Development pro forma

Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
name

Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the simplicity of the image which brings out some of the main
features in the animal for example the spots clearly identify that it’s a
leopard and this could be spotted by a young child. I also like how easy
it was to create using the shapes to get a basic outline of the animal. I
also like how I used the grass tool on the paintbrush icon to make the
leopard seem like he is placed in a scene and he’s walking through the
grass.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I were to improve my work I would give the leopard more shading to
bring out more of the features in it and make it look slightly more
realistic but not too much to be able to keep the cartoon
characteristics.

Evaluation
I like how this image is created using the shapes and
shadows to create more depth and detail to the
image. I also like how I have designed the
background to blend in with the rest of the image
using shapes and Gaussian blur.
To improve my image I would make the foreground
blend in with the background more to make the
image look more realistic.

Evaluation
I liked how simple these images were to create and the results
they produced. When making these I created a basic outline
of the characters using the polygon lasso tool and then change
the colour of them using the colour overlay tool. I then used
the colour range tool to use the shadows and features from
the original photo to then use on my own. I think it works well
as an image and stands out well.
If I were to do these type of images again I would choose a
more detailed image rather than a close up to create more of
a challenge and produce a more professional image.

Evaluation
I liked how easy they were to create and how they look as a
whole. I like the spacing have between each letter as i think
it is a good amount to have as you can clearly see each letter
and they are not merged together. My favourite text would
be the 3rd one as it looks good as a title and with it having a
clipping mask to show the image behind it it works really
well.
If i were to do this task again i would try and use shading in
some of the letters to give them more depth and make them
look slightly 3D.

Evaluation
I liked how the effect of using the filter gallery can change the look of this
image and in this case making it look more comic book looking. I think I used
the threshold tool to my advantage creating more shadows on the characters
bringing out more detail and shadows in the image. I liked my first image as it
created a more dated look of the image like an old photograph or a torn up
picture. The effect created fewer detail in the characters faces giving it a more
abstract effect. My second image was a more realistic approach to a comic
book keeping most of the detail in the image but still making it look more
cartoon like. My third and final image was again an abstract image and mostly
includes shapes to give the character his features. I like this image the most
because it looks like it could be in a comic book.
If I were to do this task again I would find an image that I could create a black
and white comic book effect out of it as I think this would work really well
with some images.

Evaluation
They show good emotions and showed good childhood themes. Each
photo showed a good amount of joy for example the one with the
person flag poling. In my images I was trying to capture the joy of
childhood and how you feel invincible and love to show off to your
friends. I think I captured this well in the first image of the person
jumping off the hill as his arm movements show a feeling of happiness
and joy as they are in the air. I also think the second image captures
the feeling of being invincible as it shows strength and concentration.
If I were to do this shoot again I would capture a image of a group of
friends together doing something like jumping of a hill or running
together

Evaluation
I like this hand drawn image as it looks quite nice
without colour. I think the angle that I drew it on is
good because it shows more depth into the car and
works well with the image.
If I was to create this image again I would add more
shading to it to give it more detail and I would draw
things like sponsors on the sides of the car.

On this mood board I am displaying the different styles
of jack and the bean stalk that have been drawn and
even directed before. From the styles of the basic
cartoon style image to a film style image. I like the style
of the 3rd one as it is easier to draw by using either
roterscoping or shaping

This mood board is about the type of
beanstalks and what I can make them look
like. Some look 3D but other can look 2D
and very basic like the 1st image above. I
like the 3rd image as it looks like it was
hand drawn and can be done using the
paintbrush tools on Photoshop.

In this mood board I have looked at
different types of giant I could use.
I think the first image looks the
best but is really dark and
unsuitable for a children's book, I
would probably use the second
image on here of a more nimble
giant.

On this mood board I have look at what jacks
house would look like both and exterior would
look like and how I could draw them to make
them look like they would fit into a children’s
story. I like how the forth image looks as it is
clear to see what it is and it is not too cartoon
like.

Text Options
On this page I have researched some text idea I would maybe use as the font in my writing. I went for a
basic font on each choice so that it is readable to a child and can be used as both a title and the general
font.

