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Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
Emily Parkes
Shape Task
Shape Task
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like that I have used shading to the image to create shadows and highlights to the elephant to make it look
more eye catching and not just one block of colour. The darker areas on the elephant I blurred a little bit to
make it blend into the main colour more and to make the image look more professional and to add more detail
to the elephant. Overall for my first go I think the outcome was good but once I get use to all the tools and
practise more the image I create will eventually end up looking a lot better and more professional.
For the second image I used a new technique to add a lot more detail onto the image. When creating
highlighted areas I used the colour range tool to select the more highlighted areas on the original image then
added the colour to give the cartoon more definition and makes the cartoon look more professional.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I could do this again I would add a more creative background to make the image look more creative and for it
to be more eye catching and stand out more, instead of having one block colour I would add different colours
like blue at the top for sky and green at the bottom to look like grass. I would also add a bit more detail near
the legs of the elephant to make sure they arenā€™t one block of colour and show that there are actually legs.
I would improve this image by adding a few more shaded just below the nose and around where the head is to
define the head a bit more and to help it stand out more from the original block colour. For the background I
would make sure it isn't just a block colour and add some detail on it to make the cartoon look more
interesting and for it to stand out more.
Rotoscope
Rotoscope
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I really like the facial features on this images because I put a lot of detail and time doing them because I wanted them to be what
stands out on the image. For the hair I used colour range to easily select different shadows and highlighted areas in the hair and
then add different colours to the hair to make them look more realistic. My favourite part of this image is the lips and eyes
because I used bright colours for both of them to make them stand out from the rest of the face and to be very eye catching, and
when I was creating the lips and eyes I made sure I add loads of detail to them to make them the main feature of the image.
What I like about the second rotoscope I created was the hair and the eyes because I spent more time on these sections to make
sure that I put a lot of detail and definition in them because I wanted these features to be what stood and on this image and I feel
like I achieved that. I also like that I have added a little bit more shading around the nose and eye area than my last image because
I wanted to see if it would make a difference and in my opinion I think it makes the nose and eyes a little bit more eye catching
and realistic.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I could do this image again I would make sure the skin tone of here face and neck aren't as grey and I would also make sure her
clothing was a little bit brighter to make the image more eye catching. I would also use the colour range tool on the eye brows to
add some shadows or highlights to make the brows look more realistic and make the image overall look a bit more professional.
For my second image I would improve how much shadows I put onto the clothing because I think if I added a few more shadows
and a few highlighted areas it would make the clothing look less like one block of colour and make It look more realistic. I could
also try and add a few darker and lighter colours onto the face to create shadows and highlighted areas to make the image look
more realistic and it could allow me to also make certain areas of the face stand out and extenuate certain features.
Text Based
Text Based
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
When I was doing this task I really liked experimenting with different ways of making the text look more
interesting and unique. With these text I created them by changing the distance between text, distance
between letters, added an image to the letters and used different shapes to cut out certain parts of the text, I
really liked all of my text because of using these different techniques because it allows you to personalise the
text to how every you want it. For my last text I created I added colour and a drop shadow which I liked a lot
because I think it adds more detail and definition to the text and makes it look more interesting and eye
catching.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I did this task again I would experiment using different fonts to see what different effects I could get because
in my opinion I think this technique can be very helpful for creating magazine covers, CD front covert and lot
more. I would also experiment with different shadows and strokes I could use on the text to make it stand out
more and look more unique.
Comic Book
Comic Book
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
For the first cartoon I created I like the contrast between the colours because it makes the cartoon look more
eye catching and I created this effect by changing the threshold to add definition to areas like the hair and eyes.
Even though this image isn't very colourful and is mostly grey I like it because I feel like it makes the cartoon
more unique and stand out more.
On the second cartoon I like that it is more colourful than the first cartoon because it makes it eye catching. For
this cartoon I made it a little bit more abstract by going onto filter gallery and putting the number of levels and
edge simplicity up high to extenuate the shapes of the original image but I also made sure the image still had
definition on the faces by changing the threshold to make sure there would still be detail on the cartoon.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I could improve my first image I would make it a little bit more realistic by going into filter gallery and making
sure all of the settings weren't too high and I would try and add more definition by changing the threshold to
make pars of the cartoon stand out even more but overall I like the outcome of my first image and wouldnā€™t
change much.
For my second image I would improve how much definition I put onto the cartoon because I feel like it makes
the characters clothes just look like one block colour which I think ruins the effect of the cartoon. I would also
try and make the image a little bit more abstract to make it look very unique and stand out more because I feel
like if it was more abstract it would have put more emphasise on the shapes from the original image.
Photography
Photography
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
On my first image I like that there is a little bit of depth of field so that the image is a lot sharper and clear in
the foreground as the image, I feel like this can make the image more eye catching which would draw peoples
attention into the book. I also like it because it has a lot of different colours which makes the image stand out
and I think the image could be seen in a children's book depending on the storyline.
For the second image I like the contrast between the the different colours and textures and in my opinion by
having different textures and colours can be seen in a children's book to help them learn about different
colours and textures.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I could improve my first image I would make it a little bit brighter so it would make the image stand out a lot
more overall and I think I would also try and make the colours brighter to also be eye catching.
On my second image I would improve the angle I captured the image at to make it a little bit more unique so it
would look more exciting for a childrenā€™s book and I would make sure I edited the image to get rid of the blue
tint and make sure the image has the correct white balance unless I wanted the white balance to be incorrect
to give the image a different effect and emotion.
Illustration
Illustration
Illustration
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
On the first image I drew I liked how I added a few darker areas to add depth to the drawing and make it look
less flat by adding these darker areas it makes sure that the drawing is a bit more interesting. Out of everything
I drew my favourite is the eye because I like how I used a lot of shading to add different shadows and highlights
which adds a lot of detail and it also adds loads of depth and dimension to the drawing and makes it stand out
more and look more professional. I also added shading to the mouth I drew to again add more detail to make
sure it didnā€™t look flat and looked more realistic. Overall in my opinion I think everything I drew looks good and
all of them stand out.
What would you improve if you did it again?
