1. 31/11/2011
Drama
Chang Sun Lee
Final reflection
! There were many situations, and other things when I was creating life story
performance. First, there were some strengths when I was creating life story
performance. I had to find story that happend to grand parents. So I used LGu+phone
that can call grand parents in Korea. I was writing some notes that can be helpful or
useful when I present to people. I was practicing and practicing to make me speak well
when I talk to people. It was hard to talk my story perfectly, because when I talk to
people I always say ah ah and and so it was hard to talk my story perfectly. I also
presented to grade 5, and they gave me good feed backs. One girl said that my story is
like book, like she thought that she was reading book. Two boys said that your story is
interesting, and curious. I was happy when I heard that, because it was the best feed
backs I ever heard. I made video to show people what happened in Korea war. I was
trying to make perfect timing. I was nervous when I was preparing for presentation,
because I was thinking I can do it or not. Second, there were some weakness when I
was preparing for presenting life story. I had huge weakness, which is ending part. The
reason is because my story is happend when my grand mother was 9 years old. My
ending part is I couldn’t remember what happend next, but I could remember that North
Korean soldiers killed many people. I think this is really not good ending. Also, I heard
one really not good feedback from shi hyun. He said your story is kind of not realistic.
When I heard that feedback I was little bit sad. Third, there were some things to change
improve on. I was thinking and thinking that what could be changed or improved on. I
think I should improve ending part. I want to make ending part seriously so that
everyone can listen well. Also, I think I need to improve emotion part. When I was
practicing emotion was not going well. I was practiced like 5 times, but I couldn’t do
emotion. Then I used some feed backs to fix my story. I was trying my best to change
my story better using some feedbacks. Hedvig said that I have to put effort in the talking
in dramatically so I was really trying hard to make my talk dramatically. Do Yeon said
that I have to make my story more interesting so I put the four bombs exploding at front,
back, left, and right. Then many people liked that part so I was really happy. Lastly, I
applied some of research in my performance. I was kind of researching before asking to
grand mother. There were many things to talk about, and I found Korean war. I thought
that story will be good to tell people to I interviewed my grand mother about Korea war.
She was saying the story about 15 minutes so I made the story short. Also, I was
researching about Korean war. She didn’t said that stealing, and in the internet they said
North Korean soldiers stole many food and plates. Also, I was searching for pictures to
show people what happend in Korea war. Even though I didn’t do many research, I tried
my best to prepare for presentation.

2. ! There were many things to talk about my presentation. First, there were many
things strengths to talk about presentation. Many people clapped me when I finished the
presentation. I was little bit embarrassed when I finished my presentation, but I was
happy when friends clapped for me. Also, I think I did good at eye contact, because I
was watching at friends all the time. I think I captured timing well. Shi hyun said that it
was really good timing. I thought that the video and my talk the timing was nor right, but
it was so I was kind of happy. Second, there were some weaknesses with my
presentation. I think I did bat at talking, because I was talking like and or ahh. I was
really nervous and I couldn’t talk well. I was really trying hard, but I think I did bad at the
presentation. It was hard to go up and talk to friends. I have stage scare that if I go up to
stage, and if there are many people I’m really scared. Even though, I have stage scare,
I did it I’m kind of happy. Lastly, I think I have some things to improve. I think I need
improve my talking even though I have stage scare. If I could speak well in the stage, I
will be perfect. Also, I think I need to practiced more to get better at presenting stories. I
think I need put songs in the video so that everyone will like it more. I think it was great
time.