Ethan received feedback on his documentary from various sources like Facebook comments and questionnaires. The feedback highlighted several areas for improvement like conducting more interviews with sandwich shop owners, including more facts and statistics to support points, and using a more energetic female narrator to keep audiences engaged. People also said the documentary dragged in parts and wanted more historical context on sandwiches along with archive footage. Overall, the feedback was useful and showed people enjoyed and learned from the documentary.

1. What have you learned
from your audience
feedback?
Ethan jones

2. Facebook feedback
Facebook was a really useful and effective way
to get feedback on way to get feedback on my
documentary. It helped broadcast it to a much
wider audience.

3. Facebook Feedback
This comment shows that ash did like it but would of liked to of
seen more interviews. I think as a group we agreed this was one
aspect we should of improved. I personally would of liked to of
had a range of sandwich shop owners. If I was to do this project
again I would defiantly spend more time on filming interviews.

4. Facebook feedback
Joes agreement with ash re-enforces the view that interviews should have
been more focused on. I feel like this is an overall opinion felt by most who
have watched it. So I would definatley put more effort into filming more
interviews.

5. Facebook Feedback
Danny's comment highlighted a point id never really noticed. There are
facts within the documentary but I re watched my documentary and
realized Danny's point was right. There was not a sufficient amount of
facts and stats to support the points we were raising. If I was to do this
again id add more stats and facts to support the points raised within
the documentary.

6. Facebook Feedback
My nan pat picked up on a point theme and our group also agreed
upon. The male voice was slightly monotone and boring. It made the
audience lose interest slightly. If I was to do it again id get a female
voice over and have her be energetic to keep the audience listening

7. Other feedback
After handing out my questionaries’ to people and
showing my documentary to family and friends i got varied
but useful feedback. A lot of people said that it dragged on
a bit and that they would of liked to of heard more about
the history of sandwiches. They had also raised the point
that they would of enjoyed seeing more archive footage
such as Classic subway adverts, or news articles on
sandwiches. Overall people seemed to really enjoy our
documentary they found it enjoyable and informative