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Don’t Cheat Your Reader!
Writing Books Your
Readers Will Love
Larry K. & Lorna Collins
Reader’s Prayer
By Sylvia Sikeston, Editor
God grant us the courage to
not buy the Fiction we
cannot stomach,
The serenity to read the
Fiction we can,
And the wisdom to know the
difference.
Why We Hate Books
• Badly-drawn characters
• Spear carriers
• Too many characters
• Unclear protagonist
• Introducing key characters
too late in the story
• Confusing POV
POV – Point of View
• POV
– 1st
person
– 1st
shifting
– 3rd
person
– 3rd
shifting
– Omniscient
• Be consistent
Why We Hate Books – Part 2
• Bad writing
• Too wordy
• Not enough detail
• Poor plotting
• Unresolved endings
• Unresolved plotlines
• Impossible situations
• Cop-out endings
Why We Hate Books – Part 3
• Facts known only to the
author
• Historical inaccuracies
• Language errors
– Historical
– Moral
• Author intrusion
– “Telling” details instead of
“showing”
• Preaching
What We Love - Basics
1. A Great Hook
2. A Good Story
3. Compelling Characters
4. A Strong Voice
5. Excellent Writing
A Great Hook
• Decide where to start the
story:
– Before the beginning
– At the beginning
– In the middle
– At the end
• Name a character
• Give significant plot detail
A Great Hook – Part 2
• Give character an
attitude, a secret
• Create a question in the
reader’s mind
• Create a mood
• Create a great sentence,
paragraph or chapter
• Create an intriguing place
A Good Story
• Create believable situation
• The larger the event, the
more important your
characters
• Create conflicts between
characters
• Create internal conflict in
characters
• Increase conflict
throughout the story
A Good Story – Part 2
• Interrelate scenes and chapters
• Use suspense – withhold
information
• Keep your promises to the
reader
• Make the reader care about
the plot
A Good Story – Part 3
• Make it real, make it
believable, make it true
• Build to a climax
• Keep your theme consistent
• Write strong ending
Compelling Characters
• Make them believable and
authentic – to you and the reader
• Make them distinct and
identifiable by their actions and
sounds
• Give them clear emotions
• Complete their arcs
• Keep them consistent
• Make them memorable
• Make them necessary
Compelling Characters – Part 2
• Give each character an
agenda (What do they want?
Need?)
• How do they react to stress?
• Create fewer, not more
characters
Excellent Writing
• Give enough detail
• Don’t be too wordy
• Don’t start the next book
as the finish of this one
• Make sure the mechanics
(spelling, punctuation,
etc.) are perfect
• Use effective metaphors
and similes
Excellent Writing – Part 2
• Create “cliffhangers” for
chapter endings
• Give the story a spiritual or
moral dimension
• Write descriptions to
appeal to all the senses
• Use active verbs
Writing Basics
• Read, Read, Read
• Write, Write, Write
• Edit, Edit, Edit
• Keep at it!
Final Thoughts
“When you speak, your words
echo only across the room or
down the hall. But when you
write, your words echo down
the ages.”
Bud Gardner – Chicken Soup
for the Writer’s Soul

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Don't cheat your reader

  • 1. Don’t Cheat Your Reader! Writing Books Your Readers Will Love Larry K. & Lorna Collins
  • 2. Reader’s Prayer By Sylvia Sikeston, Editor God grant us the courage to not buy the Fiction we cannot stomach, The serenity to read the Fiction we can, And the wisdom to know the difference.
  • 3. Why We Hate Books • Badly-drawn characters • Spear carriers • Too many characters • Unclear protagonist • Introducing key characters too late in the story • Confusing POV
  • 4. POV – Point of View • POV – 1st person – 1st shifting – 3rd person – 3rd shifting – Omniscient • Be consistent
  • 5. Why We Hate Books – Part 2 • Bad writing • Too wordy • Not enough detail • Poor plotting • Unresolved endings • Unresolved plotlines • Impossible situations • Cop-out endings
  • 6. Why We Hate Books – Part 3 • Facts known only to the author • Historical inaccuracies • Language errors – Historical – Moral • Author intrusion – “Telling” details instead of “showing” • Preaching
  • 7. What We Love - Basics 1. A Great Hook 2. A Good Story 3. Compelling Characters 4. A Strong Voice 5. Excellent Writing
  • 8. A Great Hook • Decide where to start the story: – Before the beginning – At the beginning – In the middle – At the end • Name a character • Give significant plot detail
  • 9. A Great Hook – Part 2 • Give character an attitude, a secret • Create a question in the reader’s mind • Create a mood • Create a great sentence, paragraph or chapter • Create an intriguing place
  • 10. A Good Story • Create believable situation • The larger the event, the more important your characters • Create conflicts between characters • Create internal conflict in characters • Increase conflict throughout the story
  • 11. A Good Story – Part 2 • Interrelate scenes and chapters • Use suspense – withhold information • Keep your promises to the reader • Make the reader care about the plot
  • 12. A Good Story – Part 3 • Make it real, make it believable, make it true • Build to a climax • Keep your theme consistent • Write strong ending
  • 13. Compelling Characters • Make them believable and authentic – to you and the reader • Make them distinct and identifiable by their actions and sounds • Give them clear emotions • Complete their arcs • Keep them consistent • Make them memorable • Make them necessary
  • 14. Compelling Characters – Part 2 • Give each character an agenda (What do they want? Need?) • How do they react to stress? • Create fewer, not more characters
  • 15. Excellent Writing • Give enough detail • Don’t be too wordy • Don’t start the next book as the finish of this one • Make sure the mechanics (spelling, punctuation, etc.) are perfect • Use effective metaphors and similes
  • 16. Excellent Writing – Part 2 • Create “cliffhangers” for chapter endings • Give the story a spiritual or moral dimension • Write descriptions to appeal to all the senses • Use active verbs
  • 17. Writing Basics • Read, Read, Read • Write, Write, Write • Edit, Edit, Edit • Keep at it!
  • 18. Final Thoughts “When you speak, your words echo only across the room or down the hall. But when you write, your words echo down the ages.” Bud Gardner – Chicken Soup for the Writer’s Soul