Proposal
Dimensions
I want my book to be 12 pages long so it gives a good amount for a child to read. And the dimensions will be 25
X 0.15 X 20cm. I also want the book to be made from a thicker paper so it prevents a child from getting paper
cuts.
Story Overview
My book will be called ‘Jack And The Peastalk’ which is a different version from the original story jack and the
beanstalk. In my story there will be 3 main characters, Jack, his mother and the not so big giant. My story has a
twist on the original encounter of jack and the beanstalk which giant is a big strong creature, whereas in my
story the shadow of the giant is been manipulated and he is actually a weak and nimble creature. Jack buys the
pea pod from the market and his mother is disgusted with him and throws the pod outside, over night it grown
into a big peastalk where at the top lives the not so giant, giant with his magic chicken which lays golden eggs
when the guitar is played to it. Jack climbs the stalk and sees the chicken he then sees the shadow on the not so
giant and makes a run for it. The not so giant captures him and jack sees he is not so big after all. They make a
deal that jack may take the chicken and the guitar in return for his friendship. Jack shook his hand and off he
went down the stalk to greet his mother with the chicken and the guitar. His mother was shocked and
apologised for not believing in him and they used the eggs to make some money and rebuilt the house bigger
and better that was fit for a giant. Then they all lived happily ever after.
Export Format
I want my book to be a PDF file format
Advantages: they are quickly created and easy to open. They are also securable to prevent file loss. They can
compress large files so you can save RAM.
Disadvantages: They are difficult to edit when created into a PDF and they are many types of PDF and it
depends on which one you click to the quality of your document.

Deadline
20 March 2015
Audience
I will design my book to be based for children ages 7-11 as I think this is a good age to create a book for. It
comes into advantage when designing the images as these type of books don’t have many but they are
more detailed. Therefore I will have to take into account how I design my images and how complex I make
them. For example I will have to keep to a 2D based image as it can become confusing when things appear
third dimensional on a page as they have to determine what appears in the foreground and the background.
I feel that the pictures in a children's book are the most important part as that is mostly what they look at
either when there parents are reading the book or when they are trying to understand to read it
themselves. An image can help them understand this more and also use as a reference when they start
drawing. I think my age choice is good as I plan to have 4 to 5 lines of writing on the page and this may be
too challenging for a child of a younger age than this as it can be too much to read.
Production Methods
I will design my pages for my book using Photoshop. I will use methods like
roterscoping and shaping to create the characters for my book. For the setting I will
hand draw things like the house and barn. I want to mostly make my story original
as it will look better and I will avoid copyright issues. I could use images of the
images for reference and then draw them from that and then use this in my book
rather than copying them.

What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
The story and initial idea is extremely well thought through
and clear. You have thought about the width of the paper so
children are less likely to get paper cuts.
Slightly more detail.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
Every area you have through of has a clear plan to
go with it. The concept is well thought through

- The main strength of the proposal is the way the
story is described and how it puts a clear image in
my head for what he wants to do with the story and
I can see this being really interesting, along with
being a good idea that plays off of a story that
already exists but makes changes to make it his
own.
There isn’t a lot of information about the target
audience, no gender or social grade have even
been mentioned, I feel with these bits of information
it would give me more of an idea of the target
audience he is going for.
further developed?
There are multiple mood boards, with lots of
information on each, giving me the idea that he
knows and has a clear image in his head of what
his book will look like, and what all the characters,
scenery and story will be about.
I feel even though he knows what he wants to do
for everything about his book, and done a lot of
work on his mood boards and put down some good
information, there is no pictures or any mention of
the characters in the book and what they will look
like, apart from the giant, and I feel writing about
the characters such as Jack would help a lot.

I like how you have considered the thickness of the
book for the readers health and safety, I also think
you original interpretation of what is essentially a
classic fairytale is very imaginative and moral
You could consider on you page dimensions how
many lines of the story will be on each page, taking
in consideration of your audience’s reading age
further developed?
The mind maps are incredibly detailed which is
good as it gives me a detailed idea of what you
want you story to be/look like
You could maybe explore how the chicken laying
golden eggs would look in your illustrations and
also how your guitar would fit into the story
historically depending on the time you have set it,
the guitar could not be historically accurate and
could confuse the reader

Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Overall my work is said to be well detailed and includes a good amount of information.
People liked that I designed many mood boards to describe my book and thought it
helped with the detail of my work. My improvements are to go into more detail about
the characters in my book and also if it is historically accurate.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I agree with the second comments page about my mood boards lacking character
development and I do feel as if I should do a mood board of jack and his mother to give
me and anyone else who reads my proposal a better understanding of the characters
involved in my book. I am glad to see that people have noticed the amount of detail I
have in my work as I did try and do this when I was writing them.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
I slightly disagree with the comment about the guitar being historically inaccurate as I
feel most things in children's books are not real anyway and for a guitar to be in the
book would mostly humour a child not confuse them.

