Four-Square Organization Mack Gipson, Jr. Tutorial and Enrichment Center Gayla S. Keesee, Education Specialist What is your favorite holiday?  Describe what you like to do on this holiday, who you like to be with at that time, and why you enjoy this holiday so much.
Structure of an Essay Introduction Must contain a thesis statement Must catch the reader’s attention Body Paragraphs Provide evidence 3 levels supporting details Conclusion Provides closure Summarizes main points Makes connections
Thesis Statement Thesis sentence  Topic   What the essay is about Controlling idea   Must be provable Hawaii   is the  best  vacation spot. Dress codes   should be   banned . My  favorite   food  is shrimp. May  also reference the three supporting details
Body Paragraphs Supporting Details Level 1: Topic Sentence Controlling sentences name and control the topic  Level 2: Clarifying Sentences Help make the topic clearer—explain  Level 3: Completing sentences Add specific details that explain or describe the topic
From Broad to Specific Animals  (essay level) Dogs  (paragraph level) Poodles  (clarifying) Fifi  (completing)
List holidays Circle top three choices Choose one Brainstorm memories
To begin… Fold your paper into four squares. Darken in the lines. Write your basic thesis statement above the line in the middle to remind you of what you will be proving.
My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving. Now we have to answer the question— Why?   Provide   reasons ,  examples ,  incidents ,  facts/statistics   to support our thesis. Animal level
Feeling of Gratitude Friends and Family Food Basic Thesis Statement ( because ) + the three reasons, examples, facts, or incidents in Box 1 of each section My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving because I enjoy visiting with family and friends, devouring the delicious food, and expressing a feeling of gratitude.  Dog Level My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving.
Alternative words Favorite Prefer Nothing better Crazy about Enjoy  Partial to Desire Food Meal Repast  Cuisine  Menu Dishes  Gratitude   Thanks  Thankfulness  Appreciation  Gratefulness  Family Relatives  Cousins Aunts, uncles  Brothers, sisters Delicious  Tasty Mouth-watering Yummy Appetizing Thesis statement: My favorite holiday is  Thanksgiving.
Topic Sentence: My favorite holiday is  Thanksgiving. First,  Thanksgiving affords me the gift of gathering with friends and family members.  Thanksgiving is  not only  an excellent time to enjoy friends and family members,  but  it is  also  a wonderful time to eat.  Most importantly , I love Thanksgiving because I take time to reflect on my life and express gratitude for my abundance.  In summary , I cannot think of a better holiday than Thanksgiving.
My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving. -relatives -gifts I have—others lack -nature -celebrate on Friday  -visiting -activities -traditional foods -guests’ foods -late night feast Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food Now we need to clarify what we mean by each reason.  In other words,  why/how  are the  family/friends ,  food , and  feeling of gratitude  special? Poodle Level
Paint a picture with words
My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving. -relatives Mother—salt & pepper shakers Grandmother—pitcher  Sister—blue serving dish -gifts I have—others lack Joyful work Abundant food  Shelter of a house Warm clothing -nature Floral arrangements Beauty -celebrate on Friday  25-30 people Sister & family Friends across country -visiting Conversations  Gossip Exchange photos -activities Telling stories Play guitar/piano Sing songs/hymns Games Stroll around neighborhood -traditional foods Turkey, dressing, cranberry sauce, and giblet gravy Vegetables--green bean casserole, turnip greens, lima beans -guests’ foods Pies Cakes Cookies  -late night feast Bread and gravy Tear into pieces, cover w/gravy, heat in microwave Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food FiFi Level Be Specific! Paint a Picture with Words Names, dates, numbers, colors, sensory details, comparisons, vivid verbs
My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving. -relatives Mother—salt & pepper shakers Grandmother—pitcher  Sister—blue serving dish -gifts I have—others lack Joyful work Abundant food  Shelter of a house Warm clothing -nature Floral arrangements Beauty -celebrate on Friday  25-30 people Sister & family Friends across country -visiting Conversations  Gossip Exchange photos -activities Telling stories Play guitar/piano Sing songs/hymns Games Stroll around neighborhood -traditional foods Turkey, dressing, cranberry sauce, and giblet gravy Vegetables--green bean casserole, turnip greens, lima beans -guests’ foods Pies Cakes Cookies  -late night feast Bread and gravy Tear into pieces, cover w/gravy, heat in microwave Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food Connect Paragraphs First Not only…but also Most importantly In summary Connect Ideas Within the Paragraphs Also For example After, late at night, as, final
Topic Sentence: My favorite holiday is  Thanksgiving. First,  Thanksgiving affords me the gift of gathering with friends and family members.  For example,  we always gather on the Friday after Thanksgiving. Thanksgiving is  not only  an excellent time to enjoy friends and family members,  but  it is  also  a wonderful time to eat.  In other words,  I can devour many traditional foods and desserts that are only served at Thanksgiving. Most importantly , I love Thanksgiving because I take time to reflect on my life and express gratitude for my abundance.  Specifically,  I am grateful for my relatives, special gifts I have received, and the beauty of nature. In summary , I cannot think of a better holiday than Thanksgiving.