There isnā€™t much I would improve on my drawings apart from adding more shading to my first drawing to make
it more eye catching. On the mouth drawing I would change the way I did the pencil lines when doing the
shading to make the lips look more realistic and also made sure the different colours of shading blended
together and had a gradient between them. There isnā€™t anything I think I could improve that much on my eye
drawing apart from when I was blending the shading to try and avoid getting fingerprints around my work.
Initial Ideas
Mood board of inspiration: Forest
All of these image I have collected of different
forests and cabins are for the scenes where
Hansel and Gretel adventure into the forest and
come across something unusual. So I put image
on this mood board of different house in forest
and doors going into tree trunks to give me some
ideas of the unusual place Hansel and Gretel will
come across.
Mood board of inspiration: Characters
I gathered all of the image of different
characters to give me inspirations of what my
characters can look like but in my book
Hansel and Gretel will be a little bit older.
When I come to creating my characters I can
look back at these image and see what detail
I should add to all of my different characters
to make them all different.
Mood board of inspiration: Text
All of these font can be really good to use as text
for inside the book because they are all bold so
the text will be easy to ready and some of them
are serif texts which would help children follow
the text better and can make reading the book a
lot easier. When I start thinking about the type
of font and style I want it to be in my book I can
refer back to these fonts to give me some
inspiration and maybe use one of these fonts for
all of the text inside my book.
Idea Generation
Idea Generation
Mood board of chosen idea
These are my favourite images
from the previous mood boards
because they all gave me
inspiration for what I want my
illustrations and text to look like
in my book.
Proposal
Dimensions
There will be around 8-10 pages in my book and the size of the book will be 10 x 8 inches
Story Overview
This book is what happens after the original Hansel and Gretel story.
Hansel and Gretel are older (teenagers/young adults) and they still live with there farther next to a forest but they feel
like there is something missing from there lives. One day Hansel and Gretel decide to go adventuring into the forest
near their house and come across and unusual house that is in the side of a large tree trunk, so Hansel and Gretel
explore the house to come across a women inside who they eventual find out is their real mother. Hansel and Gretel
decided to take their mother back home with them so they can all live together again and not have a miserable life.
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Deadline
20th March 2015
Audience
My children's book will be aimed at children around 6-9 so my book will have more illustration than text for children
who are learning how to read. The gender I will be targeting will be both male and female because the two main
characters (Hansel and Gretel) are male and female so they will appeal to both genders and someone children might
look up to. I would like the book to be targeted at most English speaking countries and Germany because the original
Hansel and Gretel is a popular fairy tale of German origin but it will be mostly target for people in Britain where the
book would be published.
Production Methods
The method I am mainly going to be using is rotoscope because I feel like thatā€™s what I am best at and will make my
work look unique and eye catching, but I will also use a few other techniques like the comic book effect for features
like part of the background or I will do some drawings to illustrate the book. From looking at loads of different image
when I was doing my mood board it showed me a few different styles I can create my illustrations and I feel like thee
methods will be best and the most effective because I will be able to add a lot of detail with these techniques and in
my opinion I feel like these techniques Iā€™m the strongest at compared to the other techniques.
What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
I think it is a good idea to aim the book at both girls
and boys due to the main characters being so.
I also think it is a good idea that you decided to
allow your book a possibility at being in the German
language as the story was based/from there
I think in the story you should include appropriate
obstacles that Hansel and Gretel must overcome in
order to have a ā€˜happy endingā€™ to make it more
interesting for the reader
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
I like the detail you have added for your audience to
make it appropriate for their reading age because if
it was too difficult for them to read they probably
would give up on it
You could maybe consider modernising the story
even more by having the characters dress more
like how children would dress in modern times to
make the characters seem more relatable.
What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
I like your idea of making the story onward from the
original and I think this will work really well. I think
your story is well thought out and relevant.
Maybe go into further detail about your story about
the characters and who is involved I in the book.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
You have some really good points in your diagrams
which really help to understand what your story is
about. Your mood board is also good and uses
some good images.
Add some more detail into your points on your
diagram to help with planning and make another
mood board of how the original story looked and
how you could interpret this into your own story.
What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
I like the idea of the story as it promotes
compassion for small children.
I feel that you have picked a good age range for
this story is it is a little bit more advanced than the
first story, it is also a much nicer version.
I feel that an area of the proposal that could use
some work is the dimension bit, you could talk
about why you want to use these dimensions and
number of pages.
Something else which you could improve in the
proposal is that you could include what social
category or categories that you are aiming the story
at.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
These are all very strong ideas with a lot of detail
included to back up the pictures and texts that you
have included in your mood boards.
I also like the texts that you have chosen as they
are very easy for children to read and look good
too.
Something that you could improve upon is possibly
the amount of detail in your final mind map as it is
quite basic at the moment.
Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Most of the feedback I got shows that the storyline for the childrenā€™s book can turn out to be very good and that I
have thought a lot about what I want the story to be like. It also shows that there is a few improvements I could
make to make sure that the children's book can be even better.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I agree with that the storyline for my children book is a good idea and can work really well. Most of them said it
could be good to add more detail into some of my proposal so I agree that areas of my proposal aren't as strong
as other areas and I could into more depth.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
I disagree that my story should be modernised because I wanted to keep it traditional so that it can bring in an
audience that use to like the original book but overall I am happy with the feedback and agree with most of it and
can be very useful.
Original Script
http://www.worldoftales.com/fairy_tales/Brothers_Grimm/Margaret_Hunt/Hansel_and_Grethe
l.html
HARD by a great forest dwelt a poor wood-cutter with his wife and his two children. The boy was called Hansel and the girl Grethel.
He had little to bite and to break, and once when great scarcity fell on the land, he could no longer procure daily bread. Now when
he thought over this by night in his bed, and tossed about in his anxiety, he groaned and said to his wife, "What is to become of us?
How are we to feed our poor children, when we no longer have anything even for ourselves?" "I'll tell you what, husband," answered
the woman, "Early to-morrow morning we will take the children out into the forest to where it is the thickest, there we will light a fire
for them, and give each of them one piece of bread more, and then we will go to our work and leave them alone. They will not find
the way home again, and we shall be rid of them." "No, wife," said the man, "I will not do that; how can I bear to leave my children
alone in the forest? the wild animals would soon come and tear them to pieces." "O, thou fool!" said she, "Then we must all four die
of hunger, thou mayest as well plane the planks for our coffins," and she left him no peace until he consented. "But I feel very sorry
for the poor children, all the same," said the man.