Original Script
There was once upon a time a poor widow who had an only son named Jack, and a cow named Milky-White. And all they had to live on was the
milk the cow gave every morning, which they carried to the market and sold. But one morning Milky-White gave no milk, and they didn't know
what to do. "What shall we do, what shall we do?" said the widow, wringing her hands. "Cheer up, mother, I'll go and get work somewhere,"
said Jack. "We've tried that before, and nobody would take you," said his mother. "We must sell Milky-White and with the money start a shop,
or something. "All right, mother," says Jack. "It's market day today, and I'll soon sell Milky-White, and then we'll see what we can do. "So he took
the cow's halter in his hand, and off he started. He hadn't gone far when he met a funny-looking old man, who said to him, "Good morning, Jack.
"Good morning to you," said Jack, and wondered how he knew his name. "Well, Jack, and where are you off to?" said the man. "I'm going to
market to sell our cow there. "Oh, you look the proper sort of chap to sell cows," said the man. "I wonder if you know how many beans make
five. "Two in each hand and one in your mouth," says Jack, as sharp as a needle. "Right you are," says the man, "and here they are, the very
beans themselves," he went on, pulling out of his pocket a number of strange-looking beans. "As you are so sharp," says he, "I don't mind doing
a swap with you -- your cow for these beans. "Go along," says Jack. "Wouldn't you like it?” "Ah! You don't know what these beans are," said the
man. "If you plant them overnight, by morning they grow right up to the sky. ”Really?" said Jack. "You don't say so. ”Yes, that is so. And if it
doesn't turn out to be true you can have your cow back. "Right," says Jack, and hands him over Milky-White's halter and pockets the beans. Back
goes Jack home, and as he hadn't gone very far it wasn't dusk by the time he got to his door. "Back already, Jack?" said his mother. "I see you
haven't got Milky-White, so you've sold her. How much did you get for her?” "You'll never guess, mother," says Jack. "No, you don't say so. Good
boy! Five pounds? Ten? Fifteen? No, it can't be twenty. "I told you you couldn't guess. What do you say to these beans? They're magical. Plant
them overnight and -- ""What!" says Jack's mother. "Have you been such a fool, such a dolt, such an idiot, as to give away my Milky-White, the
best milker in the parish, and prime beef to boot, for a set of paltry beans? Take that! Take that! Take that! And as for your precious beans here
they go out of the window. And now off with you to bed. Not a sup shall you drink, and not a bit shall you swallow this very night. "So Jack went
upstairs to his little room in the attic, and sad and sorry he was, to be sure, as much for his mother's sake as for the loss of his supper. At last he
dropped off to sleep. When he woke up, the room looked so funny. The sun was shining into part of it, and yet all the rest was quite dark and
shady. So Jack jumped up and dressed himself and went to the window. And what do you think he saw? Why, the beans his mother had thrown
out of the window into the garden had sprung up into a big beanstalk which went up and up and up till it reached the sky. So the man spoke
truth after all. The beanstalk grew up quite close past Jack's window, so all he had to do was to open it and give a jump onto the beanstalk which
ran up just like a big ladder. So Jack climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed
till at last he reached the sky. And when he got there he found a long broad road going as straight as a dart. So he walked along, and he walked
along, and he walked along till he came to a great big tall house, and on the doorstep there was a great big tall woman. "Good morning, mum,"
says Jack, quite polite-like. "Could you be so kind as to give me some breakfast?" For he hadn't had anything to eat, you know,the night before,
and was as hungry as a hunter. "It's breakfast you want, is it?" says the great big tall woman. "It's breakfast you'll be if you don't move off from
here. My man is an ogre and there's nothing he likes better than boys broiled on toast. You'd better be moving on or he'll be coming. "Oh!
please, mum, do give me something to eat, mum. I've had nothing to eat since yesterday morning, really and truly, mum," says Jack. "I may as
well be broiled as die of hunger. "Well, the ogre's wife was not half so bad after all.

