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12. PROMPT
The lessons we take from obstacles that we
encounter can be fundamental to later
success.
Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback or failure. How did it
affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

23. Relative to the context above, write an application essay. Your
application essay must answer the prompt:
The lessons we take from obstacles that we encounter can be
fundamental to later success.
Compose a 300–500-word essay in response to the prompt
given. Make sure to include a good title for your application
essay.
Write a draft (WW3) on a 1 whole sheet of paper. Rubrics
on page 79.

24. Instruction: Get a one-whole sheet of paper
and write the outline of your admission essay.
The lessons we take from obstacles that we
encounter can be fundamental to later
success.

26. DRAFT
(Introduction) Lead in
I believe that humans will always have the ability to rise
above any situation, because life is what you make of it. We
don’t know what life is or why we are in this world; all we
know, all we feel, is that we must protect it anyway we can.
Buddha said it clearly: “Life is suffering.”
The lessons we take from obstacles that we encounter can be fundamental to later success.

27. DRAFT
(Introduction) Thesis Statement
Life is meant to be challenging, and really living
requires consistent work and review. By default, life
is difficult because we must strive to earn happiness
and success.
The lessons we take from obstacles that we encounter can be fundamental to later success.

28. DRAFT
(BODY) Main Points
• Life is fickler than I had imagined
• Live without regrets
• Living life
• Every day is an apology
The lessons we take from obstacles that we encounter can be fundamental to later success.

29. DRAFT
(CONCLUSION) Restatement of the main points
I will forgive and forget, love and inspire, experience and satire, laugh and cry, accomplish and fail, live and die. This
is how I want to live my life, with this optimistic attitude that every day is a second chance
The lessons we take from obstacles that we encounter can be fundamental to later success.