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Changes to production work
Before After
A change which I had to make
during my production work would
be the front cover image as I used a
deodorant can instead of a
microphone and didn’t look
professional so needed to change
this. I needed to do this so the
image looks professional and make
sure it stereo types the sub-genre.
Another change which I needed
to make was the headline size and
positioning, as I had the headline
on the right side of the page and
wasn’t big enough so had to move
it to the centre and make it bigger
so it can be seen. The tool which I
had used was the text tool (T) and
made the text bigger by pressing
CTRL + T then held down SHIFT
and dragged the text bigger.
Before AfterA change which I also needed to make
was the puff promotion positioning, as
I had the puff promotion on the right
side of the page below the sub stories
so needed to move it above the
stories and cover the masthead
slightly. I needed to do this because it
is a good convention to see near the
top of the magazine as the masthead
is the first convention someone sees.
The tool for this was the Move tool
(V).
I needed to change the Drop capital at
the start of the interview because
before it didn’t look professional as well
as not making the interview stand out
at the beginning, therefore I needed to
make the drop capital the Broken
Detroit font as it is the same as the
headline so it stands out and bold at
the beginning of the interview. The tool
for this was the text tool (T).
I needed to add a link at the end of the
interview so the readers can go online
and read the full interview online
because the readers may want to see
the outcome of the interview as well as
seeing reviews on the interview. The
tool for this was the text tool (T) as well
as I needed to type text for the
interview link.
Before After
Finally I needed to change the
background image as it makes the DPS
more appealing and doesn’t have to
much going on for the main image so the
reader doesn’t take their eye of the
interview, as well as changing the
background to the band logo shows
brand identity for the interview.

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Unit 13 - LO4

  • 1.
  • 5. Changes to production work Before After A change which I had to make during my production work would be the front cover image as I used a deodorant can instead of a microphone and didn’t look professional so needed to change this. I needed to do this so the image looks professional and make sure it stereo types the sub-genre. Another change which I needed to make was the headline size and positioning, as I had the headline on the right side of the page and wasn’t big enough so had to move it to the centre and make it bigger so it can be seen. The tool which I had used was the text tool (T) and made the text bigger by pressing CTRL + T then held down SHIFT and dragged the text bigger.
  • 6. Before AfterA change which I also needed to make was the puff promotion positioning, as I had the puff promotion on the right side of the page below the sub stories so needed to move it above the stories and cover the masthead slightly. I needed to do this because it is a good convention to see near the top of the magazine as the masthead is the first convention someone sees. The tool for this was the Move tool (V). I needed to change the Drop capital at the start of the interview because before it didn’t look professional as well as not making the interview stand out at the beginning, therefore I needed to make the drop capital the Broken Detroit font as it is the same as the headline so it stands out and bold at the beginning of the interview. The tool for this was the text tool (T). I needed to add a link at the end of the interview so the readers can go online and read the full interview online because the readers may want to see the outcome of the interview as well as seeing reviews on the interview. The tool for this was the text tool (T) as well as I needed to type text for the interview link.
  • 7. Before After Finally I needed to change the background image as it makes the DPS more appealing and doesn’t have to much going on for the main image so the reader doesn’t take their eye of the interview, as well as changing the background to the band logo shows brand identity for the interview.