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Assignment 47-Draft 1 Audience
feedback and Targets
Group 9
First Draft Feedback
Positives Negatives
Mise en scene. Bad Language
Some Camera angles were good. Focusing issues
Framing
Slightly Comical
Title placement
Staged
Audience Research Summary
‣Chase scenes.
‣Dark atmosphere.
‣Enclosed area or environment.
‣Blood.
‣Someone being stabbed or killed.
Targets for Final Draft
‣Clear indication of what the sub-genre is.
‣Clear and good Mise en scene.
‣Titles are well placed within the sequence.
‣A range of Camera angles and shots.
‣A well produced title sequence to help gain a good grade.
‣Editing techniques used to create certain effects.
Targets for Final Draft
‣Clear indication of what the sub-genre is.
‣Clear and good Mise en scene.
‣Titles are well placed within the sequence.
‣A range of Camera angles and shots.
‣A well produced title sequence to help gain a good grade.
‣Editing techniques used to create certain effects.

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Assignment 47

  • 1. Assignment 47-Draft 1 Audience feedback and Targets Group 9
  • 3. Positives Negatives Mise en scene. Bad Language Some Camera angles were good. Focusing issues Framing Slightly Comical Title placement Staged
  • 4. Audience Research Summary ‣Chase scenes. ‣Dark atmosphere. ‣Enclosed area or environment. ‣Blood. ‣Someone being stabbed or killed.
  • 5. Targets for Final Draft ‣Clear indication of what the sub-genre is. ‣Clear and good Mise en scene. ‣Titles are well placed within the sequence. ‣A range of Camera angles and shots. ‣A well produced title sequence to help gain a good grade. ‣Editing techniques used to create certain effects.
  • 6. Targets for Final Draft ‣Clear indication of what the sub-genre is. ‣Clear and good Mise en scene. ‣Titles are well placed within the sequence. ‣A range of Camera angles and shots. ‣A well produced title sequence to help gain a good grade. ‣Editing techniques used to create certain effects.