Assignment 27:
Timelines (Draft 4)
Judy Ibelgauptiene
Katia Martins
Leticia Silva
Noor Naoum
Story In 11 Bullet Points
1) Close ups of Katherine’s bedroom to establish the
scene.
2) Katherine is painting her nails while her music is
playing and gets shouted at by her mother to turn it
off.
3) Katherine is putting on her lipstick and in the mirror
Kate is seen but she doesn’t notice her.
4) Katherine is getting dressed to go out.
5) Katherine’s looking in the mirror but doesn’t notice
Kate.
6) Katherine leaves the house to get the bus.
7) While waiting for the bus she notices a girl across the
road, but she disappears when a bus goes by.
8) Katherine waits for the bus but gives up after a while
so she walks.
8) While walking she walks past a girl and hears a whisper
and turns around to see the girl she walked past has
turned into Kate, so she runs.
9) Katherine is followed by Kate however she doesn’t
notice.
10) Katherine walks onto a grass area, she turns around
several times to see Kate getting closer and closer.
11) Katherine starts to panic and closes her eyes, when
she opens them Kate is right in front of her.
Timeline Of Idea
Link to the online timeline:
http://www.timetoast.com/timelines/draft-5
Changes From Timelines
From draft 4 and 5 the timelines stayed the same apart from
very minor changes of the credits being moved around and
the close ups of the bedroom changed slightly.
However since draft 3 the timeline has changed quite a bit as
our idea changed. One difference is that this timeline (Draft 4)
was done digitally on another website, whereas drafts 1 to 3
they were done on paper and/or on powerpoint.
Draft 4 done digitally online on a
website.
Whereas Draft 3 was done on powerpoint.
And whereas Draft 1 was done on paper. We found it useful to plan on
paper and then type it up more detailed.

Ass 27 draft 4

  • 1.
    Assignment 27: Timelines (Draft4) Judy Ibelgauptiene Katia Martins Leticia Silva Noor Naoum
  • 2.
    Story In 11Bullet Points 1) Close ups of Katherine’s bedroom to establish the scene. 2) Katherine is painting her nails while her music is playing and gets shouted at by her mother to turn it off. 3) Katherine is putting on her lipstick and in the mirror Kate is seen but she doesn’t notice her. 4) Katherine is getting dressed to go out. 5) Katherine’s looking in the mirror but doesn’t notice Kate. 6) Katherine leaves the house to get the bus.
  • 3.
    7) While waitingfor the bus she notices a girl across the road, but she disappears when a bus goes by. 8) Katherine waits for the bus but gives up after a while so she walks. 8) While walking she walks past a girl and hears a whisper and turns around to see the girl she walked past has turned into Kate, so she runs. 9) Katherine is followed by Kate however she doesn’t notice. 10) Katherine walks onto a grass area, she turns around several times to see Kate getting closer and closer. 11) Katherine starts to panic and closes her eyes, when she opens them Kate is right in front of her.
  • 4.
    Timeline Of Idea Linkto the online timeline: http://www.timetoast.com/timelines/draft-5
  • 5.
    Changes From Timelines Fromdraft 4 and 5 the timelines stayed the same apart from very minor changes of the credits being moved around and the close ups of the bedroom changed slightly. However since draft 3 the timeline has changed quite a bit as our idea changed. One difference is that this timeline (Draft 4) was done digitally on another website, whereas drafts 1 to 3 they were done on paper and/or on powerpoint.
  • 6.
    Draft 4 donedigitally online on a website. Whereas Draft 3 was done on powerpoint. And whereas Draft 1 was done on paper. We found it useful to plan on paper and then type it up more detailed.