Original Script
So she took Jack into the kitchen, and gave him a hunk of bread and cheese and a jug of milk. But Jack hadn't half finished these when thump!
thump! thump! the whole house began to tremble with the noise of someone coming. "Goodness gracious me! It's my old man," said the ogre's
wife. "What on earth shall I do? Come along quick and jump in here." And she bundled Jack into the oven just as the ogre came in. He was a big
one, to be sure. At his belt he had three calves strung up by the heels, and he unhooked them and threw them down on the table and said,
"Here, wife, broil me a couple of these for breakfast. Ah! what's this I smell? Fee-fi-fo-fum, I smell the blood of an Englishman, Be he alive, or be
he dead, I'll have his bones to grind my bread. "Nonsense, dear," said his wife. "You' re dreaming. Or perhaps you smell the scraps of that little
boy you liked so much for yesterday's dinner. Here, you go and have a wash and tidy up, and by the time you come back your breakfasts' be
ready for you. "So off the ogre went, and Jack was just going to jump out of the oven and run away when the woman told him not. "Wait till he's
asleep," says she; "he always has a doze after breakfast. "Well, the ogre had his breakfast, and after that he goes to a big chest and takes out a
couple of bags of gold, and down he sits and counts till at last his head began to nod and he began to snore till the whole house shook again.
Then Jack crept out on tiptoe from his oven, and as he was passing the ogre, he took one of the bags of gold under his arm, and off he pelters till
he came to the beanstalk, and then he threw down the bag of gold, which, of course, fell into his mother's garden, and then he climbed down
and climbed down till at last he got home and told his mother and showed her the gold and said, "Well, mother, wasn't I right about the beans?
They are really magical, you see. "So they lived on the bag of gold for some time, but at last they came to the end of it, and Jack made up his
mind to try his luck once more at the top of the beanstalk. So one fine morning he rose up early, and got onto the beanstalk, and he climbed,
and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed till at last he came out onto the road again and up to the great
tall house he had been to before. There, sure enough, was the great tall woman a-standing on the doorstep. "Good morning, mum," says Jack,
as bold as brass, "could you be so good as to give me something to eat?” "Go away, my boy," said the big tall woman, "or else my man will eat
you up for breakfast. But aren't you the youngster who came here once before? Do you know, that very day my man missed one of his bags of
gold. "That's strange, mum," said Jack, "I dare say I could tell you something about that, but I'm so hungry I can't speak till I've had something to
eat. "Well, the big tall woman was so curious that she took him in and gave him something to eat. But he had scarcely begun munching it as
slowly as he could when thump! thump! they heard the giant's footstep, and his wife hid Jack away in the oven. All happened as it did before. In
came the ogre as he did before, said, "Fee-fi-fo-fum," and had his breakfast off three broiled oxen. Then he said, "Wife, bring me the hen that
lays the golden eggs." So she brought it, and the ogre said, "Lay," and it laid an egg all of gold. And then the ogre began to nod his head, and to
snore till the house shook. Then Jack crept out of the oven on tiptoe and caught hold of the golden hen, and was off before you could say "Jack
Robinson." But this time the hen gave a cackle which woke the ogre, and just as Jack got out of the house he heard him calling, "Wife, wife, what
have you done with my golden hen?” And the wife said, "Why, my dear? "But that was all Jack heard, for he rushed off to the beanstalk and
climbed down like a house on fire. And when he got home he showed his mother the wonderful hen, and said "Lay" to it; and it laid a golden egg
every time he said "Lay. "Well, Jack was not content, and it wasn't long before he determined to have another try at his luck up there at the top
of the beanstalk. So one fine morning he rose up early and got to the beanstalk, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he climbed, and he
climbed till he got to the top. But this time he knew better than to go straight to the ogre's house. And when he got near it, he waited behind a
bush till he saw the ogre's wife come out with a pail to get some water, and then he crept into the house and got into the copper.

