This essay discusses people's dependence on computers in the modern world. It begins by noting how nearly every aspect of life today is affected by computer technology, from business to education to entertainment. However, some argue that this reliance on computers could lead to vital skills being lost. The essay then counters that people could not maintain their current standard of living without computers, as technology has enabled food and services to support more people globally. In conclusion, while dependence on computers is accepted, ways to make this reliance less dangerous should be explored.

1. WRITING FILE Essay
short piece of
writing on a
Essay particular subject
You have been doing a class project on technology. Your teacher has asked you to
write an essay giving your opinion on the following statement:
People in the modern world depend too much on computers.
Write your essay.
Model Answer
DO restate In today’s World, nearly every aspect of life is affected by computer
the question technology. Computers are used for business, public services, education and
in your first entertainment. DON’T start by
sentence. saying I agree with
this –your essay
Some people are concerned by this development. They fear that vital skills
should present
are being lost as computer technology replaces traditional ways of working in a your own
wide variety of areas, from art and design to banking and commerce. They point out argument.
DO include
supporting the chaos that can occur when computer systems fail, leading to the breakdown of
detail for the essential services such as transport, law and order.
points in each
paragraph. However, people could not continue to enjoy their present standard of living
without computer technology. There are now far more people in the world than DON’T forget to
there were a generation ago. The fact that there is enough food for them, that they express your
DO use can travel safely from one place to another, and that they can be provided with opinion in the
linking words medical care, is largely due to computer technology. conclusion.
to introduce
points. In my opinion, therefore, we have to accept our dependence on computers,
but at the same time we should work to find ways of making this dependence less
dangerous.
Essay Structure
• Introduction (introducing the topic and stating the focus of the essay)
• Body (expressing arguments for and against with supporting evidence)
• Conclusion (summarising your opinion and stating your conclusion)
Useful Language
I think/believe that… TIPS
Some people claim that… • Look carefully at the title or question and
make sure you really answer it.
It is often said/believed/argued that… • Use general statements to convey the
main ideas, and then provide evidence,
However, in my view/opinion… examples, details and reasons to
support these statements.
From my point of view… • Use paragraph divisions and connecting
words and phrases to make the structure
Firstly it is clear that… clear.
• Use attitude adverbs to show your
While it is true that… opinion.
• When presenting the arguments for and
It is important to remember that… against do it in an impersonal way.
On balance then, I feel that…
To sum up / In conclusion, it seems to me that…