The two children had also not been able to sleep for hunger, and had heard what their step-mother had said to their father. Grethel
wept bitter tears, and said to Hansel, "Now all is over with us." "Be quiet, Grethel," said Hansel, "do not distress thyself, I will soon
find a way to help us." And when the old folks had fallen asleep, he got up, put on his little coat, opened the door below, and crept
outside. The moon shone brightly, and the white pebbles which lay in front of the house glittered like real silver pennies. Hansel
stooped and put as many of them in the little pocket of his coat as he could possibly get in. Then he went back and said to Grethel,
"Be comforted, dear little sister, and sleep in peace, God will not forsake us," and he lay down again in his bed. When day dawned,
but before the sun had risen, the woman came and awoke the two children, saying, "Get up, you sluggards! we are going into the
forest to fetch wood." She gave each a little piece of bread, and said, "There is something for your dinner, but do not eat it up before
then, for you will get nothing else." Grethel took the bread under her apron, as Hansel had the stones in his pocket. Then they all set
out together on the way to the forest. When they had walked a short time, Hansel stood still and peeped back at the house, and did
so again and again. His father said, "Hansel, what art thou looking at there and staying behind for? Mind what thou art about, and do
not forget how to use thy legs." "Ah, father," said Hansel, "I am looking at my little white cat, which is sitting up on the roof, and
wants to say good-bye to me." The wife said, "Fool, that is not thy little cat, that is the morning sun which is shining on the
chimneys." Hansel, however, had not been looking back at the cat, but had been constantly throwing one of the white pebble-stones
out of his pocket on the road.
When they had reached the middle of the forest, the father said, "Now, children, pile up some wood, and I will light a fire
that you may not be cold." Hansel and Grethel gathered brushwood together, as high as a little hill. The brushwood was
lighted, and when the flames were burning very high the woman said, "Now, children, lay yourselves down by the fire and
rest, we will go into the forest and cut some wood. When we have done, we will come back and fetch you away."
Hansel and Grethel sat by the fire, and when noon came, each ate a little piece of bread, and as they heard the strokes of
the wood-axe they believed that their father was near. It was, however, not the axe, it was a branch which he had fastened
to a withered tree which the wind was blowing backwards and forwards. And as they had been sitting such a long time,
their eyes shut with fatigue, and they fell fast asleep. When at last they awoke, it was already dark night. Grethel began to
cry and said, "How are we to get out of the forest now?" But Hansel comforted her and said, "Just wait a little, until the
moon has risen, and then we will soon find the way." And when the full moon had risen, Hansel took his little sister by the
hand, and followed the pebbles which shone like newly-coined silver pieces, and showed them the way.
They walked the whole night long, and by break of day came once more to their father's house. They knocked at the door,
and when the woman opened it and saw that it was Hansel and Grethel, she said, "You naughty children, why have you
slept so long in the forest? we thought you were never coming back at all!" The father, however, rejoiced, for it had cut him
to the heart to leave them behind alone.
Not long afterwards, there was once more great scarcity in all parts, and the children heard their mother saying at night to
their father, "Everything is eaten again, we have one half loaf left, and after that there is an end. The children must go, we
will take them farther into the wood, so that they will not find their way out again; there is no other means of saving
ourselves!" The man's heart was heavy, and he thought "it would be better for thee to share the last mouthful with thy
children." The woman, however, would listen to nothing that he had to say, but scolded and reproached him. He who says A
must say B, likewise, and as he had yielded the first time, he had to do so a second time also.
The children were, however, still awake and had heard the conversation. When the old folks were asleep, Hansel again got
up, and wanted to go out and pick up pebbles, but the woman had locked the door, and Hansel could not get out.
Nevertheless he comforted his little sister, and said, "Do not cry, Grethel, go to sleep quietly, the good God will help us.ā€
Early in the morning came the woman, and took the children out of their beds. Their bit of bread was given to them, but it
was still smaller than the time before. On the way into the forest Hansel crumbled his in his pocket, and often stood still and
threw a morsel on the ground. "Hansel, why dost thou stop and look round?" said the father, "go on." "I am looking back at
my little pigeon which is sitting on the roof, and wants to say good-bye to me," answered Hansel. "Simpleton!" said the
woman, "that is not thy little pigeon, that is the morning sun that is shining on the chimney." Hansel, however, little by little,
threw all the crumbs on the path.
The woman led the children still deeper into the forest, where they had never in their lives been before. Then a great fire
was again made, and the mother said, "Just sit there, you children, and when you are tired you may sleep a little; we are
going into the forest to cut wood, and in the evening when we are done, we will come and fetch you away." When it was
noon, Grethel shared her piece of bread with Hansel, who had scattered his by the way. Then they fell asleep and evening
came and went, but no one came to the poor children. They did not awake until it was dark night, and Hansel comforted his
little sister and said, "Just wait, Grethel, until the moon rises, and then we shall see the crumbs of bread which I have strewn
about, they will show us our way home again." When the moon came they set out, but they found no crumbs, for the many
thousands of birds which fly about in the woods and fields, had picked them all up. Hansel said to Grethel, "We shall soon
find the way," but they did not find it. They walked the whole night and all the next day too from morning till evening, but
they did not get out of the forest, and were very hungry, for they had nothing to eat but two or three berries, which grew on
the ground. And as they were so weary that their legs would carry them no longer, they lay down beneath a tree and fell
asleep.