Original Script
He hadn't been there long when he heard thump! thump! thump! as before, and in came the ogre and his wife. "Fee-fi-fo-fum, I
smell the blood of an Englishman," cried out the ogre. "I smell him, wife, I smell him. "Do you, my dearie?" says the ogre's wife.
"Then, if it's that little rogue that stole your gold and the hen that laid the golden eggs he's sure to have got into the oven." And
they both rushed to the oven; But Jack wasn't there, luckily, and the ogre’s wife said, "There you are again with your fee-fi-fo-fum.
Why, of course, it's the boy you caught last night that I've just broiled for your breakfast. How forgetful I am, and how careless you
are not to know the difference between live and dead after all these years. "So the ogre sat down to the breakfast and ate it, but
every now and then he would mutter, "Well, I could have sworn --" and he'd get up and search the larder and the cupboards and
everything, only, luckily, he didn't think of the copper. After breakfast was over, the ogre called out, "Wife, wife, bring me my
golden harp. "So she brought it and put it on the table before him. Then he said, "Sing!" and the golden harp sang most
beautifully. And it went on singing till the ogre fell asleep, and commenced to snore like thunder. Then Jack lifted up the copper lid
very quietly and got down like a mouse and crept on hands and knees till he came to the table, when up he crawled, caught hold
of the golden harp and dashed with it towards the door. But the harp called out quite loud, "Master! Master!" and the ogre woke
up just in time to see Jack running off with his harp. Jack ran as fast as he could, and the ogre came rushing after, and would soon
have caught him, only Jack had a start and dodged him a bit and knew where he was going. When he got to the beanstalk the ogre
was not more than twenty yards away when suddenly he saw Jack disappear like, and when he came to the end of the road he
saw Jack underneath climbing down for dear life. Well, the ogre didn't like trusting himself to such a ladder, and he stood and
waited, so Jack got another start. But just then the harp cried out, "Master! Master!" and the ogre swung himself down onto the
beanstalk, which shook with his weight. Down climbs Jack, and after him climbed the ogre. By this time Jack had climbed down
and climbed down and climbed down till he was very nearly home. So he called out, "Mother! Mother! bring me an ax, bring me
an ax." And his mother came rushing out with the ax in her hand, but when she came to the beanstalk she stood stock still with
fright, for there she saw the ogre with his legs just through the clouds. But Jack jumped down and got hold of the ax and gave a
chop at the beanstalk which cut it half in two. The ogre felt the beanstalk shake and quiver, so he stopped to see what was the
matter. Then Jack gave another chop with the ax, and the beanstalk was cut in two and began to topple over. Then the ogre fell
down and broke his crown, and the beanstalk came toppling after. Then Jack showed his mother his golden harp, and what with
showing that and selling the golden eggs, Jack and his mother became very rich, and he married a great princess, and they lived
happy ever after.
http://www.pitt.edu/~dash/type0328jack.html

Basic Outline
Page 1: Introducing jack and his mother and where they live and how poor they are, then about having to sell
the cow.
Page 2: Jack selling the cow at the market for the magic beans from a strange looking old man.
Page 3: Jack coming home to his mother being angry with him because he sold the cow for beans and she throws
them out of the window.
Page 4: Jack wakes up to there being a massive beanstalk outside his home and his mother looking at it shocked.
Page 5: Jack climbing the stalk and reaching the giants castle at the top.
Page 6: Jack sneaking around the house and he spots the chicken surrounded by golden eggs and the magical
guitar.
Page 7: The giant smelling jack and capturing him in the corner for jack to find he is not very giant.
Page 8: The giant making the deal with jack about giving him the chicken and the guitar in return for his
friendship.
Page 9: Jack climbing down the stalk to be welcomed by his mother with the chicken and the guitar.
Page 10: They all lived happily ever after.

