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The Descriptive Essay

• An Autobiography
• describe your life
• You can use this for your
  classes, applications to
  colleges, or just
  describing your life.
The Autobiography:
Make a Brain storm
How to make a short
autobiography

Just some ideas
Autobiography :
Make a Brain storm

• Think about the major events
  in your life
• Try and quickly write down
  anything in your life that
  might have been important
  for you.
• Try and put then in order by
  time (chronologically)
Autobiography :
                   Make a Brain storm
• For example:
• Family moved to Australia
• Moved to a new area of the city
• Started learning Kung Fu
• Joined a sports (Rugby) club and played
  many games
• Father and I used to hunt together
• Moved to another area of the city
• Entered high school
Autobiography :
  Make a Brain storm
• Began studying subjects that I love very
  much: History, English literature,
  Japanese
• Passed the 5th grade test
• Got my first part-time job
• Went tramping with my class mates in
  the mountains
• Passed the 6th Grade examinations
• Final year of High school I became
  close to many teachers
• Passed the final year examinations
Autobiography :
Make a Brain storm
• Write down five important
  events in your life
• 1.________________
• 2.________________
• 3.________________
• 4.________________
• 5.________________
Which events will be best for the
Autobiography?

1. Something interesting
• Something that shows
   personal development
• Something that shows a
   good character
• Something that shows you
   have an interest in hard
   work and study
What is best?
• The first day I ate Chou Dou fu
• The day first won an online game
• When I meet my new History teacher at
  high school who showed me how
  interesting history can be
• When I had my examinations and I
  learned to work as hard as I could
• When I started working at a part-time
  job and I learnt to make my own money.
  When I learnt that to make money one
  has to work hard.
Autobiography :
    Make a Brain storm
1. Why was this event important?
2. How did you feel about these
   event?
3. How did this event change you?
4. What did you learn from this
   event?
Autobiography :
 Make a Brain storm
• List some ideas next to each
  event/experience you listed


• For example:
• Family moved to Australia
• When I was 6 years old my whole
  family moved to Australia.
Why was this an important event?


• This was such an important
  event in my life, at the time,
  because everything in my life
  changed so much.
• This was an important event in my
  life because I had to make a new
  life, new friends, new school and
  new environment.
2. How did you feel about these events

  • I felt like my world had
    changed
  • I felt excited about moving to
    this new and large country
  • At first I felt afraid and it was
    hard to make friends. But
    after a while I slowly made
    new friends and felt at home.
3. How did each event/experience
     change you?
• I must say that the years I spent
  in Australia changed me a lot. I
  became a much more out
  going and social person.

• I became I person able to live
  an adapt to new situations and
  places.
4.What did you learn from these
    events/experiences?