It was now three mornings since they had left their father's house. They began to walk again, but they always got deeper into
the forest, and if help did not come soon, they must die of hunger and weariness. When it was mid-day, they saw a beautiful
snow-white bird sitting on a bough, which sang so delightfully that they stood still and listened to it. And when it had
finished its song, it spread its wings and flew away before them, and they followed it until they reached a little house, on the
roof of which it alighted; and when they came quite up to little house they saw that it was built of bread and covered with
cakes, but that the windows were of clear sugar. "We will set to work on that," said Hansel, "and have a good meal. I will eat
a bit of the roof, and thou, Grethel, canst eat some of the window, it will taste sweet." Hansel reached up above, and broke
off a little of the roof to try how it tasted, and Grethel leant against the window and nibbled at the panes. Then a soft voice
cried from the room,
"Nibble, nibble, gnaw,
Who is nibbling at my little house?" The children answered,
"The wind, the wind,
The heaven-born wind,"
and went on eating without disturbing themselves. Hansel, who thought the roof tasted very nice, tore down a great piece of
it, and Grethel pushed out the whole of one round window-pane, sat down, and enjoyed herself with it. Suddenly the door
opened, and a very, very old woman, who supported herself on crutches, came creeping out. Hansel and Grethel were so
terribly frightened that they let fall what they had in their hands. The old woman, however, nodded her head, and said, "Oh,
you dear children, who has brought you here? Do come in, and stay with me. No harm shall happen to you." She took them
both by the hand, and led them into her little house. Then good food was set before them, milk and pancakes, with sugar,
apples, and nuts. Afterwards two pretty little beds were covered with clean white linen, and Hansel and Grethel lay down in
The old woman had only pretended to be so kind; she was in reality a wicked witch, who lay in wait for children, and had
only built the little bread house in order to entice them there. When a child fell into her power, she killed it, cooked and ate
it, and that was a feast day with her. Witches have red eyes, and cannot see far, but they have a keen scent like the beasts,
and are aware when human beings draw near. When Hansel and Grethel came into her neighbourhood, she laughed
maliciously, and said mockingly, "I have them, they shall not escape me again!" Early in the morning before the children
were awake, she was already up, and when she saw both of them sleeping and looking so pretty, with their plump red
cheeks, she muttered to herself, "That will be a dainty mouthful!" Then she seized Hansel with her shrivelled hand, carried
him into a little stable, and shut him in with a grated door. He might scream as he liked, that was of no use. Then she went
to Grethel, shook her till she awoke, and cried, "Get up, lazy thing, fetch some water, and cook something good for thy
brother, he is in the stable outside, and is to be made fat. When he is fat, I will eat him." Grethel began to weep bitterly, but
it was all in vain, she was forced to do what the wicked witch ordered her.
And now the best food was cooked for poor Hansel, but Grethel got nothing but crab-shells. Every morning the woman
crept to the little stable, and cried, "Hansel, stretch out thy finger that I may feel if thou wilt soon be fat." Hansel, however,
stretched out a little bone to her, and the old woman, who had dim eyes, could not see it, and thought it was Hansel's
finger, and was astonished that there was no way of fattening him. When four weeks had gone by, and Hansel still
continued thin, she was seized with impatience and would not wait any longer, "Hola, Grethel," she cried to the girl, "be
active, and bring some water. Let Hansel be fat or lean, to-morrow I will kill him, and cook him." Ah, how the poor little
sister did lament when she had to fetch the water, and how her tears did flow down over her cheeks! "Dear God, do help
us," she cried. "If the wild beasts in the forest had but devoured us, we should at any rate have died together." "Just keep
thy noise to thyself," said the old woman, "all that won't help thee at all."
Early in the morning, Grethel had to go out and hang up the cauldron with the water, and light the fire. "We will bake first,"
said the old woman, "I have already heated the oven, and kneaded the dough." She pushed poor Grethel out to the oven,
from which flames of fire were already darting. "Creep in," said the witch, "and see if it is properly heated, so that we can
shut the bread in." And when once Grethel was inside, she intended to shut the oven and let her bake in it, and then she
would eat her, too. But Grethel saw what she had in her mind, and said, "I do not know how I am to do it; how do you get
in?" "Silly goose," said the old woman. "The door is big enough; just look, I can get in myself!" and she crept up and thrust
her head into the oven. Then Grethel gave her a push that drove her far into it, and shut the iron door, and fastened the
bolt. Oh! then she began to howl quite horribly, but Grethel ran away, and the godless witch was miserably burnt to death.
Grethel, however, ran like lightning to Hansel, opened his little stable, and cried, "Hansel, we are saved! The old witch is
dead!" Then Hansel sprang out like a bird from its cage when the door is opened for it. How they did rejoice and embrace
each other, and dance about and kiss each other! And as they had no longer any need to fear her, they went into the witch's
house, and in every corner there stood chests full of pearls and jewels. "These are far better than pebbles!" said Hansel, and
thrust into his pockets whatever could be got in, and Grethel said, "I, too, will take something home with me," and filled her
pinafore full. "But now we will go away." said Hansel, "that we may get out of the witch's forest."
When they had walked for two hours, they came to a great piece of water. "We cannot get over," said Hansel, "I see no foot-
plank, and no bridge." "And no boat crosses either," answered Grethel, "but a white duck is swimming there; if I ask her, she
will help us over." Then she cried,
"Little duck, little duck, dost thou see,
Hansel and Grethel are waiting for thee?
There's never a plank, or bridge in sight,
Take us across on thy back so white." The duck came to them, and Hansel seated himself on its back, and told his sister to sit
by him. "No," replied Grethel, "that will be too heavy for the little duck; she shall take us across, one after the other." The
good little duck did so, and when they were once safely across and had walked for a short time, the forest seemed to be
more and more familiar to them, and at length they saw from afar their father's house. Then they began to run, rushed into
the parlour, and threw themselves into their father's arms. The man had not known one happy hour since he had left the
children in the forest; the woman, however, was dead. Grethel emptied her pinafore until pearls and precious stones ran
about the room, and Hansel threw one handful after another out of his pocket to add to them. Then all anxiety was at an
end, and they lived together in perfect happiness. My tale is done, there runs a mouse, whosoever catches it, may make
himself a big fur cap out of it.
Hansel and Gretel:
1. Hansel and Gretel live with their father and stepmother and are struggling to
have enough food for everyone because Hansel and Gretel are eating too much
2. The stepmother decides they need to get rid of the children to have enough food
and leave them in the forest
3. Hansel and Gretel come across an unusual house made of sweets where a
women lives
4. The women pretended to be nice to the children so they would come inside and
she could cook them and use them for food
5. They some how both escape and make their way back home and their father is
pleased to see them
Final Script
Page1: There was once a father and his two children Hansel and Gretel, who lived in a field next to a forest. The family
always struggled to have enough food to feed everyone.
