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Adding Feelings in Our
Writing!
Brought to you by the emotions from Inside Out
Why add feelings?
• So your reader can understand
what is happening with the
characters in your story.
• They help the readers stay
engaged with your story.
• They help the reader
understand the problem and
the solution in your story.
So how do we add
feelings into our story?
Let’s ask the emotions and find out…
Joy
• Situation: Joy finds out she
won the lottery!
• Boring sentence: “I felt happy I
won the lottery!”
• Instead, what would Joy be
doing to show she’s happy?
Sadness
• Situation: Sadness find out her
pet cat ran away.
• Boring sentence: “I felt sad that
my cat ran away.”
• Instead, what would Sadness
do to show she was unhappy?
Anger
• Situation: Anger had to stay
inside and do chores on a
beautiful Saturday.
• Boring sentence: “I’m so mad I
have to do chores today!”
• Instead, what would Anger do
to show he was angry?
Fear
• Situation: Fear saw a ferocious,
hungry bear standing three feet
in front of him!
• Boring sentence: “I’m so
scared of this bear!”
• Instead, what would Fear be
doing to show he was afraid?
Disgust
• Situation: Disgust smelled
three week old garbage that
Joy forgot to take out (again).
• Boring sentence: “That
garbage is disgusting!”
• Instead, what would disgust do
to show she was disgusted?
Remember, show (don’t tell) your
characters’ feelings and emotions!
Thanks for watching!

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Feelings:emotions writing mini lesson

  • 1. Adding Feelings in Our Writing! Brought to you by the emotions from Inside Out
  • 2. Why add feelings? • So your reader can understand what is happening with the characters in your story. • They help the readers stay engaged with your story. • They help the reader understand the problem and the solution in your story.
  • 3. So how do we add feelings into our story? Let’s ask the emotions and find out…
  • 4. Joy • Situation: Joy finds out she won the lottery! • Boring sentence: “I felt happy I won the lottery!” • Instead, what would Joy be doing to show she’s happy?
  • 5. Sadness • Situation: Sadness find out her pet cat ran away. • Boring sentence: “I felt sad that my cat ran away.” • Instead, what would Sadness do to show she was unhappy?
  • 6. Anger • Situation: Anger had to stay inside and do chores on a beautiful Saturday. • Boring sentence: “I’m so mad I have to do chores today!” • Instead, what would Anger do to show he was angry?
  • 7. Fear • Situation: Fear saw a ferocious, hungry bear standing three feet in front of him! • Boring sentence: “I’m so scared of this bear!” • Instead, what would Fear be doing to show he was afraid?
  • 8. Disgust • Situation: Disgust smelled three week old garbage that Joy forgot to take out (again). • Boring sentence: “That garbage is disgusting!” • Instead, what would disgust do to show she was disgusted?
  • 9. Remember, show (don’t tell) your characters’ feelings and emotions! Thanks for watching!