Draft Script
Page 1: Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack who lived with his mother in a cottage house in a village. They were a very
poor family and struggled to afford food and drink.
Page 2: One day Jack and his mother were forced to sell their cow to make enough money for the for that month. So Jack took the
cow to the market to sell. At the market he met a strange looking old man who said that he would trade the cow for the magic beans
he had in a bag. Jack saw the seeds and traded the cow to the man.
Page 3: Later that day he got home and showed his mother the seeds and she was so angry with him she sent him up to his room
with no tea. She then threw the seeds out of the window into the garden.
Page 4: In the morning Jack woke up to his room been strangely darker than normal so he opened his curtains to find a huge pea
stalk which had grown in the garden from the magic seeds. He shouted his mother and ran outside to have a look.
Page 5: Jack begged his mother to let him climb the pea stalk so he could see what was at the top and after some persuading she
finally let him go up. So with that Jack started climbing the bean stalk leaf by leaf until he reached the top to find a huge house
shaped like a pea pod.
Page 6: Jack went into the house and started sneaking round to have a look what he could find. In the corner there was a guitar
leaning up against a wall and a chicken sleeping in its bed. Jack lifted up this chicken to find a golden egg underneath. With that the
chicken let out a loud squeak which was loud enough to wake a giant.
Page 7: Jack suddenly heard footsteps in the room next to him so he grabbed the guitar and the chicken and made a run for it. “Fi Fi
Fo Fum, I smell the blood of an Englishman” Shouted the giant. Jack was sure to be seen. As the giant got closer the shadow
strongly got smaller and smaller. When the giant got to Jack it turned out he was not so giant after all.
Page 8: The not so giant, giant saw Jack with the chicken and the guitar and saw that he looked poor, he then made a deal with
Jack that he could have the chicken and the guitar in return for his friendship. Jack agreed with the not so giant, giant and shook his
hand.
Page 9: Jack climbed back down the pea stalk where his mother was waiting for him at the bottom. “look what I found” he said “we
can be rich.” Jacks mother smiled at him and gave him a big hug.
Page 10: Both the not so giant and Jack and his mother all lived happily ever after. The End

Final Script
Page 1: Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack who lived with his mother in a cottage house in a village. They were a very
poor family and struggled to afford food and drink.
Page 2: One day Jack and his mother were forced to sell their cow to make enough money for the for that month. So Jack took the
cow to the market to sell. At the market he met a strange looking old man who said that he would trade the cow for the magic peas.
Jack took the offer for the cow and set of home.
Page 3: Later that day he got home and showed his mother the peas and she was so angry with him she sent him up to his room
with no tea. She then threw the peas out of the window into the garden.
Page 4: In the morning Jack woke up to his room that was darker than normal so he opened his curtains to find a huge pea stalk
which had grown in the garden from the magic peas. He shouted his mother and ran outside to have a look.
Page 5: Jack begged his mother to let him climb the pea stalk so he could see what was at the top. “No Jack it could be dangerous
up there there could be monsters, creatures or even giants.” After some persuading she finally let him go up. So with that Jack
started climbing the pea stalk leaf by leaf until he reached the top to find a huge house shaped like a pea pod.
Page 6: Jack went into the house and started sneaking round to have a look what he could find. In the corner there was a guitar
leaning up against a wall and a chicken sleeping in its bed. Jack lifted up this chicken to find a golden egg underneath. With that the
chicken let out a loud screech.
Page 7: Jack suddenly heard loud footsteps in the room next to him so he grabbed the guitar and the chicken and made a run for it.
There was a huge shadow of a man which filled the walls of the house. “Fi Fi Fo Fum, I smell the blood of an Englishman” Shouted
the figure. Jack was sure to be seen. As the figure got closer the shadow strangely got smaller and smaller. When the figure got to
Jack it turned out he was not so giant after all.
Page 8: The not so giant, giant saw Jack with the chicken and the guitar and saw that he looked poor, he then made a deal with
Jack that he could have the chicken and the guitar in return for his friendship. Jack agreed with the not so giant, giant and shook his
hand.
Page 9: Jack climbed back down the pea stalk where his mother was waiting for him at the bottom. “Look what I found” he said “we
can be rich.” Jacks mother smiled at him and gave him a big hug.
Page 10: Both the not so giant and Jack and his mother all lived happily ever after. The End

Digital Flat Plans
Keep detail
on the wood
Use paint
brush tool for
clouds
Use roterscoping
for the birds
Hand draw the
market stall
then copy but
change the
colour
Jack and
the market
man go
here
Different
formation of
clouds
Each
market
stand
different
Stormy
weather
Use edge of
already
made
house
Make
ploughed field
Keep the same
detail on the
wood around
the frame
Make holes
and rips in
curtains for
added detail
and to show
jack is poor
Lopsided
picture
frame
Use shading on
the stalk for detailUse same
clouds but
different
positions Add more detail on
the walls and
windows
Have jack
looking out
of the
window

Digital Flat Plans
Add detail on
the wardrobe
and use a 3D
effect
Use the
opacity on
the shadow
for more
accuracy
Wooden floor
from previous
images
Have a similar room as the
last page
Jack and the
giant shaking
hands
Jacks
house
Jack
climbing
down the
peastalk
Use peastalk
from
previous
images
Have the sky a
orange and yellow
colour to blend in
well
Have the hills and the house
in black
Use birds
from
previous
pages

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