Page2: One day Hansel and Gretel went adventuring into the forest beside their house to go and see if they could find some
extra food for the family.
Page3: They walked deeper into the forest following a muddy trail until they found an unusual looking house built in the
side of a very large tree trunk. Hansel reached forward and pushed the door open.
Page4: Hansel entered the house and Gretel slowly followed behind. Both of them start exploring the house.
Page5: While Hansel and Gretel are looking around the unusual house they come across a beautiful woman sat alone in a
room full of pictures of a happy family. Everything looked very familiar to Hansel and Gretel but they couldnā€™t think why.
Page 6: Just before Hansel and Gretel are about to leave and make there way home the woman starts to talk to them both,
ā€œWait, donā€™t go! Do I know you two?ā€
After talking for a while Hansel and Gretel find out that the woman is their real mother.
Page7: They all decide to start walking back home, by once again following the muddy trail, and surprise Hansel and Gretelā€™s
father.
Page8: Once Hansel and Gretel got back home they told their father about everything that had happened and who the
woman was. After many years of being apart Hansel and Gretelā€™s father and mother are finally reunited.
Page9: The family started a farm so they always have enough food for everyone and lived happily ever after.
THE END.
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  • 10. Evaluation What did you like about your image? When I was doing this task I really liked experimenting with different ways of making the text look more interesting and unique. With these text I created them by changing the distance between text, distance between letters, added an image to the letters and used different shapes to cut out certain parts of the text, I really liked all of my text because of using these different techniques because it allows you to personalise the text to how every you want it. For my last text I created I added colour and a drop shadow which I liked a lot because I think it adds more detail and definition to the text and makes it look more interesting and eye catching. What would you improve if you did it again? If I did this task again I would experiment using different fonts to see what different effects I could get because in my opinion I think this technique can be very helpful for creating magazine covers, CD front covert and lot more. I would also experiment with different shadows and strokes I could use on the text to make it stand out more and look more unique.
  • 13. Evaluation What did you like about your image? For the first cartoon I created I like the contrast between the colours because it makes the cartoon look more eye catching and I created this effect by changing the threshold to add definition to areas like the hair and eyes. Even though this image isn't very colourful and is mostly grey I like it because I feel like it makes the cartoon more unique and stand out more. On the second cartoon I like that it is more colourful than the first cartoon because it makes it eye catching. For this cartoon I made it a little bit more abstract by going onto filter gallery and putting the number of levels and edge simplicity up high to extenuate the shapes of the original image but I also made sure the image still had definition on the faces by changing the threshold to make sure there would still be detail on the cartoon. What would you improve if you did it again? If I could improve my first image I would make it a little bit more realistic by going into filter gallery and making sure all of the settings weren't too high and I would try and add more definition by changing the threshold to make pars of the cartoon stand out even more but overall I like the outcome of my first image and wouldnā€™t change much. For my second image I would improve how much definition I put onto the cartoon because I feel like it makes the characters clothes just look like one block colour which I think ruins the effect of the cartoon. I would also try and make the image a little bit more abstract to make it look very unique and stand out more because I feel like if it was more abstract it would have put more emphasise on the shapes from the original image.
  • 16. Evaluation What did you like about your image? On my first image I like that there is a little bit of depth of field so that the image is a lot sharper and clear in the foreground as the image, I feel like this can make the image more eye catching which would draw peoples attention into the book. I also like it because it has a lot of different colours which makes the image stand out and I think the image could be seen in a children's book depending on the storyline. For the second image I like the contrast between the the different colours and textures and in my opinion by having different textures and colours can be seen in a children's book to help them learn about different colours and textures. What would you improve if you did it again? If I could improve my first image I would make it a little bit brighter so it would make the image stand out a lot more overall and I think I would also try and make the colours brighter to also be eye catching. On my second image I would improve the angle I captured the image at to make it a little bit more unique so it would look more exciting for a childrenā€™s book and I would make sure I edited the image to get rid of the blue tint and make sure the image has the correct white balance unless I wanted the white balance to be incorrect to give the image a different effect and emotion.
  • 20. Evaluation What did you like about your image? On the first image I drew I liked how I added a few darker areas to add depth to the drawing and make it look less flat by adding these darker areas it makes sure that the drawing is a bit more interesting. Out of everything I drew my favourite is the eye because I like how I used a lot of shading to add different shadows and highlights which adds a lot of detail and it also adds loads of depth and dimension to the drawing and makes it stand out more and look more professional. I also added shading to the mouth I drew to again add more detail to make sure it didnā€™t look flat and looked more realistic. Overall in my opinion I think everything I drew looks good and all of them stand out. What would you improve if you did it again? There isnā€™t much I would improve on my drawings apart from adding more shading to my first drawing to make it more eye catching. On the mouth drawing I would change the way I did the pencil lines when doing the shading to make the lips look more realistic and also made sure the different colours of shading blended together and had a gradient between them. There isnā€™t anything I think I could improve that much on my eye drawing apart from when I was blending the shading to try and avoid getting fingerprints around my work.
  • 22. Mood board of inspiration: Forest All of these image I have collected of different forests and cabins are for the scenes where Hansel and Gretel adventure into the forest and come across something unusual. So I put image on this mood board of different house in forest and doors going into tree trunks to give me some ideas of the unusual place Hansel and Gretel will come across.
  • 23. Mood board of inspiration: Characters I gathered all of the image of different characters to give me inspirations of what my characters can look like but in my book Hansel and Gretel will be a little bit older. When I come to creating my characters I can look back at these image and see what detail I should add to all of my different characters to make them all different.
  • 24. Mood board of inspiration: Text All of these font can be really good to use as text for inside the book because they are all bold so the text will be easy to ready and some of them are serif texts which would help children follow the text better and can make reading the book a lot easier. When I start thinking about the type of font and style I want it to be in my book I can refer back to these fonts to give me some inspiration and maybe use one of these fonts for all of the text inside my book.
