2. My Business mail
Dear all customers.
My name is Reiji Yoshida and I am in charge of planning at my company.
I am writing to tell you about event by your company.
This event is advance playing event of my company games.
For more information, please see it on my company homepage.
If you join this event, you can play new game and watch new promotion video.
If you interested this event, please join.
But this event has the capacity to fivethousand people.
How to join is write my company homepage.
If you want to join this event, please contact me by the end of the month.
If you get right to participation, I will return to mail.
Returning to mail to the prize-winner will plan to send 3 month ago.
You don't check getting right to participation for another way.
And my company doesn't resend mail.
Sincerely yours.
3. Bullet points
Don't forget business greeting.
First impression is important.
If you send to customer,
youcan use "Dear Customer"
4. Bullet points
You should think in the eyes of our customers.
Costomer want to know
"how to know about state"
"what to do questions"
So you need to solve them.
5. How grow up do you do your
writing ability.
Reading many business mail writing other
person.
Writing business mail more and more.
Knowing basic form.
Try sending a business e-mail to actually use
the contents studied.
6. Conclusion
I think that customer mail is simple.
That's why, sentence and sentence are very important.
If you send to co-worker, e-mail will be completely
different.
So we need to detect "if and when"