This document provides tips for highlighting key findings in a research paper. It recommends beginning important paragraphs in a new section to draw attention. Short sentences and active language should be used to clearly convey critical points. Visual elements like tables, figures and graphs are suggested to emphasize findings and make them easily understandable for readers. The goal is to effectively communicate results so the value of the work is recognized.

1. English for research paper writing
Topic: Highlighting Your Findings
Lecture-01
By
Mr. B Ch S Naga Raju
Regd No:19DH1S0301
Department of pharmaceutics
Vishnu Institute of Pharmaceutical Education &
Research (VIPER)

2. Contents
Importance
Help your findings to stand out visually on the page by
beginning a new paragraph
Make your sentences shorter than normal
Consider using bullets and headings
Use of tables, figures, graphs, pictures to attract attention
Summary

3. Why this is important?
• Your findings may be extremely important and valid
• If the referees are not able to understand your findings because:
Highlighted explained
clearly
No publish
Hard Work Dust Bin

4. Help your
findings to stand
out visually on
the page by
beginning a new
paragraph
Key finding
paragraph
(KFP)
beginning of
the paragraph
Readers focus
on beginning
and ending of
paragraphs
rather than
middle
Less chance of
readers to find
when placed
in middle
If possible,
KFP should be
shorter than
previous
paragraph
There should
be no or
minimum
Citations from
literature

5. ORIGINAL VERSION
The Journal of Nanoparticle Research is a
monthly peer-reviewed journal that
explores the specific concepts, properties,
phenomena and processes of structures at
the nanoscale. Coverage includes synthesis,
assembly, transport, reactivity, and stability,
and emphasizes realization and application
of systems, structures and devices with
novel functions obtained via precursor
nanoparticles. The Journal fosters the
interdisciplinary dissemination of
knowledge by encouraging synergetic
approaches originating from a wide range
of disciplines, such as Physics, Chemistry,
Biology and Health Care.
REVISED VERSION
The Journal of Nanoparticle Research is
a monthly peer-reviewed journal that
explores the specific concepts,
properties, phenomena and processes of
structures at the nanoscale.
Coverage includes synthesis, assembly,
transport, reactivity, and stability, and
emphasizes realization and application
of systems, structures and devices with
novel functions obtained via precursor
nanoparticles.
The Journal fosters the interdisciplinary
dissemination of knowledge by
encouraging synergetic approaches
originating from a wide range of
disciplines, such as Physics, Chemistry,
Biology and Health Care.

6. Present your key findings in a very short sentence
 The visual factor is critical to impact of your paper
 Similar to a oral presentation
 Presenter have something important to say they modify their voice
 Uses particular adverbs like interestingly, remarkably, importantly
 To attract the attention of audience
 Underline the importance of what they are saying

7. ORIGINAL VERSION
The method developed in this work
relies on a sample pre-treatment that
allows a low final dilution, guaranteeing,
on the other hand, a negligible shift of
pH with regard to different specimens to
be tested (±0.15 units from 23 samples
tested); however, the slight shifts of pH
do not alter the response of the test, as
shown by the overlapping of standard
curves obtained by spiking buffers at
different pH with IGF-1
REVISED VERSION
Our method relies on a sample pre-
treatment that only requires a minimum
level of dilution. In addition, it
guarantees, a negligible shift in pH with
regard to the different specimens to be
tested (±0.15 units from 23 samples
tested). Importantly, the slight shifts in
pH do not alter the response of the test.
This is revealed by overlapping of
standard curves obtained by spiking
buffers at different pH with IGF-1

8. Consider using bullets and headings
 Should begin with same or infinitive grammatical part
ORIGINAL VERSION
Equation 2 is the main result of our study.
It can be used :
 In numerical codes to evaluate the
impact of the presence of anomalies in
the various samples taken
 For simple estimates when designing
experiments
REVISED VERSION
Equation 2 is the main result of our study. It
can be used to:
 Evaluate in numerical codes the impact
of the presence of anomalies in the
various samples taken
 Make simple estimates for designing
experiments

9. Varying styles can be used based on the need
 A
 B
 C
 A
 B
 C
 A
 B
 C
 A
 B
 C
 A
 B
 C
o A
o B
o C

10. If more than three bullets present then numbering is easy
• A
• B
• C
• D
• E
• F
1) A
2) B
3) C
4) D
5) E
6) F

11. Use of tables, figures, graphs, pictures to attract attention
 It is one of the way to attract attention of reader visually i.e.
graphs tables
 It is one of the best methods to project our work in a
simplest way that reader can understand easily

12. Picture: Blood cells

13. Different brand names in Aceclofenac and
their cost
Brand Name of the tablet Cost of 10 Tablets in rupees
A- Niclo 100 22
Abate SR (200mg) 46
Abdal 100 25
ACB (100mg) 25
AC-1100 10

14. Different brand names in Aceclofenac and
their cost
22
46
25 25
10
0
5
10
15
20
25
30
35
40
45
50
A-Niclo 100 Abate SR (200mg) Abdal 100 ACB (100mg) AC-1100
COSTOF10TABLETSINRS.
BRAND OF THE ACECLOFENAC
Graphical Representation

15. Summary
Begin a new paragraph when highlighting some thing important
Use shorter sentences and paragraphs to make your key points
Dynamic language - readers understand easily
Don’t just tell the reader something important - Show them

16. In the words of English botanist
Sir Francis Darwin,
“In Science the credit goes to the man
who convinces the world, not the man to whom the
idea first occurred”