  • 27. Mood board of chosen idea These are my favourite images from the previous mood boards because they all gave me inspiration for what I want my illustrations and text to look like in my book.
  • 28. Proposal Dimensions There will be around 8-10 pages in my book and the size of the book will be 10 x 8 inches Story Overview This book is what happens after the original Hansel and Gretel story. Hansel and Gretel are older (teenagers/young adults) and they still live with there farther next to a forest but they feel like there is something missing from there lives. One day Hansel and Gretel decide to go adventuring into the forest near their house and come across and unusual house that is in the side of a large tree trunk, so Hansel and Gretel explore the house to come across a women inside who they eventual find out is their real mother. Hansel and Gretel decided to take their mother back home with them so they can all live together again and not have a miserable life. Export Format PDF Advantages: PDF files can compress large image which can reduce a file size and its easy to transfer a PDF file across computers. Disadvantages: The files can be difficult to read on a computer screen and PDF file are only supported by Windows and Mac operating systems meaning they can not be opened on any other systems.
  • 29. Deadline 20th March 2015 Audience My children's book will be aimed at children around 6-9 so my book will have more illustration than text for children who are learning how to read. The gender I will be targeting will be both male and female because the two main characters (Hansel and Gretel) are male and female so they will appeal to both genders and someone children might look up to. I would like the book to be targeted at most English speaking countries and Germany because the original Hansel and Gretel is a popular fairy tale of German origin but it will be mostly target for people in Britain where the book would be published. Production Methods The method I am mainly going to be using is rotoscope because I feel like thatā€™s what I am best at and will make my work look unique and eye catching, but I will also use a few other techniques like the comic book effect for features like part of the background or I will do some drawings to illustrate the book. From looking at loads of different image when I was doing my mood board it showed me a few different styles I can create my illustrations and I feel like thee methods will be best and the most effective because I will be able to add a lot of detail with these techniques and in my opinion I feel like these techniques Iā€™m the strongest at compared to the other techniques.
  • 30. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work? I think it is a good idea to aim the book at both girls and boys due to the main characters being so. I also think it is a good idea that you decided to allow your book a possibility at being in the German language as the story was based/from there I think in the story you should include appropriate obstacles that Hansel and Gretel must overcome in order to have a ā€˜happy endingā€™ to make it more interesting for the reader What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been further developed? I like the detail you have added for your audience to make it appropriate for their reading age because if it was too difficult for them to read they probably would give up on it You could maybe consider modernising the story even more by having the characters dress more like how children would dress in modern times to make the characters seem more relatable.
  • 31. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work? I like your idea of making the story onward from the original and I think this will work really well. I think your story is well thought out and relevant. Maybe go into further detail about your story about the characters and who is involved I in the book. What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been further developed? You have some really good points in your diagrams which really help to understand what your story is about. Your mood board is also good and uses some good images. Add some more detail into your points on your diagram to help with planning and make another mood board of how the original story looked and how you could interpret this into your own story.
  • 32. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work? I like the idea of the story as it promotes compassion for small children. I feel that you have picked a good age range for this story is it is a little bit more advanced than the first story, it is also a much nicer version. I feel that an area of the proposal that could use some work is the dimension bit, you could talk about why you want to use these dimensions and number of pages. Something else which you could improve in the proposal is that you could include what social category or categories that you are aiming the story at. What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been further developed? These are all very strong ideas with a lot of detail included to back up the pictures and texts that you have included in your mood boards. I also like the texts that you have chosen as they are very easy for children to read and look good too. Something that you could improve upon is possibly the amount of detail in your final mind map as it is quite basic at the moment.
  • 33. Feedback Summary Sum up your feedback. Most of the feedback I got shows that the storyline for the childrenā€™s book can turn out to be very good and that I have thought a lot about what I want the story to be like. It also shows that there is a few improvements I could make to make sure that the children's book can be even better. Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why? I agree with that the storyline for my children book is a good idea and can work really well. Most of them said it could be good to add more detail into some of my proposal so I agree that areas of my proposal aren't as strong as other areas and I could into more depth. Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why? I disagree that my story should be modernised because I wanted to keep it traditional so that it can bring in an audience that use to like the original book but overall I am happy with the feedback and agree with most of it and can be very useful.
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  • 37. Original Script http://www.worldoftales.com/fairy_tales/Brothers_Grimm/Margaret_Hunt/Hansel_and_Grethe l.html HARD by a great forest dwelt a poor wood-cutter with his wife and his two children. The boy was called Hansel and the girl Grethel. He had little to bite and to break, and once when great scarcity fell on the land, he could no longer procure daily bread. Now when he thought over this by night in his bed, and tossed about in his anxiety, he groaned and said to his wife, "What is to become of us? How are we to feed our poor children, when we no longer have anything even for ourselves?" "I'll tell you what, husband," answered the woman, "Early to-morrow morning we will take the children out into the forest to where it is the thickest, there we will light a fire for them, and give each of them one piece of bread more, and then we will go to our work and leave them alone. They will not find the way home again, and we shall be rid of them." "No, wife," said the man, "I will not do that; how can I bear to leave my children alone in the forest? the wild animals would soon come and tear them to pieces." "O, thou fool!" said she, "Then we must all four die of hunger, thou mayest as well plane the planks for our coffins," and she left him no peace until he consented. "But I feel very sorry for the poor children, all the same," said the man. The two children had also not been able to sleep for hunger, and had heard what their step-mother had said to their father. Grethel wept bitter tears, and said to Hansel, "Now all is over with us." "Be quiet, Grethel," said Hansel, "do not distress thyself, I will soon find a way to help us." And when the old folks had fallen asleep, he got up, put on his little coat, opened the door below, and crept outside. The moon shone brightly, and the white pebbles which lay in front of the house glittered like real silver pennies. Hansel stooped and put as many of them in the little pocket of his coat as he could possibly get in. Then he went back and said to Grethel, "Be comforted, dear little sister, and sleep in peace, God will not forsake us," and he lay down again in his bed. When day dawned, but before the sun had risen, the woman came and awoke the two children, saying, "Get up, you sluggards! we are going into the forest to fetch wood." She gave each a little piece of bread, and said, "There is something for your dinner, but do not eat it up before then, for you will get nothing else." Grethel took the bread under her apron, as Hansel had the stones in his pocket. Then they all set out together on the way to the forest. When they had walked a short time, Hansel stood still and peeped back at the house, and did so again and again. His father said, "Hansel, what art thou looking at there and staying behind for? Mind what thou art about, and do not forget how to use thy legs." "Ah, father," said Hansel, "I am looking at my little white cat, which is sitting up on the roof, and wants to say good-bye to me." The wife said, "Fool, that is not thy little cat, that is the morning sun which is shining on the chimneys." Hansel, however, had not been looking back at the cat, but had been constantly throwing one of the white pebble-stones out of his pocket on the road.