• I also learned that people are the
  same everywhere and
  everywhere in the world there
  are kind people. For example, I
  easily made many new friends in
  Australia. Most people there
  were kind and friendly.
Continue…
• As I was in a new country, I
  learned that I had to change
  myself and that I had to learn
  to make friends with all kinds
  of people. This I think made
  me a much more open and
  kinder person.
Describe your family
• Remember, try to be interesting?
• Talk about what kinds of things
  your parents taught you. For
  example, how your father taught
  you to be strong and patient.
• How your mother taught you to be
  kind to all people, especially
  people not so fortunate (lucky) as
  you.
Describe the atmosphere in your
  family
• Describe the atmosphere in your
  family (what is your family like)
• For example: My parents are very
  strict to us all. They try to teach us
  to be honest, to work hard and
  respect all people.
• My family is very kind and caring
  family. We love to laugh together
  and enjoy life together. For
  example: _________________
Brothers and sisters
• Talk about what your
  brothers and sisters are
  doing at the moment.
• Just write a few sentences
  about this.
• If you have a close
  relationship to your brother or
  sister that may show good
  character, then maybe
  describe it.
In the final paragraph
• Write about your hopes and dreams for
  the future.
• For example:
• I hope to make my family proud of me
  and enter into a good university. I also
  wish to work hard and prove to myself
  that I am capable of so much. I would
  love to study Zoology (Biology) as I
  believe I have a natural relationship with
  animals. And after university I can go on
  working with animals in Taiwan.
  Something I believe I was born to do.
Structure of Autobiography:
       The introduction:
                     Throughout my life I have learned to
Make a first            be adaptable, dependable and
sentence that is        kind to others.
really interesting   My mother, father and life
                        experiences have taught me
Then write some         these valuable lessons.
background
information
                     I hope to show that I am a person
                        worthy of consideration
                        (for_______ University/ this job)
                        as I am person with the qualities
                        to do my best at _________
Write a thesis          (University/ this job) and show
statement (the          success.
main idea of the
autobiography)
Body paragraph
• For example:
When I was 6 years old my whole family moved to
  Australia. This was such an important event in my
  life, at the time, because everything in my life
  changed so much. At first I felt afraid and it was
  hard to make friends. But after a while I slowly made
  new friends and felt at home. I must say that the
  years I spent in Australia changed me a lot. I
  became an out going and social person. I also
  learned that people are the same everywhere and
  everywhere in the world there are kind people. For
  example, I easily made many new friends in
  Australia. Most people there were kind and friendly.
How many paragraphs do I need
• You need to show many
  points about your past that
  show you are a person ready
  for _____________.
• One major event in your life
  should be an entire
  paragraph.
• How many sentences in a
  paragraph? At least 5
The conclusion:
The final paragraph
•   To sum up,
•   To conclude,
•   By way of conclusion
•   In short,
•   Basically,
The key to speaking about one’s life
• Confident
• Happy
• Express that you really want
  to do in your life
• Show no doubt
• Smile a lot
• Always say “yes” with a smile
The key to speaking about one’s life
• Express why you will do well
  at university
• Express a real interest.
• Show your good character
• Show want you have learnt in
  life
• Explain your dreams and
  plans for the future
Your spirit, hopes and dreams
• You can explain your dreams and
  plans for the future


• This is the most important


• Your past does not always matter;
  there is no need to dwell on a not
  so fortunate past.
• It is about what you want for your
  future
Importance of making a clear goal
•   Everybody needs a goal.
•   This is the key to success.
•   So find one.
•   It does not have to be prefect
•   People like interesting people.
    Interesting and worth while people
    will not judge you. If some people
    do, then they are not worth
    worrying about.

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Descriptive essay autobiography

