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Feedback on the Rough Cut

It was quite positive, we used a variety of shots and people liked the skiing
footage and thought it was professional and acquired from YouTube.

Unfortunately on the video’s audio was not of a good quality; it was also
unfinished furthermore on a lighter note, people thought that the story line was
emotional and sad.
They also thought that we had used a good quantity of mise-en-scene as we
focused highly on the props used in the footage which where the base of our film.

However we personally think that we didn’t convey enough emotion during the
footage and this is also affected by the lack of audio present in the film.

Overall we got positive feedback from ours peers but the group thinks that we
can still improve the quality of the film exponentially.

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Feedback on the rough cut

  • 1. Feedback on the Rough Cut It was quite positive, we used a variety of shots and people liked the skiing footage and thought it was professional and acquired from YouTube. Unfortunately on the video’s audio was not of a good quality; it was also unfinished furthermore on a lighter note, people thought that the story line was emotional and sad. They also thought that we had used a good quantity of mise-en-scene as we focused highly on the props used in the footage which where the base of our film. However we personally think that we didn’t convey enough emotion during the footage and this is also affected by the lack of audio present in the film. Overall we got positive feedback from ours peers but the group thinks that we can still improve the quality of the film exponentially.