This document provides feedback on a draft assignment and targets for improvement. It outlines positives and negatives of the draft, including good camera angles but focusing issues. Audience research found that chase scenes, dark atmospheres, enclosed areas, blood, and stabbings were well-received genres. The targets for the final draft are to clearly indicate the sub-genre, improve mise-en-scene, properly place titles, use a range of shots and angles, make a well-produced title sequence, and employ editing techniques to create effects.