  • 38. When they had reached the middle of the forest, the father said, "Now, children, pile up some wood, and I will light a fire that you may not be cold." Hansel and Grethel gathered brushwood together, as high as a little hill. The brushwood was lighted, and when the flames were burning very high the woman said, "Now, children, lay yourselves down by the fire and rest, we will go into the forest and cut some wood. When we have done, we will come back and fetch you away." Hansel and Grethel sat by the fire, and when noon came, each ate a little piece of bread, and as they heard the strokes of the wood-axe they believed that their father was near. It was, however, not the axe, it was a branch which he had fastened to a withered tree which the wind was blowing backwards and forwards. And as they had been sitting such a long time, their eyes shut with fatigue, and they fell fast asleep. When at last they awoke, it was already dark night. Grethel began to cry and said, "How are we to get out of the forest now?" But Hansel comforted her and said, "Just wait a little, until the moon has risen, and then we will soon find the way." And when the full moon had risen, Hansel took his little sister by the hand, and followed the pebbles which shone like newly-coined silver pieces, and showed them the way. They walked the whole night long, and by break of day came once more to their father's house. They knocked at the door, and when the woman opened it and saw that it was Hansel and Grethel, she said, "You naughty children, why have you slept so long in the forest? we thought you were never coming back at all!" The father, however, rejoiced, for it had cut him to the heart to leave them behind alone. Not long afterwards, there was once more great scarcity in all parts, and the children heard their mother saying at night to their father, "Everything is eaten again, we have one half loaf left, and after that there is an end. The children must go, we will take them farther into the wood, so that they will not find their way out again; there is no other means of saving ourselves!" The man's heart was heavy, and he thought "it would be better for thee to share the last mouthful with thy children." The woman, however, would listen to nothing that he had to say, but scolded and reproached him. He who says A must say B, likewise, and as he had yielded the first time, he had to do so a second time also. The children were, however, still awake and had heard the conversation. When the old folks were asleep, Hansel again got up, and wanted to go out and pick up pebbles, but the woman had locked the door, and Hansel could not get out. Nevertheless he comforted his little sister, and said, "Do not cry, Grethel, go to sleep quietly, the good God will help us.ā€ Early in the morning came the woman, and took the children out of their beds. Their bit of bread was given to them, but it was still smaller than the time before. On the way into the forest Hansel crumbled his in his pocket, and often stood still and threw a morsel on the ground. "Hansel, why dost thou stop and look round?" said the father, "go on." "I am looking back at my little pigeon which is sitting on the roof, and wants to say good-bye to me," answered Hansel. "Simpleton!" said the woman, "that is not thy little pigeon, that is the morning sun that is shining on the chimney." Hansel, however, little by little, threw all the crumbs on the path.
  • 39. The woman led the children still deeper into the forest, where they had never in their lives been before. Then a great fire was again made, and the mother said, "Just sit there, you children, and when you are tired you may sleep a little; we are going into the forest to cut wood, and in the evening when we are done, we will come and fetch you away." When it was noon, Grethel shared her piece of bread with Hansel, who had scattered his by the way. Then they fell asleep and evening came and went, but no one came to the poor children. They did not awake until it was dark night, and Hansel comforted his little sister and said, "Just wait, Grethel, until the moon rises, and then we shall see the crumbs of bread which I have strewn about, they will show us our way home again." When the moon came they set out, but they found no crumbs, for the many thousands of birds which fly about in the woods and fields, had picked them all up. Hansel said to Grethel, "We shall soon find the way," but they did not find it. They walked the whole night and all the next day too from morning till evening, but they did not get out of the forest, and were very hungry, for they had nothing to eat but two or three berries, which grew on the ground. And as they were so weary that their legs would carry them no longer, they lay down beneath a tree and fell asleep. It was now three mornings since they had left their father's house. They began to walk again, but they always got deeper into the forest, and if help did not come soon, they must die of hunger and weariness. When it was mid-day, they saw a beautiful snow-white bird sitting on a bough, which sang so delightfully that they stood still and listened to it. And when it had finished its song, it spread its wings and flew away before them, and they followed it until they reached a little house, on the roof of which it alighted; and when they came quite up to little house they saw that it was built of bread and covered with cakes, but that the windows were of clear sugar. "We will set to work on that," said Hansel, "and have a good meal. I will eat a bit of the roof, and thou, Grethel, canst eat some of the window, it will taste sweet." Hansel reached up above, and broke off a little of the roof to try how it tasted, and Grethel leant against the window and nibbled at the panes. Then a soft voice cried from the room, "Nibble, nibble, gnaw, Who is nibbling at my little house?" The children answered, "The wind, the wind, The heaven-born wind," and went on eating without disturbing themselves. Hansel, who thought the roof tasted very nice, tore down a great piece of it, and Grethel pushed out the whole of one round window-pane, sat down, and enjoyed herself with it. Suddenly the door opened, and a very, very old woman, who supported herself on crutches, came creeping out. Hansel and Grethel were so terribly frightened that they let fall what they had in their hands. The old woman, however, nodded her head, and said, "Oh, you dear children, who has brought you here? Do come in, and stay with me. No harm shall happen to you." She took them both by the hand, and led them into her little house. Then good food was set before them, milk and pancakes, with sugar, apples, and nuts. Afterwards two pretty little beds were covered with clean white linen, and Hansel and Grethel lay down in
