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This document summarizes changes made to improve a publication from the preliminary to actual versions. The front cover was updated with a new masthead design and image edits to make it more eye-catching, along with adding a skyline and baseline to direct the reader's attention. The contents section now includes a tagline for each page to give the reader insight into what each includes and entice them to read more.
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Contents page draft 1
This draft magazine contents page layout includes the main sections of contents, advertisements, page numbers, featured articles with images, and summaries of the main articles. The designer intends to further develop this draft by adding real images and applying draft colors and fonts to make it look more polished and professional.
6. fmp production reflection
The document describes the process the author went through to design a magazine cover and back cover. They began by adding images and text to the front cover, then refined it with more relevant images and swapped some text. They tried different fonts for the title. Later, they added a barcode, price, and date to make it look more authentic, and designed the back cover which included a separate advertisement with a character and release information. They refined details and corrected inconsistencies between the front and back covers.
Improvements made on the contents page
Manvir B made improvements to the layout and design of their contents page. The original contents page had too much white space and overlapping text and images that made it look unprofessional. Manvir changed the color, moved elements around, and added a double page spread to make the contents page more visually appealing and reader-friendly while keeping required elements like enquiry numbers and text.
Improvment made on double page spread
Manvir improved his original double-page magazine spread after receiving feedback. His first version was missing important elements and looked empty. He changed the fonts to distinguish headings from body text. Manvir also added bylines indicating who wrote the text and took photographs. This made the spread look more official and professional. He used a drop cap for the first letter to resemble magazine style. These improvements resulted in a double-page spread that looked more suitable for a published magazine.
Draft contents screen shots
This document shows screenshots of a draft contents page that was brightened and had elements added. The original photo was used for the contents page and a title and background were added. Then the contents were listed on the side and the contents page title was changed to complete the draft contents page.
Double paged spread screen grabs
I edited a photo and imported it into an image box. I created a headline in a text box using the Skyline font. I typed the main article text in a Word document, imported it into a text box, and added a drop cap. I made an orange box for the stand first. I added extra information like the writer and photographer. Finally, I created a pull quote and aligned all the elements to make the double-paged spread look professional.
Front cover
The document discusses the development of a magazine cover. The creator chose an amp image to represent their magazine title "AMP UP" and edited it for the logo. A main image was selected that directly faces the camera to grab attention. This image was edited in Photoshop to enhance tones and contrast to make it stand out. Quark software was used to lay out the cover, with guidelines to place headlines and fonts. The logo, main image, and article headlines were added to the background in Quark.
Isaac final constructions
Isaac Peebles made several changes to finalize the construction of the front cover, contents page, and double page spread for a music magazine. For the front cover, changes included adding a red border, changing a cover line color to fit the color scheme, changing the puff shape and position of cover lines. The price was raised to £4.99. Fonts were changed to be consistent. For the contents page, headings were made red to stand out and the editor's note was repositioned. Photography credits were added and a website. For the double page spread, a border was added and fonts and heading colors were standardized with the rest of the magazine.
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This draft magazine contents page layout includes the main sections of contents, advertisements, page numbers, featured articles with images, and summaries of the main articles. The designer intends to further develop this draft by adding real images and applying draft colors and fonts to make it look more polished and professional.
6. fmp production reflection
The document describes the process the author went through to design a magazine cover and back cover. They began by adding images and text to the front cover, then refined it with more relevant images and swapped some text. They tried different fonts for the title. Later, they added a barcode, price, and date to make it look more authentic, and designed the back cover which included a separate advertisement with a character and release information. They refined details and corrected inconsistencies between the front and back covers.
Improvements made on the contents page
Manvir B made improvements to the layout and design of their contents page. The original contents page had too much white space and overlapping text and images that made it look unprofessional. Manvir changed the color, moved elements around, and added a double page spread to make the contents page more visually appealing and reader-friendly while keeping required elements like enquiry numbers and text.
Improvment made on double page spread
Manvir improved his original double-page magazine spread after receiving feedback. His first version was missing important elements and looked empty. He changed the fonts to distinguish headings from body text. Manvir also added bylines indicating who wrote the text and took photographs. This made the spread look more official and professional. He used a drop cap for the first letter to resemble magazine style. These improvements resulted in a double-page spread that looked more suitable for a published magazine.
Draft contents screen shots
This document shows screenshots of a draft contents page that was brightened and had elements added. The original photo was used for the contents page and a title and background were added. Then the contents were listed on the side and the contents page title was changed to complete the draft contents page.
Double paged spread screen grabs
I edited a photo and imported it into an image box. I created a headline in a text box using the Skyline font. I typed the main article text in a Word document, imported it into a text box, and added a drop cap. I made an orange box for the stand first. I added extra information like the writer and photographer. Finally, I created a pull quote and aligned all the elements to make the double-paged spread look professional.
Front cover
The document discusses the development of a magazine cover. The creator chose an amp image to represent their magazine title "AMP UP" and edited it for the logo. A main image was selected that directly faces the camera to grab attention. This image was edited in Photoshop to enhance tones and contrast to make it stand out. Quark software was used to lay out the cover, with guidelines to place headlines and fonts. The logo, main image, and article headlines were added to the background in Quark.
Isaac final constructions
Isaac Peebles made several changes to finalize the construction of the front cover, contents page, and double page spread for a music magazine. For the front cover, changes included adding a red border, changing a cover line color to fit the color scheme, changing the puff shape and position of cover lines. The price was raised to £4.99. Fonts were changed to be consistent. For the contents page, headings were made red to stand out and the editor's note was repositioned. Photography credits were added and a website. For the double page spread, a border was added and fonts and heading colors were standardized with the rest of the magazine.
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Mock up magazine
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This document provides details on the layout and design of a magazine cover. It explains that the masthead title will be in a bold serif font to stand out and attract readers. A clever slogan in a smaller bold font below the masthead is intended to also attract customers. The main image on the cover will take up most space and be of high quality to be the primary focus, while other elements like a barcode, date, and cover line linked to the image will make the magazine look professional.
Editing process
The document discusses editing various parts of a magazine, including the front cover, contents page, and double page spread. For the double page spread, the editor took a picture from the magazine, edited the contrast and deleted lines to improve quality. Text and logos from the front cover and contents page were copied over to ensure consistency. The same background color was also used to make the editing process easier. Little additional editing was needed since content came from other pages. Analysis of the overall editing discusses using websites to create fonts and software like Fireworks and Publisher to edit images and adjust colors to make everything look more professional.
Draft feeback
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Evaluation q7
- 2. Front Cover Actual This shows that I have changed the amount of written info on the page as well as the image. I have also played around with the editing of the image. I have changed the mast head to make it more eye catching. I have also added a skyline and base line to draw the readers attention.
- 4. Contents Actual I have improved upon my contents since my prelim as I have added a tag line to each page which allows the reader to have a insight in to what the pages include and they draw them into wanting to read more.