The document discusses feedback received on a music video draft from audiences on Facebook. Key points: - Feedback from Facebook helped shape improvements by understanding what audiences liked and disliked. Spinning was considered clichéd so was replaced with better-received lighting scenes. - Comments noted lighting dance scenes worked well so more were added, and a confusing shot at 1:36 was explained better. - While performance compliments were received, some felt the artist should be more fun, so reshoots had him dance and gesture more. - Though Facebook provided good feedback, not all viewers were the target audience, so comments may not have all been useful or appropriate. The received comments were helpful.