   Based on this feedback the only thing I am
    going to change is the placement of the box.
    My audience seems to think that the box is too
    close to her face.
   Because of my audience thinking this I shall
    move it and the text inside of it away from her
    face, to try and make the page more
    appropriate and therefore better for my
    audience.

Audience feedback on the magazine contents

  • 7.
    Based on this feedback the only thing I am going to change is the placement of the box. My audience seems to think that the box is too close to her face.  Because of my audience thinking this I shall move it and the text inside of it away from her face, to try and make the page more appropriate and therefore better for my audience.