Error correction article becs 2020 key

1. Erroneous: Pioneers of 100% pure wool packaging, as claimed by the company,
believed that a recyclable, biodegradable and environmentally friendly packaging
was possible
Correct: Pioneers of 100% pure wool packaging, as claimed by the company, they
believed that a recyclable, biodegradable and environmentally friendly packaging
was possible
Erroneous: This product fills the need of a responsible alternative for packaging,
and does it with no doubt of its performance
Correct: This product fills the need of a responsible alternative for / to fossil-fuel
based packaging, while maintaining or even improving its performance
Erroneous: The latest new French shoe Company, known because of their
environmental compromise when making their shoes, because of their total back up
to the human and Laboral rights and the fight for an even trade, haven’t made any
scandal against their main principles, up to the date.
Correct: The latest new redundant French shoe Company, known because of for
their environmental compromise commitment when making their shoes, because
of owing to their total back up to the backing / supporting human and Laboral
labour rights and the fight for an even trade for fair trade, haven’t made any
scandal against betrayed their main principles, up to the date so far / hitherto.
Erroneous: It is a well-known fact that the importance of sustainability has highly
increased in our nowadays society
Correct: It is a well-known fact that the importance of sustainability has highly
increased in our nowadays society nowadays
Erroneous: Firstly, they have been awarded with the Fairtrade certificate, what
means they are committed to use natural ingredients to create their ice creams in a
sustainable way
Correct: Firstly, they have been awarded with the Fairtrade certificate, what which
means they are committed to use using natural ingredients to create their ice
creams in a sustainable way
Erroneous: This is exactly what normally Ben & Jerry’s customers try to avoid
Correct: This is exactly what normally normal / regular Ben & Jerry’s customers
try to avoid
Erroneous: For all the mentioned above, it is fair to conclude saying that Ben &
Jerrys has one of the most social- responsible business models on the industry
Correct: For all the mentioned above above-mentioned reasons, it is fair to
conclude by saying that Ben & Jerrys has one of the most social- responsible
socially responsible business models on in/of the industry
Erroneous: it is also true that the company´s values were at their most on its
origin
Correct: it is also true that the company´s values were at their most highest on
at its origin

2. Erroneous: others don´t even use any of these chemicals and instead recommend
the consumer to use the soap as soon as possible as the lack of preservatives
makes it very easy to the product to expire
Correct: others don´t even use any of these chemicals and instead recommend
(that) the consumer use the soap as soon as possible as the lack of preservatives
makes it very easy for the product to expire
Erroneous: Moreover, parabens have a huge impact in the environment
Correct: Moreover, parabens have a huge impact on the environment
Erroneous: By now, you all know that Lush has a full line of products all claimed to
be “handmade”, “fresh”, “natural”, and so on…
Correct: By now, you all know that Lush has a full line of products all claimed
claiming to be “handmade”, “fresh”, “natural”, and so on…
Erroneous: Lush has ensured that the process which they put their shampoos
under, in order to convert them into a solid product, is done without using any type
of chemical
Correct: Lush has ensured that the process which they put their shampoos under
(that) their shampoos undergo, in order to convert them into a solid product, is
done / performed without using any type of chemical
Erroneous: they also have a long way of working on becoming better and
achieving all of their goals and values.
Correct: they also have a long way of working on becoming better and achieving a
long way to go before they achieve all of their goals and values.