English Email Writing 101
By 朱永載 Yung-Tsai Chu
2018/1/12
Outline
Principle
Structure
Do’s and Don’ts for each part
Useful phrases/sentences
Reminders
Principle- 5C
Correctness
Spelling, grammar, punctuation
Conciseness
Topic sentence then 2-3 sentences in main body
Complete
Don't miss necessary information
Clarity
Use paragraphs
Courtesy
Formal VS. Informal
Formal VS. Informal
Informal
A birthday greeting to a
colleague
An email to a colleague who
is also a good friend
A social invitation to a friend
at your workplace
A message to a friend on a
social networking site
Formal
An email to a customer
A job application
An email to your manager
A complaint to a shop
An email from one company
to another company
Structure
Subject line
Greeting
Opening Sentence (self intro if needed)
Main Body(Detail)
Ending(Call-To-Action)
Sign-off
Typical Email
Subject: Drug Abuse Seminar Invitation on 3/1 in Taipei
Dear Prof. Heisenberg,
My name is Yung-Tsai Chu from Ministry of Health and Welfare of Taiwan. We’d
like to invite you to give a speech in a drug abuse seminar for drug enforcement
and researchers in Taiwan.
The seminar will take place on 3/1 in National Taiwan University, Taipei. We hope
you can share your insight into modern illicit drug production. The length of speech
is 50 minutes and it’s followed by a 10-minute discussion.
We would be honored if you decide to take part in the seminar. Please do not
hesitate to contact me if you have any questions. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Yung-Tsai
Email Address
1. Formal name with your
school/office/company is better
2. How to say email address
@ at
. dot
Subject Line
Specific yet short and sweet
No longer than 50 characters
Noun instead of Verb
Examples
Sales Promotion
VS.
Sales Promotion for 2012 A/W Collection
Request
VS.
Quotation Request for Gift Bags
Something More
You can add:
change, new, revision, updated, modified
important, urgent
Friday Meeting Time = Change of Friday Meeting Time
Sales Event Location = New Location for Sales Event
Next Week Work Schedule = Revision to the Work Schedul
Greeting
Informal
Hello/Hi Ryan,
Hi,
Hey, John,(professional
yet informal)
No greetings if many email in
short time
Formal
Dear Ms./Mr…. ,
Dear (full name),
Dear Prof./Dr. ,
Dear Sir/Madam,
To whom it may concern,
Opening Sentence
Self-introduction and who your represent
“My name is ___ and working in ____”
“My name is ___ , (job title)”
“On behalf of ____, we _____”
Purpose (next page)
Opening Sentence
I am writing to
ask for further details about/regarding/concerning …
inform you that my new address is …
say thank you very much for all your hard work.
apply for the job as Teacher of Maths at your school.
confirm...
I'm writing regarding…
Opening for Reply
Thank you for _____
I’ m writing in response to your inquiry
about _____
In response to your request, we can
_____.
Main Body
Consider changing to next paragraph
2-3 sentences per paragraph
Change to Next Topic...
“There's one more thing I'd like to
discuss with you”
“Regarding…”
“I'd also like to ask you about “
Ending
Call-to-Action
Ask for reply
Ask for questions
Call-to-Action
Could you please...
Can I ask you to …
Please... by tomorrow at the latest(direct,
if urgent)
Ask for Reply
I look forward to V-ing/N
Hearing from you/meeting you/ your reply
Please let me know your opinion about my
proposal/ if this will be possible/convenient for you
I’d appreciate your reply when you have
received my email.
Questions
If you have any questions, please don't
hesitate to contact me./let me know
Sign-Off
Neutral
Regards,
Kind Regards,
Best Wishes,
Formal
Yours Sincerely
Yours Truly,
Sign-Off (Informal)
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Reminders
Useful Phrases
“I'm forwarding _____ to you”
“I've forwarded _____ to you”
“I've cc'd/cc'ed/copied __name__ on this
email”
C.C. Carbon Copy
B.C.C Blind Carbon Copy
Attachment
“Please find attached _______” (photo,
file, document, my CV...etc)
“Attached is/are _______”
“I’ve attached ______”
Attach the file before starting writing
More Details
Font: Arial, Times New Roman
Size: 12
Avoid Colorful text, italics, CAPITAL
LETTERS (shouting, aggressive)
Tense
To speak about a timetable, use the present simple
Next term runs from 1 September until 16 December.
To speak about a future arrangement, use the present
continuous or 'be going to’
Mr Toshiko is coming to our next meeting.
Next term we are going to learn about pollution.
Use the present simple after when, if and next time in
future time clauses
I will call you when I get to the station.
Let's go for a walk if the weather is good.
Punctuation & Contractions
No space before comma and period,
space after them
Avoid exclamation mark in email
Parentheses: space before ( and after )
Contractions
Contractions(縮讀字)- don't.won't.didn't:
OK
Informal contractions(no apostrophe):
gonna.wanna.hafta
How to Say No Politely
That would be great, but ….
I’m afraid...
I would love to help you, but …
I really appreciate the invitation, but…
I wish I could come, but unfortunately …
I won’t be available on
Wrap Up
Subject: Drug Abuse Seminar Invitation on 3/1 in Taipei
Dear Prof. Heisenberg,
My name is Yung-Tsai Chu from Ministry of Health and Welfare of Taiwan. We’d
like to invite you to give a speech in a drug abuse seminar for drug enforcement
and researchers in Taiwan.
The seminar will take place on 3/1 in National Taiwan University, Taipei. We hope
you can share your insight into modern illicit drug production. The length of speech
is 50 minutes and it’s followed by a 10-minute discussion.
We would be honored if you decide to take part in the seminar. Please do not
hesitate to contact me if you have any questions. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Yung-Tsai
Reference
Website:
https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-emails
Youtube:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itLLVAJjXNI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9oo7f5mA-Qs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xay5TeJVSC0
Articles:
https://tw.blog.voicetube.com/archives/44523
http://homepage.ntu.edu.tw/~karchung/Intro_to_ling/BetterEmail.pdf
https://tw.english.agency/實用英文-email英文常用語總整理
http://www.toeicok.com.tw/你一定要會的職場email寫作重點-英文email常見四
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English email writing 101