4 Square Holiday

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    Four-Square Organization MackGipson, Jr. Tutorial and Enrichment Center Gayla S. Keesee, Education Specialist What is your favorite holiday? Describe what you like to do on this holiday, who you like to be with at that time, and why you enjoy this holiday so much.
  • 2.
    Structure of anEssay Introduction Must contain a thesis statement Must catch the reader’s attention Body Paragraphs Provide evidence 3 levels supporting details Conclusion Provides closure Summarizes main points Makes connections
  • 3.
    Thesis Statement Thesissentence Topic What the essay is about Controlling idea Must be provable Hawaii is the best vacation spot. Dress codes should be banned . My favorite food is shrimp. May also reference the three supporting details
  • 4.
    Body Paragraphs SupportingDetails Level 1: Topic Sentence Controlling sentences name and control the topic Level 2: Clarifying Sentences Help make the topic clearer—explain Level 3: Completing sentences Add specific details that explain or describe the topic
  • 5.
    From Broad toSpecific Animals (essay level) Dogs (paragraph level) Poodles (clarifying) Fifi (completing)
  • 6.
    List holidays Circletop three choices Choose one Brainstorm memories
  • 7.
    To begin… Foldyour paper into four squares. Darken in the lines. Write your basic thesis statement above the line in the middle to remind you of what you will be proving.
  • 8.
    My favorite holidayis Thanksgiving. Now we have to answer the question— Why? Provide reasons , examples , incidents , facts/statistics to support our thesis. Animal level
  • 9.
    Feeling of GratitudeFriends and Family Food Basic Thesis Statement ( because ) + the three reasons, examples, facts, or incidents in Box 1 of each section My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving because I enjoy visiting with family and friends, devouring the delicious food, and expressing a feeling of gratitude. Dog Level My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving.
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    Alternative words FavoritePrefer Nothing better Crazy about Enjoy Partial to Desire Food Meal Repast Cuisine Menu Dishes Gratitude Thanks Thankfulness Appreciation Gratefulness Family Relatives Cousins Aunts, uncles Brothers, sisters Delicious Tasty Mouth-watering Yummy Appetizing Thesis statement: My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving.
  • 11.
    Topic Sentence: Myfavorite holiday is Thanksgiving. First, Thanksgiving affords me the gift of gathering with friends and family members. Thanksgiving is not only an excellent time to enjoy friends and family members, but it is also a wonderful time to eat. Most importantly , I love Thanksgiving because I take time to reflect on my life and express gratitude for my abundance. In summary , I cannot think of a better holiday than Thanksgiving.
  • 12.
    My favorite holidayis Thanksgiving. -relatives -gifts I have—others lack -nature -celebrate on Friday -visiting -activities -traditional foods -guests’ foods -late night feast Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food Now we need to clarify what we mean by each reason. In other words, why/how are the family/friends , food , and feeling of gratitude special? Poodle Level
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    Paint a picturewith words
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    My favorite holidayis Thanksgiving. -relatives Mother—salt & pepper shakers Grandmother—pitcher Sister—blue serving dish -gifts I have—others lack Joyful work Abundant food Shelter of a house Warm clothing -nature Floral arrangements Beauty -celebrate on Friday 25-30 people Sister & family Friends across country -visiting Conversations Gossip Exchange photos -activities Telling stories Play guitar/piano Sing songs/hymns Games Stroll around neighborhood -traditional foods Turkey, dressing, cranberry sauce, and giblet gravy Vegetables--green bean casserole, turnip greens, lima beans -guests’ foods Pies Cakes Cookies -late night feast Bread and gravy Tear into pieces, cover w/gravy, heat in microwave Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food FiFi Level Be Specific! Paint a Picture with Words Names, dates, numbers, colors, sensory details, comparisons, vivid verbs
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    My favorite holidayis Thanksgiving. -relatives Mother—salt & pepper shakers Grandmother—pitcher Sister—blue serving dish -gifts I have—others lack Joyful work Abundant food Shelter of a house Warm clothing -nature Floral arrangements Beauty -celebrate on Friday 25-30 people Sister & family Friends across country -visiting Conversations Gossip Exchange photos -activities Telling stories Play guitar/piano Sing songs/hymns Games Stroll around neighborhood -traditional foods Turkey, dressing, cranberry sauce, and giblet gravy Vegetables--green bean casserole, turnip greens, lima beans -guests’ foods Pies Cakes Cookies -late night feast Bread and gravy Tear into pieces, cover w/gravy, heat in microwave Feeling of Gratitude Family & friends Delicious food Connect Paragraphs First Not only…but also Most importantly In summary Connect Ideas Within the Paragraphs Also For example After, late at night, as, final
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    Topic Sentence: Myfavorite holiday is Thanksgiving. First, Thanksgiving affords me the gift of gathering with friends and family members. For example, we always gather on the Friday after Thanksgiving. Thanksgiving is not only an excellent time to enjoy friends and family members, but it is also a wonderful time to eat. In other words, I can devour many traditional foods and desserts that are only served at Thanksgiving. Most importantly , I love Thanksgiving because I take time to reflect on my life and express gratitude for my abundance. Specifically, I am grateful for my relatives, special gifts I have received, and the beauty of nature. In summary , I cannot think of a better holiday than Thanksgiving.