AAAWWUBBIS
Complex Sentences
What do you notice?
If this were a movie, I’d probably have
to kill off my father in the first scene.
- Paul Acampora, Defining Dulcie (2006)
If…
If

this were a rap song, …
If my life were a country song, …
If my life were a video game, …
If this were a TV show, …
If this were a comedy, …
If this were a reality show, …
If my life were a car, …
If this were a football game, …
“If I Had a Million Dollars”
 by

the Bare Naked Ladies
 YouTube video
AAAWWUBBIS
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lthough
s
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hile

ntil
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ecause
f
ince
AAAWWUBBIS at the beginning of a
sentence requires a comma

sentence

,

sentence

.

= complex sentence
AAAWWUBBIS at the beginning of
a sentence requires a comma +
another sentence

sentence

.

= fragment
What do you notice?
As it drew within a few feet of me, it
opened its mouth.
(Describing a live shark approaching the author.)
- Peter Benchley, Shark Life (2007)
What do you notice?
Although the women’s
faces are shown from
the front, their noses
appear in profile to the
left.
(Describing how Picasso painted people
abstractly.)
- Claire d’Harcourt, Masterpieces Up Close
(2006)
What do you notice?
When you are a kid, you think you are
going to remember everything.
- Esme Raji Codell, Sing a Song of Tuna Fish(2006)
What do you notice?
Before the players begin drills, they
must warm up properly.
- Jeff Savage, Play-by-Play Football (2003)
What do you notice?
If I stand in a room and no one sees
me, it’s like I was never there at all.
- Neal Shusterman, The Schwa Was Here (2006)
What do you notice?
If I stand in a room and no one sees
me, it’s like I was never there at all.
- Neal Shusterman, The Schwa Was Here (2006)
AAAWWUBBIS in the middle of a
sentence does not require a comma

Sentence

sentence

.

= complex sentence
What do you notice?
I would need patience and motivation
because the process is very long and
challenging.
Introductory Phrases also take
AAAWWUBBIS + a comma.

phrase

,

sentence

.

≠ complex sentence
= simple sentence
What do you notice?
After reading twelve pages, she looked
to the end to see how many more
pages there were to go: more than two
hundred.
- E. L. Konigsburg, From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler
(1967)
What do you notice?
Until the sixteenth century, couples
could be married outside a church
and without a priest.
- Claire d’Harcourt, Masterpieces Up Close (2006)
Uncombining Sentences
with AAAWWUBBIS
Because his burden of garbage was
large and precarious, he could not look
down at the path and had to go by the
feel of dirt under his sneakers.
- Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)
Uncombining Sentences
with AAAWWUBBIS
If Rowanne said something
important, something he needed to
know, he didn’t want to miss it.
- Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)
Combining Sentences
with AAAWWUBBIS
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








He ate dinner.
Then he headed out to see Phil.
Phil was at his house.
Hector put on his shirt.
Hector slung the guitar over his shoulder.
The guitar belonged to him.
Hector was surprised at how well he had turned out.
Rowanne was surprised at how well he had turned out.
Combining Sentences
with AAAWWUBBIS
After he ate dinner, he headed out to Phil’s house.
When Hector put on his shirt and slung his guitar over
his shoulder, he and Rowanne were both surprised at
how well he had turned out.
- Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)

Complex sentences: AAAWWUBBIS

  • 1.
  • 2.
    What do younotice? If this were a movie, I’d probably have to kill off my father in the first scene. - Paul Acampora, Defining Dulcie (2006)
  • 3.
    If… If this were arap song, … If my life were a country song, … If my life were a video game, … If this were a TV show, … If this were a comedy, … If this were a reality show, … If my life were a car, … If this were a football game, …
  • 4.
    “If I Hada Million Dollars”  by the Bare Naked Ladies  YouTube video
  • 5.
  • 6.
    AAAWWUBBIS at thebeginning of a sentence requires a comma sentence , sentence . = complex sentence
  • 7.
    AAAWWUBBIS at thebeginning of a sentence requires a comma + another sentence sentence . = fragment
  • 8.
    What do younotice? As it drew within a few feet of me, it opened its mouth. (Describing a live shark approaching the author.) - Peter Benchley, Shark Life (2007)
  • 9.
    What do younotice? Although the women’s faces are shown from the front, their noses appear in profile to the left. (Describing how Picasso painted people abstractly.) - Claire d’Harcourt, Masterpieces Up Close (2006)
  • 10.
    What do younotice? When you are a kid, you think you are going to remember everything. - Esme Raji Codell, Sing a Song of Tuna Fish(2006)
  • 11.
    What do younotice? Before the players begin drills, they must warm up properly. - Jeff Savage, Play-by-Play Football (2003)
  • 12.
    What do younotice? If I stand in a room and no one sees me, it’s like I was never there at all. - Neal Shusterman, The Schwa Was Here (2006)
  • 13.
    What do younotice? If I stand in a room and no one sees me, it’s like I was never there at all. - Neal Shusterman, The Schwa Was Here (2006)
  • 14.
    AAAWWUBBIS in themiddle of a sentence does not require a comma Sentence sentence . = complex sentence
  • 15.
    What do younotice? I would need patience and motivation because the process is very long and challenging.
  • 16.
    Introductory Phrases alsotake AAAWWUBBIS + a comma. phrase , sentence . ≠ complex sentence = simple sentence
  • 17.
    What do younotice? After reading twelve pages, she looked to the end to see how many more pages there were to go: more than two hundred. - E. L. Konigsburg, From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler (1967)
  • 18.
    What do younotice? Until the sixteenth century, couples could be married outside a church and without a priest. - Claire d’Harcourt, Masterpieces Up Close (2006)
  • 19.
    Uncombining Sentences with AAAWWUBBIS Becausehis burden of garbage was large and precarious, he could not look down at the path and had to go by the feel of dirt under his sneakers. - Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)
  • 20.
    Uncombining Sentences with AAAWWUBBIS IfRowanne said something important, something he needed to know, he didn’t want to miss it. - Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)
  • 21.
    Combining Sentences with AAAWWUBBIS         Heate dinner. Then he headed out to see Phil. Phil was at his house. Hector put on his shirt. Hector slung the guitar over his shoulder. The guitar belonged to him. Hector was surprised at how well he had turned out. Rowanne was surprised at how well he had turned out.
  • 22.
    Combining Sentences with AAAWWUBBIS Afterhe ate dinner, he headed out to Phil’s house. When Hector put on his shirt and slung his guitar over his shoulder, he and Rowanne were both surprised at how well he had turned out. - Lynne Rae Perkins, Criss Cross (2005)