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Good use of colour to make text and certain elements that need to, stand out.
Looks professional with a good main image, main cover line is big and bold standing out
from the image behind it.
Masthead is big and clear, colour contrast from the background image making the text stand
out.
Cover lines that are relevant to the genre of music
Areas to develop further:
Possibly include more cover lines to draw the reader into the magazine
Attempt to use the rule of thirds to make the magazine look a little more authentic and a
magazine that could be seen in the shops
Contents:
Rule of thirds in contents page is used really well, the contents page looks professional with
a consistent colour scheme throughout both of the pages
Again features that link to the genre of the music which will help persuade the target
audience that you are trying to attract.
Good range of images throughout both of the pages

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  • 1. Good use of colour to make text and certain elements that need to, stand out. Looks professional with a good main image, main cover line is big and bold standing out from the image behind it. Masthead is big and clear, colour contrast from the background image making the text stand out. Cover lines that are relevant to the genre of music Areas to develop further: Possibly include more cover lines to draw the reader into the magazine Attempt to use the rule of thirds to make the magazine look a little more authentic and a magazine that could be seen in the shops Contents: Rule of thirds in contents page is used really well, the contents page looks professional with a consistent colour scheme throughout both of the pages Again features that link to the genre of the music which will help persuade the target audience that you are trying to attract. Good range of images throughout both of the pages