Drugs are becoming more and
more common in many countries.
What are some of the problems
associated with drug abuse, and
 what are some of the possible
    solutions? (250 words)
Step by step
•   Plan
•   Vocabulary
•   Ideas
•   Organize ideas
•   Layout
•   Introduction and Conclusion
Plan
• Intro     Present situation 1-2 sentences
• Problems Topic Sentence
Problem 1 Example, Problem 2 Example, Problem 3 Example
• Solutions Topic Sentence
Solution 1 More Info, Solution 2 More Info, Solution 3 More
  Info
• Conclusion       Summary sentence(s) Future
Vocabulary
• Think of synonyms (words which mean the
  same)
• Think of related words and phrases
• Change
  – nouns to verbs
  – verbs to nouns
  – adjectives to nouns, etc
Problems
• Effect on parents, distress, pain
• Effect on family (brothers, sisters, wives, husbands,
  children)
• Effect on work, productivity, punctuality, career
• Criminal problems, theft, police resources,
  smuggling, mafia, underworld, gangs
• Medical problems, addiction, death, overdose,
  driving, irrational decisions or behavior,
  hospitalization, medical resources, treatment, clinics,
  detoxification, counseling
Solutions
• Education, schools, awareness, campaigns, choices,
  advertising
• Counseling, treatment, advice, confidential, helpline
• Communication between parents and children,
  meals, non-judgmental, firm, close, open
  communication
• Close family relationships: brothers, sisters, parents
• Employment, meaningful activity, activities in
  evenings,
• Good environment, leisure, sports, friends
• Expectations
Vocabulary
•   drug abuse   •   drug addiction
•   drug user    •   addict, victim of drug abuse, user
•   drugs        •   illegal substances
•   smuggle      •   traffic
•   dealer       •   pusher
•   dealing      •   selling
•   common       •   widespread, prevalent
•   solution     •   answer to the problem, solve
•   country      •   society, nation, communities
Introduction
Present        • Drug abuse is common in many countries.
situation:       Billions of dollars are spent internationally
definition /
                 preventing drug use, treating addicts, and
problems
                 fighting drug-related crime.
Present        • Although drugs threaten many societies,
situation:       their effects can also be combated
                 successfully.
Solutions      • This essay looks at some of the effects of
This essay will drug use on society, and suggests some
(Essay outline) solutions to the problem.
Write topic sentence and problems
Drug abuse causes multiple problems for countries
  and communities.
• The medical effects are obvious. Example 1 …

• There are also psychological effects. Example 2 …

• The third result is crime. Example 3 …
Write topic sentence and solutions
Despite these problems the danger of drugs can be
 fought.
• Education is the first battle. Example 1 …

• A second approach is to increase police power.
  Example 2 …

• However, the main target should be the user.
  Example 3 …
Conclusion
Topic        • In conclusion,
Sentence

Summary of   • although the problem of drugs may seem
essay:         impossible to eliminate, there are
Problem/       concrete steps that can be taken to
solution
               weaken the hold of drugs on society.

Future       • The danger from drugs is too great to
statement
               ignore.
FINAL ESSAY
Drug abuse is common in many countries. Billions of dollars are
   spent internationally preventing drug use, treating addicts, and
   fighting drug-related crime. Although drugs threaten many
   societies, their effects can also be combated successfully. This
   essay looks at some of the effects of drug use on society, and
   suggests some solutions to the problem.
Drug abuse causes multiple problems for countries and
   communities. The medical effects are very obvious …….. There
   are also psychological effects……. The third result is crime …….
Despite these problems, the danger of drugs can be fought.
   Education is the first battle…… . A second approach is to increase
   police power …. However the main target should be the user…..
In conclusion, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible
   to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to
   weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is
   too great to ignore.

Drugs

  • 1.
    Drugs are becomingmore and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions? (250 words)
  • 2.
    Step by step • Plan • Vocabulary • Ideas • Organize ideas • Layout • Introduction and Conclusion
  • 3.
    Plan • Intro Present situation 1-2 sentences • Problems Topic Sentence Problem 1 Example, Problem 2 Example, Problem 3 Example • Solutions Topic Sentence Solution 1 More Info, Solution 2 More Info, Solution 3 More Info • Conclusion Summary sentence(s) Future
  • 4.
    Vocabulary • Think ofsynonyms (words which mean the same) • Think of related words and phrases • Change – nouns to verbs – verbs to nouns – adjectives to nouns, etc
  • 5.
    Problems • Effect onparents, distress, pain • Effect on family (brothers, sisters, wives, husbands, children) • Effect on work, productivity, punctuality, career • Criminal problems, theft, police resources, smuggling, mafia, underworld, gangs • Medical problems, addiction, death, overdose, driving, irrational decisions or behavior, hospitalization, medical resources, treatment, clinics, detoxification, counseling
  • 6.
    Solutions • Education, schools,awareness, campaigns, choices, advertising • Counseling, treatment, advice, confidential, helpline • Communication between parents and children, meals, non-judgmental, firm, close, open communication • Close family relationships: brothers, sisters, parents • Employment, meaningful activity, activities in evenings, • Good environment, leisure, sports, friends • Expectations
  • 7.
    Vocabulary • drug abuse • drug addiction • drug user • addict, victim of drug abuse, user • drugs • illegal substances • smuggle • traffic • dealer • pusher • dealing • selling • common • widespread, prevalent • solution • answer to the problem, solve • country • society, nation, communities
  • 8.
    Introduction Present • Drug abuse is common in many countries. situation: Billions of dollars are spent internationally definition / preventing drug use, treating addicts, and problems fighting drug-related crime. Present • Although drugs threaten many societies, situation: their effects can also be combated successfully. Solutions • This essay looks at some of the effects of This essay will drug use on society, and suggests some (Essay outline) solutions to the problem.
  • 9.
    Write topic sentenceand problems Drug abuse causes multiple problems for countries and communities. • The medical effects are obvious. Example 1 … • There are also psychological effects. Example 2 … • The third result is crime. Example 3 …
  • 10.
    Write topic sentenceand solutions Despite these problems the danger of drugs can be fought. • Education is the first battle. Example 1 … • A second approach is to increase police power. Example 2 … • However, the main target should be the user. Example 3 …
  • 11.
    Conclusion Topic • In conclusion, Sentence Summary of • although the problem of drugs may seem essay: impossible to eliminate, there are Problem/ concrete steps that can be taken to solution weaken the hold of drugs on society. Future • The danger from drugs is too great to statement ignore.
  • 12.
    FINAL ESSAY Drug abuseis common in many countries. Billions of dollars are spent internationally preventing drug use, treating addicts, and fighting drug-related crime. Although drugs threaten many societies, their effects can also be combated successfully. This essay looks at some of the effects of drug use on society, and suggests some solutions to the problem. Drug abuse causes multiple problems for countries and communities. The medical effects are very obvious …….. There are also psychological effects……. The third result is crime ……. Despite these problems, the danger of drugs can be fought. Education is the first battle…… . A second approach is to increase police power …. However the main target should be the user….. In conclusion, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.