8. Picture 6
old man - grateful

9. When writing out your story, you
should:
 use all the notes given to describe the incident
 elaborate on the given notes to make it more
interesting
 make sure it is not less than 120 words.

10. What do think is the best title for
your story?

11. Picture 1
man – old and blind - played violin – collected
money
1st paragraph - Introduction
1. Who is the man?
2. What did he always do?
3. Where did he always go?
4. What was special about this man?
5. What did people do to help him?
2nd paragraph - Body
1. Who used to pass this shopping complex?
2. Where did she go?
3. What did she always do?

12. Picture 2 & 3
missing- girl concerned
went – his house
3nd paragraph – Body
1. What had happened one day?
2. What did she think about?
3. What did she do then?
Picture 2
Picture 3

13. Picture 4 & 5
found – old man- unwell
taxi – sent - hospital
4th paragraph -Body
1. What did she find at his house?
2. What had happened to the old man?
3. What did she do then?
4. Where did she bring the old man to?
Picture 4 Picture 5

14. Picture 6
old man - grateful
5th paragraph - body
1. How did the old man feel?
2. What did he do?
3. What do you think he will say to her?
6th paragraph - Ending
1. What do you think the doctor and the nurses will
do/say to the girl?

15. A Kind Girl
Pak Ali was old and blind. He
always sat in front of a shopping
complex playing his violin to
collect money. He was a very
talented violinist, despite being
blind. Passerby would drop money
into his collection bowl.

16. Aini used to pass this
shopping complex on her way
to the tuition centre. She
often stopped to chat with
him. She usually gave him a
packet drink or some snacks.

17. One day, Aini was
surprised to find Pak Ali
missing. Suspecting that
something was wrong, she
immediately went to his
house.

18. There, she found the
old man unwell and
shivering on the floor. She
called a taxi using her
handphone and took him
to the hospital.

19. Pak Ali was very grateful to
Aini. Holding her hands he
said with a faint voice, “I’ll
always remember you for
your kindness.”

20. The doctor and the
nurses praised Aini for
her thoughtfulness.

21. Enjoy
writing your
story!
With Love Always,
Po Po Tun