  • 40. The old woman had only pretended to be so kind; she was in reality a wicked witch, who lay in wait for children, and had only built the little bread house in order to entice them there. When a child fell into her power, she killed it, cooked and ate it, and that was a feast day with her. Witches have red eyes, and cannot see far, but they have a keen scent like the beasts, and are aware when human beings draw near. When Hansel and Grethel came into her neighbourhood, she laughed maliciously, and said mockingly, "I have them, they shall not escape me again!" Early in the morning before the children were awake, she was already up, and when she saw both of them sleeping and looking so pretty, with their plump red cheeks, she muttered to herself, "That will be a dainty mouthful!" Then she seized Hansel with her shrivelled hand, carried him into a little stable, and shut him in with a grated door. He might scream as he liked, that was of no use. Then she went to Grethel, shook her till she awoke, and cried, "Get up, lazy thing, fetch some water, and cook something good for thy brother, he is in the stable outside, and is to be made fat. When he is fat, I will eat him." Grethel began to weep bitterly, but it was all in vain, she was forced to do what the wicked witch ordered her. And now the best food was cooked for poor Hansel, but Grethel got nothing but crab-shells. Every morning the woman crept to the little stable, and cried, "Hansel, stretch out thy finger that I may feel if thou wilt soon be fat." Hansel, however, stretched out a little bone to her, and the old woman, who had dim eyes, could not see it, and thought it was Hansel's finger, and was astonished that there was no way of fattening him. When four weeks had gone by, and Hansel still continued thin, she was seized with impatience and would not wait any longer, "Hola, Grethel," she cried to the girl, "be active, and bring some water. Let Hansel be fat or lean, to-morrow I will kill him, and cook him." Ah, how the poor little sister did lament when she had to fetch the water, and how her tears did flow down over her cheeks! "Dear God, do help us," she cried. "If the wild beasts in the forest had but devoured us, we should at any rate have died together." "Just keep thy noise to thyself," said the old woman, "all that won't help thee at all." Early in the morning, Grethel had to go out and hang up the cauldron with the water, and light the fire. "We will bake first," said the old woman, "I have already heated the oven, and kneaded the dough." She pushed poor Grethel out to the oven, from which flames of fire were already darting. "Creep in," said the witch, "and see if it is properly heated, so that we can shut the bread in." And when once Grethel was inside, she intended to shut the oven and let her bake in it, and then she would eat her, too. But Grethel saw what she had in her mind, and said, "I do not know how I am to do it; how do you get in?" "Silly goose," said the old woman. "The door is big enough; just look, I can get in myself!" and she crept up and thrust her head into the oven. Then Grethel gave her a push that drove her far into it, and shut the iron door, and fastened the bolt. Oh! then she began to howl quite horribly, but Grethel ran away, and the godless witch was miserably burnt to death.
  • 41. Grethel, however, ran like lightning to Hansel, opened his little stable, and cried, "Hansel, we are saved! The old witch is dead!" Then Hansel sprang out like a bird from its cage when the door is opened for it. How they did rejoice and embrace each other, and dance about and kiss each other! And as they had no longer any need to fear her, they went into the witch's house, and in every corner there stood chests full of pearls and jewels. "These are far better than pebbles!" said Hansel, and thrust into his pockets whatever could be got in, and Grethel said, "I, too, will take something home with me," and filled her pinafore full. "But now we will go away." said Hansel, "that we may get out of the witch's forest." When they had walked for two hours, they came to a great piece of water. "We cannot get over," said Hansel, "I see no foot- plank, and no bridge." "And no boat crosses either," answered Grethel, "but a white duck is swimming there; if I ask her, she will help us over." Then she cried, "Little duck, little duck, dost thou see, Hansel and Grethel are waiting for thee? There's never a plank, or bridge in sight, Take us across on thy back so white." The duck came to them, and Hansel seated himself on its back, and told his sister to sit by him. "No," replied Grethel, "that will be too heavy for the little duck; she shall take us across, one after the other." The good little duck did so, and when they were once safely across and had walked for a short time, the forest seemed to be more and more familiar to them, and at length they saw from afar their father's house. Then they began to run, rushed into the parlour, and threw themselves into their father's arms. The man had not known one happy hour since he had left the children in the forest; the woman, however, was dead. Grethel emptied her pinafore until pearls and precious stones ran about the room, and Hansel threw one handful after another out of his pocket to add to them. Then all anxiety was at an end, and they lived together in perfect happiness. My tale is done, there runs a mouse, whosoever catches it, may make himself a big fur cap out of it.
  • 42. Hansel and Gretel: 1. Hansel and Gretel live with their father and stepmother and are struggling to have enough food for everyone because Hansel and Gretel are eating too much 2. The stepmother decides they need to get rid of the children to have enough food and leave them in the forest 3. Hansel and Gretel come across an unusual house made of sweets where a women lives 4. The women pretended to be nice to the children so they would come inside and she could cook them and use them for food 5. They some how both escape and make their way back home and their father is pleased to see them
  • 43. Final Script Page1: There was once a father and his two children Hansel and Gretel, who lived in a field next to a forest. The family always struggled to have enough food to feed everyone. Page2: One day Hansel and Gretel went adventuring into the forest beside their house to go and see if they could find some extra food for the family. Page3: They walked deeper into the forest following a muddy trail until they found an unusual looking house built in the side of a very large tree trunk. Hansel reached forward and pushed the door open. Page4: Hansel entered the house and Gretel slowly followed behind. Both of them start exploring the house. Page5: While Hansel and Gretel are looking around the unusual house they come across a beautiful woman sat alone in a room full of pictures of a happy family. Everything looked very familiar to Hansel and Gretel but they couldnā€™t think why. Page 6: Just before Hansel and Gretel are about to leave and make there way home the woman starts to talk to them both, ā€œWait, donā€™t go! Do I know you two?ā€ After talking for a while Hansel and Gretel find out that the woman is their real mother. Page7: They all decide to start walking back home, by once again following the muddy trail, and surprise Hansel and Gretelā€™s father. Page8: Once Hansel and Gretel got back home they told their father about everything that had happened and who the woman was. After many years of being apart Hansel and Gretelā€™s father and mother are finally reunited. Page9: The family started a farm so they always have enough food for everyone and lived happily ever after. THE END.