  • 1. The Descriptive Essay • An Autobiography • describe your life • You can use this for your classes, applications to colleges, or just describing your life.
  • 2. The Autobiography: Make a Brain storm How to make a short autobiography Just some ideas
  • 3. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm • Think about the major events in your life • Try and quickly write down anything in your life that might have been important for you. • Try and put then in order by time (chronologically)
  • 4. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm • For example: • Family moved to Australia • Moved to a new area of the city • Started learning Kung Fu • Joined a sports (Rugby) club and played many games • Father and I used to hunt together • Moved to another area of the city • Entered high school
  • 5. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm • Began studying subjects that I love very much: History, English literature, Japanese • Passed the 5th grade test • Got my first part-time job • Went tramping with my class mates in the mountains • Passed the 6th Grade examinations • Final year of High school I became close to many teachers • Passed the final year examinations
  • 6. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm • Write down five important events in your life • 1.________________ • 2.________________ • 3.________________ • 4.________________ • 5.________________
  • 7. Which events will be best for the Autobiography? 1. Something interesting • Something that shows personal development • Something that shows a good character • Something that shows you have an interest in hard work and study
  • 8. What is best? • The first day I ate Chou Dou fu • The day first won an online game • When I meet my new History teacher at high school who showed me how interesting history can be • When I had my examinations and I learned to work as hard as I could • When I started working at a part-time job and I learnt to make my own money. When I learnt that to make money one has to work hard.
  • 9. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm 1. Why was this event important? 2. How did you feel about these event? 3. How did this event change you? 4. What did you learn from this event?
  • 10. Autobiography : Make a Brain storm • List some ideas next to each event/experience you listed • For example: • Family moved to Australia • When I was 6 years old my whole family moved to Australia.
  • 11. Why was this an important event? • This was such an important event in my life, at the time, because everything in my life changed so much. • This was an important event in my life because I had to make a new life, new friends, new school and new environment.
  • 12. 2. How did you feel about these events • I felt like my world had changed • I felt excited about moving to this new and large country • At first I felt afraid and it was hard to make friends. But after a while I slowly made new friends and felt at home.
  • 13. 3. How did each event/experience change you? • I must say that the years I spent in Australia changed me a lot. I became a much more out going and social person. • I became I person able to live an adapt to new situations and places.
  • 14. 4.What did you learn from these events/experiences? • I also learned that people are the same everywhere and everywhere in the world there are kind people. For example, I easily made many new friends in Australia. Most people there were kind and friendly.
  • 15. Continue… • As I was in a new country, I learned that I had to change myself and that I had to learn to make friends with all kinds of people. This I think made me a much more open and kinder person.
  • 16. Describe your family • Remember, try to be interesting? • Talk about what kinds of things your parents taught you. For example, how your father taught you to be strong and patient. • How your mother taught you to be kind to all people, especially people not so fortunate (lucky) as you.
  • 17. Describe the atmosphere in your family • Describe the atmosphere in your family (what is your family like) • For example: My parents are very strict to us all. They try to teach us to be honest, to work hard and respect all people. • My family is very kind and caring family. We love to laugh together and enjoy life together. For example: _________________
  • 18. Brothers and sisters • Talk about what your brothers and sisters are doing at the moment. • Just write a few sentences about this. • If you have a close relationship to your brother or sister that may show good character, then maybe describe it.
  • 19. In the final paragraph • Write about your hopes and dreams for the future. • For example: • I hope to make my family proud of me and enter into a good university. I also wish to work hard and prove to myself that I am capable of so much. I would love to study Zoology (Biology) as I believe I have a natural relationship with animals. And after university I can go on working with animals in Taiwan. Something I believe I was born to do.
  • 20. Structure of Autobiography: The introduction: Throughout my life I have learned to Make a first be adaptable, dependable and sentence that is kind to others. really interesting My mother, father and life experiences have taught me Then write some these valuable lessons. background information I hope to show that I am a person worthy of consideration (for_______ University/ this job) as I am person with the qualities to do my best at _________ Write a thesis (University/ this job) and show statement (the success. main idea of the autobiography)
  • 21. Body paragraph • For example: When I was 6 years old my whole family moved to Australia. This was such an important event in my life, at the time, because everything in my life changed so much. At first I felt afraid and it was hard to make friends. But after a while I slowly made new friends and felt at home. I must say that the years I spent in Australia changed me a lot. I became an out going and social person. I also learned that people are the same everywhere and everywhere in the world there are kind people. For example, I easily made many new friends in Australia. Most people there were kind and friendly.
  • 22. How many paragraphs do I need • You need to show many points about your past that show you are a person ready for _____________. • One major event in your life should be an entire paragraph. • How many sentences in a paragraph? At least 5
  • 23. The conclusion: The final paragraph • To sum up, • To conclude, • By way of conclusion • In short, • Basically,
  • 24. The key to speaking about one’s life • Confident • Happy • Express that you really want to do in your life • Show no doubt • Smile a lot • Always say “yes” with a smile
  • 25. The key to speaking about one’s life • Express why you will do well at university • Express a real interest. • Show your good character • Show want you have learnt in life • Explain your dreams and plans for the future
  • 26. Your spirit, hopes and dreams • You can explain your dreams and plans for the future • This is the most important • Your past does not always matter; there is no need to dwell on a not so fortunate past. • It is about what you want for your future
  • 27. Importance of making a clear goal • Everybody needs a goal. • This is the key to success. • So find one. • It does not have to be prefect • People like interesting people. Interesting and worth while people will not judge you. If some people do, then they are not worth worrying about.