The document provides tips for choosing words when writing to create vivid pictures for the reader and bring a story to life. It recommends selecting precise words and strong verbs, avoiding filler words and jargon, finding original phrases, and being concise to engage the reader without unnecessary descriptions or rambling.

1. Word Choice

2. Goal:
To create vivid pictures in the reader's
mind which bring the story to life

3. Things to keep in mind:
• Choose words selectively
• Don't write to impress
• Find an original way to say it
• Be concise

4. Choose Words Selectively
• Try for the most precise word
• Avoid using words like "stuff" and "things"
• Use strong verbs
o Use passive verbs only when necessary

5. Don't Write to Impress
• Avoid using long, incomprehensible words
• Don't overuse your thesaurus!
• Use everyday language
• Avoid jargon and inflated language when
possible
o These are acceptable when used for effect or in
dialogue

6. Find an Original Way to Say it
• Use cliches only for effect
• Aim to make phrases stand out without
removing the reader from the story
• Veer away from "said" when possible

7. Be Concise
• Use adjectives sparingly
• No blocks of descriptions!
• Don't ramble